Death of a King(The Remake)
Posted: Thu Sep 15, 2011 10:46 pm
Now, for some who didn't know, a year ago I wrote a story with the idea of, look, King is always acting like no one cares about him. But what would happen if King died, However, thanks to me crossing the line on the themes.
(Curse the fact that the forums don't allow dark stories like mine!) Sadly, they shut down he fic.
But you see, I've rested, I've dabbled here in there with a few fics of mine, and I feel I can resurrect this story but this time keep it safe from the mods wrath. I think with a bit more patience and being careful where I step, I can rewrite the story anew, And yes Copper, it is the same story, just a bit changed to keep the mods happy. However I may make a different version on fan fiction net which will be uncensored, so look for that, okay?.
So here it comes ladies and gents, the return of an idea I love more than anything, and the darkness it will bring,
I EmoPeanut,Servant of the Kizer Zin, Presents you...
Death of a King
Prologue
It hurt. It hurt so much. It felt.... so painful, I could die. Oh wait. I am. I watched as the police finally get him, the killer in time. Of course, by then there is already a casualty... Me. Hey, me dying is worth it, to protect her. She stared at me, that beautiful face. If I was human, I would have said, "Oh god, I'm a furry!" But. I wasn't, not anymore. The snow, it was stained with red. Everything was turning red. Fox ran over, along with Sasha, who screamed for someone to help me. I smiled. It was good to see her care. I turned to Fox, who was staring in horror.
"I.... King, I" He tried to speak but I raised my weak paw. "What day is it?" I whispered, feeling Death approach. Fox teared up a bit. I smiled, for once I was happy.
"Christmas Morning." He said, tears streaming down his face. I smiled, at both Sasha and Fox.
"We met that night Two years ago, right? I guess everything does ends like it begins." I said weakly, Death was getting impatient. Sasha then began crying. I frowned
"Don't lose yourself because of me Sasha, be the happiest you could be, after all thats what I love the most about you." I murmured as finally Death forced me out of my body. Sasha stared, her tears adorned on her face. It was like mirror shattered. I was gone. Then, a single, grief-filled, wail was heard.
Why is she crying? Death asked. I sighed.
"I'm dead, duh." I said bitterly.
But why? Why does she care if your dead? Death asked. Your just a human turned dog I growled.
"She doesn't know that.". I said quickly. Death raised an non-existent eyebrow.
If you don't tell me why she's crying, I won't let you go to the afterlife. Death asked, angering me. I turned in anger, but sighed.
"It all started when Sasha entered the wolves house two months ago, bleeding and crying."
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"It hurts so much.... Help me..." Sasha moaned, Me staring at her broken and abused body.
Who did this? Bino? Some sick dog? Tell me! I had yelled, feeling so relied up, but the answer I got sickened me,
Daddie Then Sasha fainted.
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Death was about to ask me to continue when the police dogs pulled Sasha and Fox away from my body. I growled.
"I'll tell you later." I said, running over to my body, but now that I thought of it, I couldn't stop thinking about what happened two months prior.
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Two Month Prior
"What do you mean I'm under arrest?" A drunken man screamed as he was thrown into a car. The officer growled.
"Animal Abuse, and in this Officer's opinion, hurting the nicest animal in this town!" Officer Johnson yelled at the drunk. Sasha gave nice presents to everyone in the Gardens, and was nice to everyone, so the man was angry,
"That stupid dog never got me any chicks, I had to teach something." The drunk said, falling asleep. Johnson growled and walked away, the man locked in the car.
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I was stroking her paw, since she was nervous. She was in the vets hospital to get her wounds healed.
"Come on Kinggie, I'm fine.... Just tired...." Sasha tried to defend herself but some fell asleep thanks to the medicines. I grinned, and stared at her, hoping the god she'll be okay. Right before I was about to leave she pulled on his fur. Her eyes sparkled. I stared at her, not understanding,
"I love you." Oh God. Did she just say? She then closed her eyes and went back to sleep. I sighed, not realizing those words will affect me in the future,
(Curse the fact that the forums don't allow dark stories like mine!) Sadly, they shut down he fic.
