Akira(fanfiction!)
Posted: Thu May 17, 2012 3:52 pm
hey guys I am going to try a new little fanfic and i want to know how you think it is. not sure on rating but i will guess it's around PG to PG-13.
A female brown cat looked up at the falling night, she saw the retreating brown clouds heading to the mountains in the distance. The landscape is drenched in rain from the wake of those clouds, and the air is cold and still. She sighed looking at a mark on her left arm.
She heard a noise behind near a building, her heart beats slowly as she concentrates around for the source of the noise.
"Little kittens shouldn't be out at night by themselves." a voice said from behind her. The cat tensed up ready to dart any direction away from this voice.
"Leave while you still can, Akira." the voice said. Akira looked turned quickly around, but all she could she was darkness. She prepared herself, she smiled to herself.
"Come and get me." she said.
A rustle came from across the street, Akira saw a human run to her with a knife sticking out. She dodged quickly to left and ran as quickly as she could to a side street nearby. "You can't from me, Akira." the human said.
The cat stopped, "No, but I can fight you." she quickly turned around and ran towards the human at incredible speeds even for a cat, she jumped up and front-flipped on the human's head. She turned around in mid-air and got out her dagger. She then landed on a car and threw the dagger to the human. She saw the human block it with the knife, she then jumped off the car and unto the street.
"Not bad, we can use people like you, Akira." the human said, then the hood came off revealing a young women with green eyes. "Cats like you come once in a lifetime." she said, then she ran quickly to Akira.
Akira thought fast then saw a gas pipe, she threw a dagger at the pipe and ran away as quickly as she could, the pipe exploded, blowing up the car nearby. The human took cover behind a SUV, "She's a quick one, but we will catch her." she said.
so how was it?
A female brown cat looked up at the falling night, she saw the retreating brown clouds heading to the mountains in the distance. The landscape is drenched in rain from the wake of those clouds, and the air is cold and still. She sighed looking at a mark on her left arm.
She heard a noise behind near a building, her heart beats slowly as she concentrates around for the source of the noise.
"Little kittens shouldn't be out at night by themselves." a voice said from behind her. The cat tensed up ready to dart any direction away from this voice.
"Leave while you still can, Akira." the voice said. Akira looked turned quickly around, but all she could she was darkness. She prepared herself, she smiled to herself.
"Come and get me." she said.
A rustle came from across the street, Akira saw a human run to her with a knife sticking out. She dodged quickly to left and ran as quickly as she could to a side street nearby. "You can't from me, Akira." the human said.
The cat stopped, "No, but I can fight you." she quickly turned around and ran towards the human at incredible speeds even for a cat, she jumped up and front-flipped on the human's head. She turned around in mid-air and got out her dagger. She then landed on a car and threw the dagger to the human. She saw the human block it with the knife, she then jumped off the car and unto the street.
"Not bad, we can use people like you, Akira." the human said, then the hood came off revealing a young women with green eyes. "Cats like you come once in a lifetime." she said, then she ran quickly to Akira.
Akira thought fast then saw a gas pipe, she threw a dagger at the pipe and ran away as quickly as she could, the pipe exploded, blowing up the car nearby. The human took cover behind a SUV, "She's a quick one, but we will catch her." she said.
so how was it?