[Webcomic PG-13] Eyesight - Goodbye my little pretty rose

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ShadowLightning wrote:"...I felt so cold..."
Isn't that normal? I mean, you're a penguin and you live in a cold place after all... :lol:

Okay, okay... bad joke. Sorry...
No joke at all!, It's true!

I think Eyesight was about to point it out "Cold? But, hon, that's...!"
I assume he was about to say "impossible" or "redundant."
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Well, he is called Winter for a reason... I wonder if this Layna was another experiment that went rogue and he had to take care of it... I hope not.
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No, she didn't go Rogue. She is not hanging out with the X-men nor sucking peole memories and abilities through direct physical contact, is she?

Then again, maybe she can do that, but her feathers are on her hand's way, or something.
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Perfect artistic penguins? A Noir mummy dog detective? Winter in a blue hoodie?!

Stuff is going crazy now!
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I like the McGruff wardrobe thief. :D

So we get some more info.... Eyesight is extremely talented in many art mediums.
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Never say never, Orda! With your imagination, everything is possible! Weeee, I can fly!
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Okay, I am not getting the context here.... what am I missing? :|

Also, poor Lana... feeling the effects of Winter.
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copper wrote:Okay, I am not getting the context here.... what am I missing? :|

Also, poor Lana... feeling the effects of Winter.
It's simple: Winter and Eliot Dog (Or is it Mummy Ness?) want to see the zoo's manager in order to get to the penguins. Everything else will be revealed (Or not.) later.
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I meant the crying Lana and the dialogue...
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Watch the last five strips again.
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I took the old dialogue between them to complete it. You're right though, with one page per week, it's difficult to follow the flow...
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"Acting like a chick." Nice attention to detail! XD

Oh, no! The manta-rays are out of the water! The are going to die!
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Hmmm, very suspicious. Very suspicious indeed.... weren't there 2 scientists in the beginning?

Those rays need to be careful not to fall down! I doubt they would ever be able to get up again.... come to think of it, how did they even get there!? :?

Was that supposed to be a wink?
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copper wrote:Those rays need to be careful not to fall down! I doubt they would ever be able to get up again.... come to think of it, how did they even get there!? :?
cartoon biology :lol:
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the effect is cool, though I'd have to say that no furred or feathered being sweats through the skin.
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If you're referring to the last panel, he's not sweating, just water. The sweat effect i usually give is just the drop, but it's just a figurative effect
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Huh... are you trying to put yourself into the story now Stu? :roll:

Well, the penguins are about to pass out from the heat. :lol:
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_Stu_ wrote:If you're referring to the last panel, he's not sweating, just water. The sweat effect i usually give is just the drop, but it's just a figurative effect
He is mostly referring to the penguins on the first panel, I believe. Though they are probably super different from normal penguins anyway.
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Well...NOW things get interesting! :shock:
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Diablos... somehow that name just gives me chills just reading it... Interesting indeed...
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Poor guys. They can't get themselves some girlfriends =(
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Wait... how did Penguins get to Alaska? That is the entire World away from their natural habitat... for the most part anyway.

They cannot reproduce, live in the tropics, and are red.... radioactive maybe too? :shock:

Research subjects perhaps? Why are they here if so rare?
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copper wrote:Wait... how did Penguins get to Alaska? That is the entire World away from their natural habitat... for the most part anyway.

They cannot reproduce, live in the tropics, and are red.... radioactive maybe too? :shock:

Research subjects perhaps? Why are they here if so rare?
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And how did they get to Alaska in the first place?
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ShadowLightning wrote:Diablos... somehow that name just gives me chills just reading it...
That's Spanish for "devils." Unless it's based on that Blizzard Entertainment video game franchise?
copper wrote:And how did they get to Alaska in the first place?
The zookeeper said they are a NEW breed of penguin BORN in Alaska. Nuclear radiation actually makes mutants in Housepets!, it seems.
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copper wrote:And how did they get to Alaska in the first place?
As i said, they're newborn there ;) since they're totally invented
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so a breed of penguin spontaneously developed in Alaske without parents?

Cu is wondering how the parent penguins ended up in Alaska when their natural habitat is in Antarctica. were they brought there by a zoo or something?
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Silly Zealot wrote:Nuclear radiation actually makes mutants in Housepets!, it seems.
Now we need to wait for appearance of The X-PETS
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RandomGeekNamedBrent wrote:so a breed of penguin spontaneously developed in Alaske without parents?

Cu is wondering how the parent penguins ended up in Alaska when their natural habitat is in Antarctica. were they brought there by a zoo or something?
I didn't specified... it can be anything you want. They emigrated there for some reason, they were brought there for some other reason, anything

I wrote "Alaska" without even think about it, since it's not the actual point... it could be any other place
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Guys don't you see since they can't reproduce on their own the zoo manager is going to ask eyesight to let them mate with his girlfriend since she is the only female penguin at the zoo. or not
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I think it meant neither male nor female could reproduce, like hybrid animals. this is all there is, and all there ever will be.
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RandomGeekNamedBrent wrote:I think it meant neither male nor female could reproduce, like hybrid animals. this is all there is, and all there ever will be.
Yes, that's what Stu was trying to say. Though I wonder something:
What did this mutant penguins originally mutated from?
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@Zealot: normal penguins, no specific kind in particular. Emperors maybe.
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Awww, not Macaroni Penguins!?

So now you have an entire clan of penguins having to accept new guys like that? Sounds like a powder keg to me...
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