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Re: Scratch's Fan Comics

Posted: Wed Jun 13, 2012 11:21 am
by Scratch
JohnWillow wrote:I'm loving the comic Scratch, you have a good grasp on Rick's style of comedy. I am interested to know who Fox was talking about to his squeaky bone, i hope that answer comes soon. The only critic i can possibly offer is that i think Fox looks a bit feminine and ironically Grape looks Butch
Glad to hear you like it!

Fox was actually talking to his squeaky bone in that comic and as for him and grape looking weird I'm still kind of trying to figure out how to draw them. so if a character looks "off" it's safe to assume that I couldn't get them to look quite right. I'm still trying to figure out how to draw each character in a way that they look similar to how they look in the real comic without completely mooching off of Rick's style. (I'll admit I do that from time to time)

now that I think of it isn't grape kinda butch in the comic though? correct me if I'm wrong but isn't there a story arc with her trying to be more feminine? I do know that Peanut thought she was a guy in the beginning.

also update coming soon...hopefully...

Re: Scratch's Fan Comics

Posted: Mon Jun 18, 2012 6:46 pm
by Scratch
Yay! Update!
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Gee-willikers! The last panel of this comic was driving me crazy! I could not for the life of me get Pete to look right. I had literally redrawn him 20 times or more before I finally got him to look mostly how I wanted him. Even though I haven't updated my comic in a while doesn't mean I haven't been busy. Head on over to Jeffcvt's fan comic thread herehttp://www.housepetscomic.com/forums/vi ... =13&t=1890 to see his stories as well as a little somethin' somethin' that he asked me to do for him.

Re: Scratch's Fan Comics

Posted: Mon Jun 18, 2012 7:58 pm
by sean21
why is it blue? O.o

Re: Scratch's Fan Comics

Posted: Mon Jun 18, 2012 9:42 pm
by copper
Dude, awesome. Very funny! Cannot wait to see what happens next!

Pete looks alright to me... :)

Re: Scratch's Fan Comics

Posted: Tue Jun 19, 2012 11:42 am
by Karl
I like sun the most.

Re: Scratch's Fan Comics

Posted: Tue Jun 19, 2012 12:43 pm
by valerio
YAY, update! :D
Aw, poor Kingy! :cry:

Re: Scratch's Fan Comics

Posted: Thu Jun 21, 2012 1:42 pm
by Scratch
sean21 wrote:why is it blue? O.o
When I upload these on my computer I take a picture with a camera first and then crop out the extra stuff. It's blue because of the lighting when I took the picture.
Karlos wrote:I like sun the most
Thanks for noticing ;)

Re: Scratch's Fan Comics

Posted: Fri Jul 06, 2012 4:36 pm
by Scratch
yay an update! oh how I envy Ricks ability to update 3 times a week, while I update once every 3 weeks. :(

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Re: Scratch's Fan Comics

Posted: Fri Jul 06, 2012 4:46 pm
by JeffCvt
A funny comic.

And I like your avatar now too.

Re: Scratch's Fan Comics

Posted: Fri Jul 06, 2012 11:45 pm
by valerio
Pete, it's the Game: OF COURSE you must spell everything out :lol:

Re: Scratch's Fan Comics

Posted: Sat Jul 07, 2012 11:20 pm
by copper
I love how Pete is dangling the soul of Fox so carelessly from a string just to taunt King.

Oh poor King, all this stress must be getting to him.

Re: Scratch's Fan Comics

Posted: Sun Jul 08, 2012 10:55 am
by sean21
nice update

Re: Scratch's Fan Comics

Posted: Tue Jul 17, 2012 4:31 pm
by Scratch
JeffCvt wrote:And I like your avatar now too.
thanks I thought I needed an avatar by now so I used a picture I drew that's kind of related to my fanfic but I won't post the whole picture until it becomes relevant
Valerio wrote:Pete, it's the Game: OF COURSE you must spell everything out
:D I know I make King out to look a little stupid but in this case I think he just doesn't want to agree to anything he doesn't have to.
sean21 wrote:nice update
Nice compliment ;)

and now without further ado...
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copper wrote:Oh poor King, all this stress must be getting to him.
oh you don't even know the kind of stress that's in store for him :twisted: but seriously, this comic is going to get a little dark (but still PG-13!) and really challenge the bonds of friendship, I don't want to spoil anything but lets just say that this is the first of many strips that end on a serious note. Since these strips will either end with dark humor(which I know isn't for everyone) or without a joke, and because I find the subtext idea absolutely genius! I thought I would try a little subtext, or after...text, whatever you know what I mean. anyway here it goes...
"Well I'm definitely not trading you my Charizard!"

