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[Webcomic PG-13] Eyesight - Goodbye my little pretty rose

Posted: Wed Apr 11, 2012 3:32 am
by _Stu_
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http://eyesight.thecomicseries.com/

As promised, this is 1X first anniversary, and i wanted to start this new comic. This is supposed to be my first true webcomic, since Eyesight, Layna, Winter and others are fully original and separated from HP. I think is more comfortable for you if i post here the episodes... of course every feedback of any kind is accepted, like 1X. I hope you will like this :D

Almost forgot, i will update on wednesday, only one per week here. Same hour, 3.00 in +6 countries ;)

Re: [Webcomic PG-13] Eyesight - Goodbye my little pretty ros

Posted: Wed Apr 11, 2012 3:34 am
by _Stu_
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Re: [Webcomic PG-13] Eyesight - Goodbye my little pretty ros

Posted: Wed Apr 11, 2012 3:38 am
by valerio
Do penguins sweat? :?
But hey, nice start 8-)

Re: [Webcomic PG-13] Eyesight - Goodbye my little pretty ros

Posted: Wed Apr 11, 2012 8:17 am
by angelusbr
This is going to be interesting. Maybe will see Eyesight adopting Max and how he got his magic eye.

Re: [Webcomic PG-13] Eyesight - Goodbye my little pretty ros

Posted: Wed Apr 11, 2012 9:39 pm
by copper
I am looking forward to this. A lot of stuff should be answered in this. Like the Organization. Won't be so mysterious after this story is done. :)

Re: [Webcomic PG-13] Eyesight - Goodbye my little pretty ros

Posted: Wed Apr 18, 2012 2:07 am
by _Stu_
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Re: [Webcomic PG-13] Eyesight - Goodbye my little pretty ros

Posted: Wed Apr 18, 2012 6:19 am
by angelusbr
another great page. It's nice to learn Eyesight's true name.

Re: [Webcomic PG-13] Eyesight - Goodbye my little pretty ros

Posted: Wed Apr 18, 2012 10:56 pm
by copper
So is he Hirnon, or Garros...?

Um, did you use a different translator or something? The translation is a bit lower in standard than 1x. :?

I like your signature. Very nice.

Re: [Webcomic PG-13] Eyesight - Goodbye my little pretty ros

Posted: Thu Apr 19, 2012 12:01 am
by RandomGeekNamedBrent
copper wrote:So is he Hirnon, or Garros...?
I thought he was Orda.

Re: [Webcomic PG-13] Eyesight - Goodbye my little pretty ros

Posted: Thu Apr 19, 2012 1:51 am
by _Stu_
copper wrote:So is he Hirnon, or Garros...?

Um, did you use a different translator or something? The translation is a bit lower in standard than 1x. :?

I like your signature. Very nice.
He's Orda ^^

The translation actually seemed a bit rough to me too, but i did it in speedrun mode... did you see any mistake? If you see something just tell me and i'll fix'em no problem :D

Re: [Webcomic PG-13] Eyesight - Goodbye my little pretty ros

Posted: Sun Apr 22, 2012 11:53 am
by Luna werewolf
awesome webcomic!

Re: [Webcomic PG-13] Eyesight - Goodbye my little pretty ros

Posted: Wed Apr 25, 2012 2:11 am
by _Stu_
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@Luna and everyone: thanks for your support! ^^ new page

Re: [Webcomic PG-13] Eyesight - Goodbye my little pretty ros

Posted: Wed Apr 25, 2012 2:37 am
by copper
:lol: :lol: Eyesight is the sleepy leader. Now that is funny. Wonder when he got all serious.

Re: [Webcomic PG-13] Eyesight - Goodbye my little pretty ros

Posted: Wed Apr 25, 2012 2:50 am
by RandomGeekNamedBrent
probably after he gets his scar.

Re: [Webcomic PG-13] Eyesight - Goodbye my little pretty ros

Posted: Wed Apr 25, 2012 5:57 am
by angelusbr
RandomGeekNamedBrent wrote:probably after he gets his scar.
and the magic eye.

Re: [Webcomic PG-13] Eyesight - Goodbye my little pretty ros

Posted: Thu Apr 26, 2012 5:11 am
by valerio
Luna werewolf wrote:awesome webcomic!
Awesome is standard, with this author :D

Re: [Webcomic PG-13] Eyesight - Goodbye my little pretty ros

Posted: Wed May 02, 2012 1:35 am
by _Stu_
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valerio wrote:
Luna werewolf wrote:awesome webcomic!
Awesome is standard, with this author :D
I'm flattered ^^ you're overestimating me

Re: [Webcomic PG-13] Eyesight - Goodbye my little pretty ros

Posted: Wed May 02, 2012 5:10 am
by angelusbr
She's pregnant? This won't end well...

Re: [Webcomic PG-13] Eyesight - Goodbye my little pretty ros

Posted: Wed May 02, 2012 6:35 am
by kavviyenta
Doesn't get any less worse on keeping the egg safe either.

Re: [Webcomic PG-13] Eyesight - Goodbye my little pretty ros

Posted: Wed May 02, 2012 7:41 am
by angelusbr
kavviyenta wrote:Doesn't get any less worse on keeping the egg safe either.
My prediction: she dies and so does her child and what killed them is what gives Orda that killer eye and makes him adopt Max.

