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Author:  Cwitt [ Fri Mar 11, 2011 10:12 am ]
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Spikes sad face makes me sad :(
But the end makes me happy again! :)

Author:  Coatl_Ruu [ Fri Mar 11, 2011 10:16 am ]
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Spike is the new undisputed master of the "puppy-dog eyes" :D

Author:  Blue Braixen [ Fri Mar 11, 2011 11:13 am ]
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Pridelands what is that I don't even.
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Author:  copper [ Fri Mar 11, 2011 8:12 pm ]
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Awww! That was nice of him to play with Spike.

Spike could get away with anything with that face! :lol:

Great update as always, Stu!

Author:  _Stu_ [ Mon Mar 14, 2011 2:53 am ]
Post subject:  03-14-2011- Fire screams

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AT: God Has Spoken Through His Conscience
As I scream aim and fire,
The death toll grows higher ♫

Author:  _Stu_ [ Mon Mar 14, 2011 2:55 am ]
Post subject:  03-14-2011- Fire screams

From the next one maybe Andrea will be back, finally better translations :)

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AT: God Has Spoken Through His Conscience
As I scream aim and fire,
The death toll grows higher ♫

Author:  valerio [ Mon Mar 14, 2011 3:02 am ]
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If that's what i'm thinking, the rating has just been sent a bit too high...

Author:  _Stu_ [ Mon Mar 14, 2011 3:16 am ]
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valerio Wrote:
If that's what i'm thinking, the rating has just been sent a bit too high...

Nah, I don't think so. If an anime like One Piece, Naruto or Dragon Ball is considered PG-13, then I've no doubt that H1X can be PG-13 as well.
And, as I told you, I require a little violence for this story. Nothing orrible or chilling, of course, but without this feature H1X loses it's meaning.

BTW, it's only fire... I don't think PG-13 is broken for such a thing Image

Author:  copper [ Mon Mar 14, 2011 3:23 am ]
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OOh, fire! How exciting! I can't wait for the next update to see how he deals with this.

Author:  _Stu_ [ Mon Mar 14, 2011 3:32 am ]
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copper Wrote:
OOh, fire! How exciting! I can't wait for the next update to see how he deals with this.

I'm afraid for the next update, to be honest Image if fire make everyone jump from their pants, I think that I've to make the next one a little less... less :?

Author:  Big Fan [ Mon Mar 14, 2011 6:55 am ]
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_Stu_ Wrote:
copper Wrote:
OOh, fire! How exciting! I can't wait for the next update to see how he deals with this.

I'm afraid for the next update, to be honest Image if fire make everyone jump from their pants, I think that I've to make the next one a little less... less :?

Actually, for a moment I was kind of thinking it was the whole "vision of hell" thing. I think it would still be PG-13 though.

Author:  KizerZin [ Mon Mar 14, 2011 9:01 am ]
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Burn~ Baby Burn! Oh Yah! Burn~ Baby Burn! Oh Yah!
Fire on the dance floor! Fire burning~ Fire burning~ on the dance floor!
I'm REALLY liking this now! HA HA HAaaaa!

Author:  Coatl_Ruu [ Mon Mar 14, 2011 2:12 pm ]
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Well, I suppose I should have seen this coming. This is a tragedy, after all. Spike's not allowed to be happy. :P

As for the translation, "...wake me up the morning" should be "...wakes me up in the morning", and "better for me to reach him" would some better as "I'd better go get him" or some variation of that.

Author:  _Stu_ [ Mon Mar 14, 2011 2:56 pm ]
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Big Fan Wrote:
Actually, for a moment I was kind of thinking it was the whole "vision of ****" thing. I think it would still be PG-13 though.


Uhm, guess you're right, now that you tell me I realized that can seem like that.

Coatl_Ruu Wrote:
Well, I suppose I should have seen this coming. This is a tragedy, after all. Spike's not allowed to be happy. :P

As for the translation, "...wake me up the morning" should be "...wakes me up in the morning", and "better for me to reach him" would some better as "I'd better go get him" or some variation of that.


Oh, thanks for the hints! I'll fix it right now :D

Author:  Coatl_Ruu [ Mon Mar 14, 2011 3:11 pm ]
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_Stu_ Wrote:
Oh, thanks for the hints! I'll fix it right now :D

Actually, I think I misread panel four. "I'd better go meet him" or "I should get going" would probably be better replacements. Sorry... :?

Author:  _Stu_ [ Mon Mar 14, 2011 3:14 pm ]
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Coatl_Ruu Wrote:
_Stu_ Wrote:
Oh, thanks for the hints! I'll fix it right now :D

Actually, I think I misread panel four. "I'd better go meet him" or "I should get going" would probably be better replacements. Sorry... :?

Argh, i've already fixed it! :cry: Let's say that is ok the way it is Image

Author:  Coatl_Ruu [ Mon Mar 14, 2011 3:22 pm ]
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Sorry! Yes, lets. It should still be fine.

Author:  copper [ Mon Mar 14, 2011 7:07 pm ]
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You don't need to change your next update. The fire was unexpected, but nothing that would make me jump as you say. I think we can handle what you have planned. I really want to see what your vision of this is, unaltered by reader input.

Author:  _Stu_ [ Tue Mar 15, 2011 3:17 am ]
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copper Wrote:
You don't need to change your next update. The fire was unexpected, but nothing that would make me jump as you say. I think we can handle what you have planned. I really want to see what your vision of this is, unaltered by reader input.

Not that I wanted to change it xD story is complete, 100%, change it right now is very difficult for me.
I just have to make a few corrections with drawings, nothing more. As I said, if One Piece and Naruto are PG-13 classified, H1X is not so hard to be that mature.

