Housepets: Message from the Guardian: S. I, E. 1
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Housepets: Message from the Guardian: S. I, E. 1
I said I'd make this, so here it is: Season 1, Episode 1, Chapter 1!
Special thanks goes to Valerio, lightwolf21, and Teh Brawler for inspiring me with their awesome fanfics, to Private Elliot for helping keep me on track while I was writing this, and to lightwolf21 (again) for being an awesome wall to bounce my ideas off of.
DISCLAIMER: this is completely non-canon.
Housepets! and most of the characters mentioned in this fanfic are copyright to rickpgriffin.
This fanfic will probably, knowing me, turn PG-13 sometime soon, but until then, It's PG.
This fanfic will also tie into Valerio's fanfics, so please check them out (or at least check out the "Valerio's translated fanfics" thread), if you haven't already.
With that out of the way, we can begin:
Housepets: Message from the Guardian, Season 1, Episode 1, Chapter 1
In the beginning, there was nothing. Everything was pitch black, as far as the eye could see. Peanut looked around and wondered, Where am I?
As if on cue, the blackness transformed, gaining color and shape, until it took the form of Babylon Gardens. But something was amiss. Where were the animals? At any given time, night or day, the pets would be outside, chatting with friends, taking walks, and one every now and then would catch a glimpse of two animals cuddled together, enjoying the night sky.
"Where is everybody," Peanut asked, dumbfounded.
"Every person and animal in Babylon Gardens is asleep."
Peanut whirled around to see where the voice had come from, but there was nothing, just air. "Okay..." Peanut added, thinking that he was hearing things.
"You are not hearing things." There was that voice again.
"Who said that? Where are you?"
"That does not matter. What is important is that you listen, feeble dog."
"Can I at least know what to call you?" Peanut was frustrated and wondering, What does this guy want from me?
"There is no need for you to know. Just listen to me. Right now, there are much more pressing matters than my name."
"Like what?" Peanut was curious. What could be so important that this person would go to the trouble of talking to Peanut? And, more importantly, why Peanut?
"Why you? I'll tell you why..."
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Housepets: Message from the Guardian, Season 1, Episode 1, Chapter 2
"I suppose I'll start from the beginning," mused the silhouette. The shadow lifted its hands, and a bright flash of light shone, blinding Peanut.
"HRNGH! Man, that's bright! What did you-"
The flash quickly subsided, and in the place of the shadow was a gigantic grey wolf. (Drawn by lightwolf21, isn't it awesome?) Its head was scarred, and in each of its arms (four in total) was a dagger.
"Whoa..." Gasped Peanut.
"I am Fenrir, and I am a player of the Cosmic Game. I have been watching you for about five years now, and I believe that you are the best choice."
"The best choice? For what?" Asked Peanut.
"Let me finish. The world is slowly coming apart. The oceans are rising, the mountains are melting, and earthquakes and volcanic eruptions are becoming more prevalent. The so-called 'experts' call this phenomenon 'global warming,' though that is actually incorrect. This is actually a result of the wrath of the Spirits. They are angry at the other players of the Cosmic Game, and they are taking it out on the pawns - that is, your neighborhood, Babylon Gardens. The reason I have contacted you is that I need to ask that you become my avatar. You must become a force for good and reverse the decision of the Spirits. I can give you the power to do so, but you have to agree to become my avatar. By doing so, you are duty-bound to fix the planet."
"But why me? Why am I the best choice? Why not Fido, or-"
"Because his heart is not pure. Your heart is as pure as pure gets, and I know that you would never abuse the powers that I could give you. I have known ever since you proposed to Grape at the Villa Foster, that you would do anything to protect and keep happy the ones you love. But I need you to trust me and accept the deal. All of the other denizens of Babylon Gardens, and the world, are counting on you, Peanut. You have to be the one to appease the Spirits, for everyone's sakes."
"I don't know if I should, but I accept. What do I do now?"
Fenrir once again raised his arms and a green light shown, this time in little wisps. The little green wisps collected into a ball and, one by one, shot into Peanut's forehead. The symbol of the wolf appeared on his forehead and his eyes flashed green, then Peanut slowly descended to the ground, landing gently on his feet.