Re: [Webcomic PG-13] Eyesight - Goodbye my little pretty ros

Posted: Wed May 02, 2012 11:45 am
by RandomGeekNamedBrent
angelusbr wrote:She's pregnant? This won't end well...
yeah, pregnant is not the same as eggs. Does she really need rest? can't Orda take care of the egg every once in a while? or is that too girly for him?

Re: [Webcomic PG-13] Eyesight - Goodbye my little pretty ros

Posted: Wed May 02, 2012 9:42 pm
by copper
Penguin males sit on the egg the same amount as the females. It is so that both can eat. Months on end for each. Happy Feet anyone? :lol:

Ooo, I think Orda inadvertently destroys Layna and the egg in his quest for power for some reason, which is what gives him the eye. 8-)


Orda is lazy, and Layna can't take a break. What a nice couple they make.

Re: [Webcomic PG-13] Eyesight - Goodbye my little pretty ros

Posted: Thu May 03, 2012 1:30 am
by _Stu_
Penguins have a gestation period. 63 days if i remember correctly. Actually i don't know if females need to rest or not... it's just to "umanize" them, not important though.

Re: [Webcomic PG-13] Eyesight - Goodbye my little pretty ros

Posted: Mon May 07, 2012 3:36 am
by _Stu_
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It's not an update but i just wanted to post this material i've prepared for something else later.

Re: [Webcomic PG-13] Eyesight - Goodbye my little pretty ros

Posted: Mon May 07, 2012 3:48 am
by RandomGeekNamedBrent
cute Max. Is that before or after "Fluffy"?
or did your universe split off before that event?

Re: [Webcomic PG-13] Eyesight - Goodbye my little pretty ros

Posted: Mon May 07, 2012 3:52 am
by _Stu_
RandomGeekNamedBrent wrote:cute Max. Is that before or after "Fluffy"?
or did your universe split off before that event?
Theoretically before, but actually that Fluffy thing messed up with my plans :lol: so i think i'll have to change something or justify somehow

Re: [Webcomic PG-13] Eyesight - Goodbye my little pretty ros

Posted: Mon May 07, 2012 8:51 am
by angelusbr
chibi max. :D

Re: [Webcomic PG-13] Eyesight - Goodbye my little pretty ros

Posted: Mon May 07, 2012 10:08 am
by valerio
OMG!
Who cares for continuity?! GIVE US MOAR MAX FLUFFINESS WITH EYESIGHT!!! :D :D

Re: [Webcomic PG-13] Eyesight - Goodbye my little pretty ros

Posted: Mon May 07, 2012 10:45 am
by copper
Very adorable. Max was a cute kitten.

Re: [Webcomic PG-13] Eyesight - Goodbye my little pretty ros

Posted: Wed May 09, 2012 1:56 am
by _Stu_
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Re: [Webcomic PG-13] Eyesight - Goodbye my little pretty ros

Posted: Wed May 09, 2012 11:22 am
by angelusbr
So they're in a zoo??

Re: [Webcomic PG-13] Eyesight - Goodbye my little pretty ros

Posted: Wed May 09, 2012 11:36 am
by _Stu_
*victory fanfare* correct! :D

Re: [Webcomic PG-13] Eyesight - Goodbye my little pretty ros

Posted: Wed May 09, 2012 10:24 pm
by copper
Yay! A Zoo! I want to see Karishad! He is the one who got Eyesight his weird eye, right? :roll:

Orda is going to do something stupid, I bet.

Re: [Webcomic PG-13] Eyesight - Goodbye my little pretty ros

Posted: Thu May 10, 2012 2:27 am
by _Stu_
copper wrote:Yay! A Zoo! I want to see Karishad! He is the one who got Eyesight his weird eye, right? :roll:

Orda is going to do something stupid, I bet.
It's not the same zoo (actually, is an aquarium, but zoos and aquarium are similar so it's correct), but who knows, now that you make me think about it a crossover would be possible :lol: i'll think about it

Re: [Webcomic PG-13] Eyesight - Goodbye my little pretty ros

Posted: Wed May 16, 2012 3:26 am
by _Stu_
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Sorry for the delay but i was trying something weird for colouring

Re: [Webcomic PG-13] Eyesight - Goodbye my little pretty ros

Posted: Wed May 16, 2012 5:58 am
by angelusbr
Something tells me this will backfire...horribly.

Re: [Webcomic PG-13] Eyesight - Goodbye my little pretty ros

Posted: Wed May 16, 2012 10:37 pm
by copper
I bet it looks awesome, whatever happened.... Just don't cross the streams! :roll:

Re: [Webcomic PG-13] Eyesight - Goodbye my little pretty ros

Posted: Wed May 23, 2012 2:29 am
by _Stu_
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Re: [Webcomic PG-13] Eyesight - Goodbye my little pretty ros

Posted: Wed May 23, 2012 6:21 am
by copper
Awww, who is proposing to whom?


This looks like it will be a good show.

Orda looks so happy~ :D

Re: [Webcomic PG-13] Eyesight - Goodbye my little pretty ros

Posted: Wed May 23, 2012 6:38 am
by angelusbr
It'll be a memorable opening.