Author:  The Broken Fox [ Tue Mar 15, 2011 4:54 am ]
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Oh wow! I go away for two days and when I come back... fiery blazing inferno! :shock: But what's burning? It's not the sand I'm sure, and it doesn't look like it's the building Spike is in, more like something outside...

Author:  Coatl_Ruu [ Tue Mar 15, 2011 6:01 pm ]
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I think that's supposed to be the inside of the store. Spike was probably sleeping in a back room or something.

Author:  _Stu_ [ Wed Mar 16, 2011 5:57 am ]
Post subject:  03-16-2011- To be whole again

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AT: ...I'm coming back from you.

Author:  rickgriffin [ Wed Mar 16, 2011 10:54 am ]
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valerio Wrote:
If that's what i'm thinking, the rating has just been sent a bit too high...


Alright, I need to bite that one in the bud. Even if a story is PG, it is NOT completely harmless to all characters.

I have on my bookshelf three movies:

All Dogs Go To Heaven - G
Watership Down - PG
Plague Dogs - PG-13

The intensity or subject matter of a plotline has nothing to do with the rating, or even if any characters die in it; it is all in how it's handled. In all of these movies, character death is an ever-present threat.

ADGTH - All deaths are handled off-screen, and there's no blood except for minor wounds. (In fact, of the things they had to do to get a G rating instead of PG, one was to change an actual bullet gun to a laser gun. Why? Laser guns are fantasy and less visceral). In addition, most of the dogs in this movie--including the main character--are verminous scum. If it were released today, it'd likely receive a PG rating for all the gambling and smoking that goes on--but only PG

WD - There's several very awful death scenes, even a couple up-close shots of characters being bloodied. If this were released today it might get a PG-13, but that's only because there's almost no difference between G and PG for a lot of things now.

PD - This is a horror movie. Injured/dead/dying animals are common, characters are being shot at, and even awful things are done off-screen (main characters eat the corpse of a pursuant hunter that broke his neck after a fall) For that last one, it's only implied in-shot that they were considering it, then later the news broadcast said it actually happened. Most actual instances of animals being hit were off-screen, unless done by other animals.

Author:  _Stu_ [ Wed Mar 16, 2011 11:26 am ]
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Uhm, I understand. I'll keep those movies in mind as a reference.
Long story shot, I'm still "inside" PG-13, am I right?

Author:  rickgriffin [ Wed Mar 16, 2011 12:54 pm ]
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Well within, so long as it doesn't stray too far into Plague Dogs territory, which it has definitely not.

Author:  Andrea [ Wed Mar 16, 2011 1:05 pm ]
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Back from America.

Translation delivered:

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Author:  Cwitt [ Wed Mar 16, 2011 5:01 pm ]
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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Not Travis!
Nice update. I cried.

Author:  Blue Braixen [ Wed Mar 16, 2011 5:33 pm ]
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Travis is dead...
What will Spike do now?

Author:  jopencjusz [ Wed Mar 16, 2011 5:36 pm ]
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Answer for this and more other questions
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IN THE NEXT EPISODE (what a surprise :p)

Author:  KizerZin [ Wed Mar 16, 2011 9:10 pm ]
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HA HA HAaaa! What is life without death? I can't wait~

I love Watership Down~

Author:  Cory [ Thu Mar 17, 2011 12:18 am ]
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Hey, I like it so far!

What breed is spike? Or is he just a mutt like Peanut? Just wondering...

Author:  copper [ Thu Mar 17, 2011 1:05 am ]
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So sad! Spike now is on his own, and Travis has left this world...

This was a great update, Stu. I wonder what you will surprise us with next. :roll:

Author:  Private Elliot [ Thu Mar 17, 2011 1:07 am ]
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It's not nice to roll your eyes, Copper.

Author:  copper [ Thu Mar 17, 2011 1:10 am ]
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Private Elliot Wrote:
It's not nice to roll your eyes, Copper.


Oh, hush, Elly. You know it was meant lightheartedly. At least, I hope that's how everyone takes it.

Author:  _Stu_ [ Thu Mar 17, 2011 4:18 am ]
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Cory Wrote:
Hey, I like it so far!

What breed is spike? Or is he just a mutt like Peanut? Just wondering...


Initially he was... something, only graphics without description.
Then I figured out that he actually is very similar to a black german shepherd... so I guess it is a black german shepherd Image
EDIT:
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At least is... similar.

Private Elliot Wrote:
It's not nice to roll your eyes, Copper.


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Author:  Private Elliot [ Thu Mar 17, 2011 4:26 am ]
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YAY I'M FUNNY! *dance*

Well, at least we know what breed now.

Also: This is very good, please keep doing these, yada yada.

Author:  Coatl_Ruu [ Thu Mar 17, 2011 3:43 pm ]
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I haven't commented on this yet? Huh. Well, I think it's readily apparent now what you meant by 'like a broken mirror'. Still... I wonder what (or who) set the store on fire.

Author:  _Stu_ [ Fri Mar 18, 2011 2:43 am ]
Post subject:  03-18-2011- Now i can see your pain

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AT: Before you asking me, Spike's NOT an hand ripper. It's just that knife.

Author:  Blue Braixen [ Fri Mar 18, 2011 2:44 am ]
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Ooh, Spike has a scary face in this one. X3

Author:  copper [ Fri Mar 18, 2011 7:24 am ]
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Ooh, Shadow face! That always means mysterious powers or troubled past!

It looks good, I can't wait for the translation. Stupid arsonist deserves it.

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