"All you have to do is wake up."
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Housepets: Message from the Guardian, Season 1, Episode 1, Chapter 3
*Gasp* Peanut and Grape sat up simultaneously.
"Oh my gosh!"
"My dream was really weird!"
"No, MY dream was weird!"
"Yeah, but did you have a mystical creature in your dream?!"
"Stop talking at the same time as me!"
"No way! You stop!"
"Nuh, uh! You stop!"
"Just stop!" Yelled Grape.
Peanut gave in, allowing Grape to continue. "It was so weird! I-In my dream, it was pitch black, and Bablyon Gardens was empty, completely empty!" Grape's ears were back, and her eyes were the size of pinholes.
"Yours, too?! That's weird..." Peanut was hunched over backwards, stretching while wiping his eyes. He yawned. Grape followed suit.
Grape and Peanut had been sharing a room since Mr. Sandwich had decided to build an office upstairs. The new couple didn't mind sharing a room together, as they really only used their rooms for sleeping, working on Spot (Superdog) comics, or updating a blog (What? Grape keeps a blog? Since when?). The Sandwiches also moved the Wii out to the living room so that everybody could play, and that freed up a little bit of room for Grape to put her bed and a few things, like the Pridelands poster, up. Much to Peanut's dismay, Grape had also painted her half of their room purple, which Peanut saw as conflicting with the brown of his side. But now that didn't matter- the lucid darkness of the recently-renovated room overshadowed everything else.
Grape's tone hushed. She spoke slower, trying to gather her emotions. "But that's not the freakiest part- not only were the Gardens empty, but somebody was talking to me in my dream. It was like she was reading my mind..."
"She..." Peanut now was split, one side hoping that Grape may not have had the same dream, and the other side knowing that she did. Peanut blinked his eyes twice. He had to ask though, "She? So the mythical creature in your dream was a she? And she acted like she could read your mind? My dream was like that, too..."
She was a Tigress, and boy was she HUGE!" Grape stretched her arms as high and as low as they could go, trying to show how gigantic her visitor was. "She called herself 'Bastet,' or something like that, and asked me to be her 'avatar.' At first I was pretty skeptical, and I still am, but she said that she needed me to help reverse the decisions of some all-powerful 'Spirits' or whatever."
"Well, did you accept?"
"Wow. It's like you can read my mind, too. But anyway, I accepted, and then some little, I don't know, I guess sheets of red things just shot at me. I had to try my hardest to keep from screaming. And ever since then, I've felt kind of... off. It's burning up in here. Is it hot in here to you?" She looked quizzically at Peanut, with her head slightly tilted to the left.
"No, I'm actually kind of cold, like there's a draft or something." Peanut shivered. "I'm going to go get a blanket. Can I get you anything while I'm downstairs?"
"An ice pack, please. My head is burning up." Grape held her left paw over her forehead.
"Alright, I'll get a thermometer, too. Sit tight, love."
Peanut hurried down the steps and into the kitchen, stopping first in the living room to secure a blanket. He then ran to the fridge, grabbed an ice pack, and left to get a thermometer from their medicine cabinet in the bathroom. Peanut climbed back upstairs and almost tripped on the last step. "Whoa, whoa, whoa! Oh right, shh, got to be quiet."
He crept into their shared bedroom, and spotted Grape, lying on the floor.
"Grape!" No answer.
Peanut laid the stuff down on the floor and picked up Grape, laying her down in her bed. He placed the ice pack on her forehead and stuck the thermometer into her mouth, under her tongue. After about five seconds, the thermometer beeped. Peanut looked at the screen on it.
"108 DEGREES!?"
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CONTINUED ON PAGE 2.
Special Halloween update incoming.
I will tell you now that this is my first fanfic ever, and all criticism, constructive or otherwise, is appreciated.
Special thanks goes to Valerio, lightwolf21, and Teh Brawler for inspiring me with their awesome fanfics, to Private Elliot for helping keep me on track while I was writing this, and to lightwolf21 (again) for being an awesome wall to bounce my ideas off of.
DISCLAIMER: this is completely non-canon.
