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Good luck, Stu.
as for the comic I think primo is about to go fanboy after seeing a "super hero".

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Captain Obvious feeling, part 1. Next one following

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I came back victorious from that exam! ....this morning i have another one more difficult. Ugh.

I had to anticipate today's page for this reason, gotta study, exam hour's and stuff. Not sure if i need to be sorry. But i guess not.

Even if i feel to be reiterative, wish me good luck, again :shock:

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good luck... and Spike's line should be "neither did I"

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mhh... i can't fix right now, i'll do it when i'll come back home...

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For some reason I did think primo was going to thinnk he was Matt again. But I thought that the voice in Spike's head being Matt would be strange.

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Primo, my boy...you just witnessed one dog in direct contact with an egyptian divinity to gain his power, you know your best friend used to be a human who now got superpowers himself... And you have a hard time accepting that Matt is living in Primo? Come ON!! :lol:

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a second personality is never obvious u.u

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I needed to justify this strip somehow, random mind guessing time then

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Whgy do I have a feeling this looks alot like the Yukito/Yue relationship back in Sakura Card Captors.
But I agree that Primo would flip in joy and horror to discover Matt is inside of Spike.

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Interesting. Amazing how much alike they are. So is it an old mind body switch thing?

Well, let us hope Spike can keep the secret.

I still like the transformation. Very nice.

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Whgy do I have a feeling this looks alot like the Yukito/Yue relationship back in Sakura Card Captors.
But I agree that Primo would flip in joy and horror to discover Matt is inside of Spike.

Another anime i've heard of a lot but i've never seen :lol: involuntary quotes everywhere

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- I'll probably continue with Chapter 8 after this one before summer stop... because it's small and humoristic. The only thing i can say is that Chapters 9 and 10 are plot HEAVY, for real. And they can't allow a humor chapter between them, just because they're really, really heavy.

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I can't wait for chapters 9 and 10 then.

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Ooo, sounds fun! I cannot wait for the heavy ones.... ;)

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Fido will be highly disappointed i suppose

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naughty naughty, Sabrina.
you can't waste time cuddling.

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Silly Kitty, Tarot knows everything. :lol:

Well, tarot has a plan coming. And Pete and Horus will have things to talk about, I suppose.

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Tarot doesn't like time wasted in cuddles.

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It's just because Freelance Police is greatly cooler than State Police. And because Max is a rabbit.

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I've just heard of Valerio's idea about the 5th year card! It's great, and i'm honored to partecipate xD

The only thing i need to tell is that it may take sometime... for real life things.

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Spike - Setting one's priorities straight :lol:

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Loved the reference to sam and Max..

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You just reminded me that I need to finish Sam and Max: Hit the Road one of these days, I love Point and Click adventures but I suck at them and don't want to use a walkthrough.


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and i remembered to myself i still have to play season 3 :( hit the road was quite difficult compared to new telltale ones, like all lucasart's old style adventures... sometimes a walkthrough is required

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Nice, did not get the joke though. :roll:

And hopefully everyone will participate in some way for the card.... I hope anyway. Exclusion really hurts. :(

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I suggest to play it if you didn't, it one of the best adventures i've ever played (Hit the Road, but imo Season 1 and 2 are much better with humor, voice acting and general setting).

There's also an animated series... but it's not so good as the games. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AVoSylY5M_4

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What consequences? I'll never tell you

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I'm not so sure of this translation... please tell me about any error and sort of

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Horus is EFFING cute! And primo's reaction matches perfectly that cuteness! :D

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oh good, you know this translation wasn't your best work.
time to correct.

panel 2: "mortals whose" should be "mortals who" (possibly "whom" I'm not sure)

panel 3: I'd say "can I pet him or would I get burned?"
I'd also say "give a god some respect"

panel 4: I'd think it should be "as long as I keep the secret of Horus
then "on comprehend the nature of this power" should probably be "in comprehending..."

panel 5: probably don't need the "with no reason" because the next bubble says that none of them no why he's here. those are pretty much the same thing.
also, you could probably drop the "for some reason" in that second part.

panel 6: it's spelled "explanations"
second paragraph, I'd word it as "I've resided in Fido's soul for several months, but I've been weak. almost as if unconscious."

panel 7: second sentence should start "would he"
second paragraph "I needed to test him"

panel 8: "Who is the mortal soul you care about most in this world?"
then "It seems I couldn't have made a better choice. The answer was as honest as it was quick, and without hesitation"

now I must say that I love panel 3. "please, orange mortal..." :lol:

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I was waiting for you Brent :lol:

And i knew that i made a lot of mistakes here but i never thought about THIS :shock: fixed!

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much better. I'll always be here to correct your sloppy work XP

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I just loved Primo's reaction to the cute flame.

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A very cute Flame.... reminds me of Mr. Howl's Floating Castle, the anime movie.... the flame demon?

*shrugs* Stupid work, making me miss all the correcting... :roll:

Very mysterious. So the power of Horus was activated by Pete's energy, eh? Very interesting...

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A very cute Flame.... reminds me of Mr. Howl's Floating Castle, the anime movie.... the flame demon?

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I should produce some plush of him

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more corrections hooray. not nearly as many, though.
panel 1: I think it should say spirits. somehow in English, the negative is plural. (ie: 2 spirits, 1 spirit, no spirits)
alternately, you could just change the second bubble to say "not a magic one, at least."

panel 2: I'm pretty sure "some time ago" is supposed to be three words.
then Fido should ask "She has this power, too?" or "does she have this power, too?"
then it's "ask questions" not "make questions"

panel 3: it should be "get back" or "go back." "come back" is what one says to someone leaving.
then I'd say "good luck with everything"

panel 4: it should be "mortals lack respect" not "lacks"

I love the last panel. Primo and Horus make for good comic relief. I hope all the other spirits are this cute.

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