Re: Housepets: Silver the cat
Silver was lucky. When I went to dentist, all I remember was that nasty dentical drill that felt like it was piercing my brain xD
I was wondering where on earth have you been, TMH. But I'm glad you still remembered about your fic =) By the way, how were your exams?
I must tell you that I like Steve's dialogues. There are moments where his words determine his originality.
Only one thing:
It's better to not use the same word from the beginning of the previous paragraph when you start a new one, because stylistically it doesn't look good. Since you already started Steve's action, it will be better to use in next paragraph word "he" since we will know it's still the same guy we focus on.
There are also some typos, but I'm sure you'll find them out
Hope to see next update soon.