Housepets! and most of the characters mentioned in this fanfic are copyright to rickpgriffin.
This fanfic will probably, knowing me, turn PG-13 sometime soon, but until then, It's PG.
This fanfic will also tie into Valerio's fanfics, so please check them out (or at least check out the "Valerio's translated fanfics" thread), if you haven't already.
With that out of the way, we can begin:
Housepets: Message from the Guardian, Season 1, Episode 1, Chapter 1
In the beginning, there was nothing. Everything was pitch black, as far as the eye could see. Peanut looked around and wondered, Where am I?
As if on cue, the blackness transformed, gaining color and shape, until it took the form of Babylon Gardens. But something was amiss. Where were the animals? At any given time, night or day, the pets would be outside, chatting with friends, taking walks, and one every now and then would catch a glimpse of two animals cuddled together, enjoying the night sky.
"Where is everybody," Peanut asked, dumbfounded.
"Every person and animal in Babylon Gardens is asleep."
Peanut whirled around to see where the voice had come from, but there was nothing, just air. "Okay..." Peanut added, thinking that he was hearing things.
"You are not hearing things." There was that voice again.
"Who said that? Where are you?"
"That does not matter. What is important is that you listen, feeble dog."
"Can I at least know what to call you?" Peanut was frustrated and wondering, What does this guy want from me?
"There is no need for you to know. Just listen to me. Right now, there are much more pressing matters than my name."
"Like what?" Peanut was curious. What could be so important that this person would go to the trouble of talking to Peanut? And, more importantly, why Peanut?
"Why you? I'll tell you why..."
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Housepets: Message from the Guardian, Season 1, Episode 1, Chapter 2
"I suppose I'll start from the beginning," mused the silhouette. The shadow lifted its hands, and a bright flash of light shone, blinding Peanut.
"HRNGH! Man, that's bright! What did you-"
The flash quickly subsided, and in the place of the shadow was a gigantic grey wolf. (Drawn by lightwolf21, isn't it awesome?) Its head was scarred, and in each of its arms (four in total) was a dagger.
"Whoa..." Gasped Peanut.
"I am Fenrir, and I am a player of the Cosmic Game. I have been watching you for about five years now, and I believe that you are the best choice."
"The best choice? For what?" Asked Peanut.
"Let me finish. The world is slowly coming apart. The oceans are rising, the mountains are melting, and earthquakes and volcanic eruptions are becoming more prevalent. The so-called 'experts' call this phenomenon 'global warming,' though that is actually incorrect. This is actually a result of the wrath of the Spirits. They are angry at the other players of the Cosmic Game, and they are taking it out on the pawns - that is, your neighborhood, Babylon Gardens. The reason I have contacted you is that I need to ask that you become my avatar. You must become a force for good and reverse the decision of the Spirits. I can give you the power to do so, but you have to agree to become my avatar. By doing so, you are duty-bound to fix the planet."
"But why me? Why am I the best choice? Why not Fido, or-"
"Because his heart is not pure. Your heart is as pure as pure gets, and I know that you would never abuse the powers that I could give you. I have known ever since you proposed to Grape at the Villa Foster, that you would do anything to protect and keep happy the ones you love. But I need you to trust me and accept the deal. All of the other denizens of Babylon Gardens, and the world, are counting on you, Peanut. You have to be the one to appease the Spirits, for everyone's sakes."
"I don't know if I should, but I accept. What do I do now?"
Fenrir once again raised his arms and a green light shown, this time in little wisps. The little green wisps collected into a ball and, one by one, shot into Peanut's forehead. The symbol of the wolf appeared on his forehead and his eyes flashed green, then Peanut slowly descended to the ground, landing gently on his feet.
"All you have to do is wake up."
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Housepets: Message from the Guardian, Season 1, Episode 1, Chapter 3
*Gasp* Peanut and Grape sat up simultaneously.
"Oh my gosh!"
"My dream was really weird!"
"No, MY dream was weird!"
"Yeah, but did you have a mystical creature in your dream?!"
"Stop talking at the same time as me!"
"No way! You stop!"
"Nuh, uh! You stop!"
"Just stop!" Yelled Grape.