Re: Scratch's Fan Comics

Posted: Tue Jul 17, 2012 4:58 pm
by Karl
Hmm... I must say that you surprised me with your declaration about dark humor and seriousness. So far I had a feeling that you were aiming for cartoonism and comedic situations, which so far you were doing pretty well.

Re: Scratch's Fan Comics

Posted: Tue Jul 17, 2012 9:43 pm
by Scratch
Karlos wrote:Hmm... I must say that you surprised me with your declaration about dark humor and seriousness. So far I had a feeling that you were aiming for cartoonism and comedic situations, which so far you were doing pretty well.
I may have worded that wrong. What I meant is that the story is going to have it's serious moments and I'm not really going to soften them up that much because, well, The reader needs to feel what the characters are feeling. Pete will use dark humor at times because, lets face it, Pete's a jerk. Nevertheless this is still a story that takes place in the house pets universe so I will keep it true to the kind of humor Rick uses so don't worry about the story ending like The Departed or anything. ;)

ps. thank you saying I'm doing a good job, and not just you but everyone who comments you guys have been awesome and patient with me, so thanks.
(whoa, Drama Bomb!!!) speaking of drama bombs, this part of my fanfic reminds me of an episode of adventure time.(yes I watch this show and I ain't ashamed!) here's a few clips
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k84GYej4 ... ure=g-vrec
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kNb0QTdS ... ws&list=SL

Re: Scratch's Fan Comics

Posted: Tue Jul 17, 2012 10:19 pm
by copper
A new update! Nice!

An even trade? Since when does Pete make fair trades? I am suspicious. :|

Re: Scratch's Fan Comics

Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2012 12:20 am
by valerio
The trade is a fraud. Souls are not meant to be owned but by those born with it, and even then they are kept in strict custody in heaven. King can't trade his soul for Fox's, unless that soul is immediately returned to heaven or given to Fox.
But...is there really ANY soul to trade? All King is seeing is a pretty watch. I find it quite hard to believe that Pete could actually steal ANOTHER soul, not after getting caught & mauled by Cerberus for grabbing one.

Re: Scratch's Fan Comics

Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2012 10:04 am
by sean21
hey did anyone else notice the picture frame changing

lol i love that

Re: Scratch's Fan Comics

Posted: Thu Jul 19, 2012 2:39 pm
by Scratch
Whoa!!! another update! So soon! this calls for a party, woo!

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Re: Scratch's Fan Comics

Posted: Thu Jul 19, 2012 2:42 pm
by JeffCvt
Don't trust him King!
He simply got the watch at a thrift store!

Re: Scratch's Fan Comics

Posted: Thu Jul 19, 2012 2:45 pm
by valerio
King...Break the 4th wall and read my comment! It's an effing trap!
(I forgive you this moment of weakness due to nice retracing of Fox)

Re: Scratch's Fan Comics

Posted: Fri Jul 20, 2012 5:11 pm
by justacritic
It'll get worse under Pete's influence King, you're doomed either way unless you have a shovel handy...

Re: Scratch's Fan Comics

Posted: Mon Jul 23, 2012 1:21 am
by copper
Oh no. King is falling for it. Why must you care so much, oh Dark Paladin! :?

Re: Scratch's Fan Comics

Posted: Thu Jul 26, 2012 1:58 pm
by Scratch
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What will happen to King? Will he submit to Pete's bargain? Or will he doom his one and only friend to a fate unimaginable?
Unfortunately those questions will not be answered in this strip.

Re: Scratch's Fan Comics

Posted: Thu Jul 26, 2012 2:02 pm
by JeffCvt
Scum freezebag?
Wrong house? Again?

I can't wait to see these guys some more. They are already making me laugh so hard.