But you see, I've rested, I've dabbled here in there with a few fics of mine, and I feel I can resurrect this story but this time keep it safe from the mods wrath. I think with a bit more patience and being careful where I step, I can rewrite the story anew, And yes Copper, it is the same story, just a bit changed to keep the mods happy. However I may make a different version on fan fiction net which will be uncensored, so look for that, okay?.
So here it comes ladies and gents, the return of an idea I love more than anything, and the darkness it will bring,
I EmoPeanut,Servant of the Kizer Zin, Presents you...
Death of a King
Prologue
It hurt. It hurt so much. It felt.... so painful, I could die. Oh wait. I am. I watched as the police finally get him, the killer in time. Of course, by then there is already a casualty... Me. Hey, me dying is worth it, to protect her. She stared at me, that beautiful face. If I was human, I would have said, "Oh god, I'm a furry!" But. I wasn't, not anymore. The snow, it was stained with red. Everything was turning red. Fox ran over, along with Sasha, who screamed for someone to help me. I smiled. It was good to see her care. I turned to Fox, who was staring in horror.
"I.... King, I" He tried to speak but I raised my weak paw. "What day is it?" I whispered, feeling Death approach. Fox teared up a bit. I smiled, for once I was happy.
"Christmas Morning." He said, tears streaming down his face. I smiled, at both Sasha and Fox.
"We met that night Two years ago, right? I guess everything does ends like it begins." I said weakly, Death was getting impatient. Sasha then began crying. I frowned
"Don't lose yourself because of me Sasha, be the happiest you could be, after all thats what I love the most about you." I murmured as finally Death forced me out of my body. Sasha stared, her tears adorned on her face. It was like mirror shattered. I was gone. Then, a single, grief-filled, wail was heard.
Why is she crying? Death asked. I sighed.
"I'm dead, duh." I said bitterly.
But why? Why does she care if your dead? Death asked. Your just a human turned dog I growled.
"She doesn't know that.". I said quickly. Death raised an non-existent eyebrow.
If you don't tell me why she's crying, I won't let you go to the afterlife. Death asked, angering me. I turned in anger, but sighed.
"It all started when Sasha entered the wolves house two months ago, bleeding and crying."
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"It hurts so much.... Help me..." Sasha moaned, Me staring at her broken and abused body.
Who did this? Bino? Some sick dog? Tell me! I had yelled, feeling so relied up, but the answer I got sickened me,
Daddie Then Sasha fainted.
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Death was about to ask me to continue when the police dogs pulled Sasha and Fox away from my body. I growled.
"I'll tell you later." I said, running over to my body, but now that I thought of it, I couldn't stop thinking about what happened two months prior.
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Two Month Prior
"What do you mean I'm under arrest?" A drunken man screamed as he was thrown into a car. The officer growled.
"Animal Abuse, and in this Officer's opinion, hurting the nicest animal in this town!" Officer Johnson yelled at the drunk. Sasha gave nice presents to everyone in the Gardens, and was nice to everyone, so the man was angry,
"That stupid dog never got me any chicks, I had to teach something." The drunk said, falling asleep. Johnson growled and walked away, the man locked in the car.
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I was stroking her paw, since she was nervous. She was in the vets hospital to get her wounds healed.
"Come on Kinggie, I'm fine.... Just tired...." Sasha tried to defend herself but some fell asleep thanks to the medicines. I grinned, and stared at her, hoping the god she'll be okay. Right before I was about to leave she pulled on his fur. Her eyes sparkled. I stared at her, not understanding,
"I love you." Oh God. Did she just say? She then closed her eyes and went back to sleep. I sighed, not realizing those words will affect me in the future,