Peanut gave in, allowing Grape to continue. "It was so weird! I-In my dream, it was pitch black, and Bablyon Gardens was empty, completely empty!" Grape's ears were back, and her eyes were the size of pinholes.
"Yours, too?! That's weird..." Peanut was hunched over backwards, stretching while wiping his eyes. He yawned. Grape followed suit.
Grape and Peanut had been sharing a room since Mr. Sandwich had decided to build an office upstairs. The new couple didn't mind sharing a room together, as they really only used their rooms for sleeping, working on Spot (Superdog) comics, or updating a blog (What? Grape keeps a blog? Since when?). The Sandwiches also moved the Wii out to the living room so that everybody could play, and that freed up a little bit of room for Grape to put her bed and a few things, like the Pridelands poster, up. Much to Peanut's dismay, Grape had also painted her half of their room purple, which Peanut saw as conflicting with the brown of his side. But now that didn't matter- the lucid darkness of the recently-renovated room overshadowed everything else.
Grape's tone hushed. She spoke slower, trying to gather her emotions. "But that's not the freakiest part- not only were the Gardens empty, but somebody was talking to me in my dream. It was like she was reading my mind..."
"She..." Peanut now was split, one side hoping that Grape may not have had the same dream, and the other side knowing that she did. Peanut blinked his eyes twice. He had to ask though, "She? So the mythical creature in your dream was a she? And she acted like she could read your mind? My dream was like that, too..."
She was a Tigress, and boy was she HUGE!" Grape stretched her arms as high and as low as they could go, trying to show how gigantic her visitor was. "She called herself 'Bastet,' or something like that, and asked me to be her 'avatar.' At first I was pretty skeptical, and I still am, but she said that she needed me to help reverse the decisions of some all-powerful 'Spirits' or whatever."
"Well, did you accept?"
"Wow. It's like you can read my mind, too. But anyway, I accepted, and then some little, I don't know, I guess sheets of red things just shot at me. I had to try my hardest to keep from screaming. And ever since then, I've felt kind of... off. It's burning up in here. Is it hot in here to you?" She looked quizzically at Peanut, with her head slightly tilted to the left.
"No, I'm actually kind of cold, like there's a draft or something." Peanut shivered. "I'm going to go get a blanket. Can I get you anything while I'm downstairs?"
"An ice pack, please. My head is burning up." Grape held her left paw over her forehead.
"Alright, I'll get a thermometer, too. Sit tight, love."
Peanut hurried down the steps and into the kitchen, stopping first in the living room to secure a blanket. He then ran to the fridge, grabbed an ice pack, and left to get a thermometer from their medicine cabinet in the bathroom. Peanut climbed back upstairs and almost tripped on the last step. "Whoa, whoa, whoa! Oh right, shh, got to be quiet."
He crept into their shared bedroom, and spotted Grape, lying on the floor.
"Grape!" No answer.
Peanut laid the stuff down on the floor and picked up Grape, laying her down in her bed. He placed the ice pack on her forehead and stuck the thermometer into her mouth, under her tongue. After about five seconds, the thermometer beeped. Peanut looked at the screen on it.
"108 DEGREES!?"
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CONTINUED ON PAGE 2.
Special Halloween update incoming.
I will tell you now that this is my first fanfic ever, and all criticism, constructive or otherwise, is appreciated.
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Re: Housepets: Message from the Guardian
Good setup, I'm hooked. So many possibilities...what could happen next? XD
Heh. Look at that... I started an actual Housepets! fan-fic.
https://www.housepetscomic.com/forums/v ... 70#p131370
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I'm probably going to update either on friday or saturday of every week, I don't know yet.
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"WHAT HAPPEN? Someone set us up the plot. We get single."
WHAT? "Main screen turn on"
(plot)
What a start. Where's Peanut? Who's talking to him? WHY AM I ASKING YOU THESE QUESTIONS?
WHAT? "Main screen turn on"
(plot)
What a start. Where's Peanut? Who's talking to him? WHY AM I ASKING YOU THESE QUESTIONS?
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1.Can't say just yet.Private Elliot wrote:"WHAT HAPPEN? Someone set us up the plot. We get single."