Re: Scratch's Fan Comics

Posted: Thu Jul 26, 2012 3:38 pm
by valerio
I'm already so totally their fan! :D :D :D

Re: Scratch's Fan Comics

Posted: Fri Jul 27, 2012 12:07 am
by copper
I do believe they are after Pete, no?

Well, they are certainly interesting. Should provide a nice surprise element here. :D

Re: Scratch's Fan Comics

Posted: Fri Jul 27, 2012 3:38 am
by _Stu_
They're just amazing Image luv'em

Re: Scratch's Fan Comics

Posted: Fri Jul 27, 2012 8:07 am
by justacritic
This strip is relative to my interests *thumbs up*

Re: Scratch's Fan Comics

Posted: Sat Jul 28, 2012 5:47 am
by sliceofdog
Nobody expects the Spanish Inquisition!
Their chief weapon is surprise. And fear. Fear and surprise. Two, their two main weapons are surprise and fear. And ruthless inefficiency. Three! Their three main weapons are surprise, fear, ruthless inefficiency, and an almost fanatical devotion to freezebags.

Re: Scratch's Fan Comics

Posted: Sat Jul 28, 2012 12:42 pm
by Scratch
sliceofdog wrote:Nobody expects the Spanish Inquisition!
Their chief weapon is surprise. And fear. Fear and surprise. Two, their two main weapons are surprise and fear. And ruthless inefficiency. Three! Their three main weapons are surprise, fear, ruthless inefficiency, and an almost fanatical devotion to freezebags.
"Cardinal! Bring me the Rack...(diabolical laughter)"

Re: Scratch's Fan Comics

Posted: Sat Jul 28, 2012 1:28 pm
by RandomGeekNamedBrent
sliceofdog wrote:Nobody expects the Spanish Inquisition!
Their chief weapon is surprise. And fear. Fear and surprise. Two, their two main weapons are surprise and fear. And ruthless inefficiency. Three! Their three main weapons are surprise, fear, ruthless inefficiency, and an almost fanatical devotion to freezebags.
and nice red uniforms

great comic

Re: Scratch's Fan Comics

Posted: Sun Jul 29, 2012 8:10 pm
by 0404
Little gift for Scratch and y'all
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(why not matrix?? it was best background that I could have come up with...)

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edit,
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Re: Scratch's Fan Comics

Posted: Mon Jul 30, 2012 1:03 pm
by Scratch
texascat018 wrote:Little gift for Scratch and y'all
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(why not matrix?? it was best background that I could have come up with...)

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I like it! I love it! I want some more of it! :D

and so with the introduction of these two knuckleheads we find ourselves at the beginning of chapter 2!
Chapter 2:"King Nothing"
"King has a date with destiny."

"so what does that make us?"

"The Chauffeurs."
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I redid the brother's patterns, I think they look much better now. the colors are white on their underside and lower part of the face. brown on the "mask" part of the their pattern, and then grey on the tops of their heads and down their backs.

Re: Scratch's Fan Comics

Posted: Mon Jul 30, 2012 7:16 pm
by DingoVolf
I'm just starting to touch the surface of the plethora of wonderful HP! fan works on here and gotta say I'm really enjoying your work!

Re: Scratch's Fan Comics

Posted: Mon Jul 30, 2012 9:27 pm
by copper
Nice pic. I love sketch style comics, so of course this is awesome. :D

Re: Scratch's Fan Comics

Posted: Mon Aug 13, 2012 7:20 pm
by Scratch
hey, yo! Update! this was going to be an 8 panel update but I think I kept y'all waiting too long so here ya go
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Re: Scratch's Fan Comics

Posted: Mon Aug 13, 2012 9:20 pm
by JeffCvt
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These guys need some help, don't they?

Re: Scratch's Fan Comics

Posted: Tue Aug 14, 2012 10:30 am
by Scratch
JeffCvt wrote:...
These guys need some help, don't they?
well they would be kind of boring if they were competent :)
but in a nutshell if Ralph and the police dogs are to the movie "The Untouchables" then these two are to the movie "Naked Gun 2 1/2: the smell of fear"

Re: Scratch's Fan Comics

Posted: Tue Aug 14, 2012 11:14 am
by 0404
tat electric Joke :lol: that was shoking