WHAT? "Main screen turn on"
(plot)
What a start. Where's Peanut? Who's talking to him? WHY AM I ASKING YOU THESE QUESTIONS?
2. See number 1.
3. Because you like to ask lots of questions.
Re: Housepets: Message from the Guardian
*claps*
*looks around*
Oh, are we not clapping yet?
*shrugs and claps anyway*
*looks around*
Oh, are we not clapping yet?
*shrugs and claps anyway*
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Thank you, thank you, you're too kind.The Game wrote:*claps*
*looks around*
Oh, are we not clapping yet?
*shrugs and claps anyway*
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FEEBLE DOG
I feel the need to point out that the disclaimer is slightly unnecessary, because Rick didn't write it :3
I feel the need to point out that the disclaimer is slightly unnecessary, because Rick didn't write it :3
DOH HO HO WELL THEN
Re: Housepets: Message from the Guardian
Hmmm, this sounds good.
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Told you that they'll like it!
Wrote that using my tablet!
Wrote that using my tablet!
Re: Housepets: Message from the Guardian
Friday?
Update every FRIDAY?
*checks calendar* Ooh, today's friday already! SO GIVE US MORE NAU!
Update every FRIDAY?
*checks calendar* Ooh, today's friday already! SO GIVE US MORE NAU!
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...But I just posted this today...valerio wrote:Friday?
Update every FRIDAY?
*checks calendar* Ooh, today's friday already! SO GIVE US MORE NAU!
So you'll have to wait for a week.
(That'll give me the chance to get more ideas flowing)
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I just can't think that fast. I need time for ideas to flow. I haven't written almost two seasons worth of fanfics. And I have school and practice afterschool for a long time. I need that week. But, for sure, I will post updates of Fridays, unless I don't have it finished, then my Saturday buffer takes effect.
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Ok, Ok, then I'll be waiting till friday
patiently
in the dark
for you...
patiently
in the dark
for you...
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valerio wrote:Ok, Ok, then I'll be waiting till friday
patiently
in the dark
for you...
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....
IM OFF THE HOOK, YES!!!!!
IM OFF THE HOOK, YES!!!!!
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Daggy wrote: Look a shadowpriest, what a cutie.... POW
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You're creeping me out, Valerio!
But still, cant wait till the next updatey.
But still, cant wait till the next updatey.
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Never thought I'd hear that this often, I criticize my writing too much.Private Elliot wrote:You're creeping me out, Valerio!
But still, cant wait till the next updatey.
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Speak for yourself, i criticize my art too much. I've been practicing drawing with my tablet, but I'm too worried to post.Tha Housedog wrote:Never thought I'd hear that this often, I criticize my writing too much.Private Elliot wrote:You're creeping me out, Valerio!
But still, cant wait till the next updatey.
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What's to worry about? As a (rather new) artist, I can say that if you criticize your art too much, you'll only frustrate yourself.Private Elliot wrote:Speak for yourself, i criticize my art too much. I've been practicing drawing with my tablet, but I'm too worried to post.Tha Housedog wrote:Never thought I'd hear that this often, I criticize my writing too much.Private Elliot wrote:You're creeping me out, Valerio!
But still, cant wait till the next updatey.
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<insert something to say here>
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Something to say.Private Elliot wrote:<insert something to say here>
I feel like a moron. At any rate, you'll find out who this stranger is next episode, part, whatever.
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Hey, practice makes perfect. And you're pretty good already.
DOH HO HO WELL THEN
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I'm gonna pretend that was to me...Teh Brawler wrote:Hey, practice makes perfect. And you're pretty good already.
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-_-Tha Housedog wrote:I'm gonna pretend that was to me...Teh Brawler wrote:Hey, practice makes perfect. And you're pretty good already.
*slaps Tha Housedog upside the head*
Stop that.
DOH HO HO WELL THEN
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*Smiles with teeth*Teh Brawler wrote:-_-Tha Housedog wrote:I'm gonna pretend that was to me...Teh Brawler wrote:Hey, practice makes perfect. And you're pretty good already.
*slaps Tha Housedog upside the head*
Stop that.
What do you mean?
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I think you mean toothy smile.
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I say what I mean, boy.Private Elliot wrote:I think you mean toothy smile.
In all seriousness, I can't put myself down from time to time without getting slapped? What kind of messed up system is this?
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Realistically? No, you can't.Tha Housedog wrote:I say what I mean, boy.Private Elliot wrote:I think you mean toothy smile.
In all seriousness, I can't put myself down from time to time without getting slapped? What kind of messed up system is this?
I mean that in the nicest way. In reality, there's a huge difference between critiquing yourself and just being self-deprecating. For example "I need to work on my dialogue to make it seem more natural" is constructive, and helps you get better. "My stuff is crap" is either going to make you never feel good enough to get anywhere (I know this from experience), or is a ploy to get attention (I know this from experience, as well). Either way, if you're truly motivated to get better, you won't just put yourself down, but rather point out what you can improve on in your writing.
Besides, it's not good fan policy to let the people they follow become negative without reacting
DOH HO HO WELL THEN
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For some reason, I do that just fine for my art but I can't do it for my writing. I don't know, maybe it IS a ploy for attention. Either way, it's still not healthy.Teh Brawler wrote:Realistically? No, you can't.Tha Housedog wrote:I say what I mean, boy.Private Elliot wrote:I think you mean toothy smile.
In all seriousness, I can't put myself down from time to time without getting slapped? What kind of messed up system is this?
I mean that in the nicest way. In reality, there's a huge difference between critiquing yourself and just being self-deprecating. For example "I need to work on my dialogue to make it seem more natural" is constructive, and helps you get better. "My stuff is crap" is either going to make you never feel good enough to get anywhere (I know this from experience), or is a ploy to get attention (I know this from experience, as well). Either way, if you're truly motivated to get better, you won't just put yourself down, but rather point out what you can improve on in your writing.
Besides, it's not good fan policy to let the people they follow become negative without reacting
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Instead, as facts have just proven, you're good housedog: a short piece and you already have us hooked up to your ficcie.
The creepytalian from this dark corner is happy.
The creepytalian from this dark corner is happy.
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Me and THD suer have similar writing.
As he stated its gonna be PG-13 soon after.
As he stated its gonna be PG-13 soon after.
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Valerio, is there a fanfic on this forum that you don't like?valerio wrote:Instead, as facts have just proven, you're good housedog: a short piece and you already have us hooked up to your ficcie.
The creepytalian from this dark corner is happy.
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Re: Housepets: Message from the Guardian
That question is a great one.
then in transparent text he links what I wrote.
then in transparent text he links what I wrote.
Re: Housepets: Message from the Guardian
I like every fanfic here, only with different quality appreciation gradients. This place is like a well furnished cellar that contains only good winesTeh Brawler wrote:Valerio, is there a fanfic on this forum that you don't like?valerio wrote:Instead, as facts have just proven, you're good housedog: a short piece and you already have us hooked up to your ficcie.
The creepytalian from this dark corner is happy.
- Private Elliot
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Re: Housepets: Message from the Guardian
I've just lost some respect for you.valerio wrote:I like every fanfic here, only with different quality appreciation gradients. This place is like a well furnished cellar that contains only good winesTeh Brawler wrote:Valerio, is there a fanfic on this forum that you don't like?valerio wrote:Instead, as facts have just proven, you're good housedog: a short piece and you already have us hooked up to your ficcie.
The creepytalian from this dark corner is happy.
Then again, you are an adult.
- Blue Braixen
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Re: Housepets: Message from the Guardian
I'm only worried about whether I'll be able to keep you guys happy with it.valerio wrote:Instead, as facts have just proven, you're good housedog: a short piece and you already have us hooked up to your ficcie.
The creepytalian from this dark corner is happy.
And I don't have any idea how long this will continue for, so buckle up and get ready for the ride.
Re: Housepets: Message from the Guardian
..? Meaning?
If it regards drinking, I do not, as I do not smoke or other unhealty activity (save Nutella, my bad)
But I still appreciate a well furnished cellar. It's classy!
If it regards drinking, I do not, as I do not smoke or other unhealty activity (save Nutella, my bad)
But I still appreciate a well furnished cellar. It's classy!