Yogurt and Cake - A Pet Friendly fanfic

ChewyChewy · Post by **ChewyChewy** » Fri Oct 01, 2010 1:09 pm

EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.

valerio · Post by **valerio** » Fri Oct 01, 2010 1:26 pm

Awwww, this was really sweet and cute. Damsels in distress, and a handsome knight to the resque! squee!

Hope you can come up with more of the Cakes!

ChewyChewy · Post by **ChewyChewy** » Fri Oct 01, 2010 5:33 pm

EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.

Blue Braixen · Post by **Blue Braixen** » Fri Oct 01, 2010 7:13 pm

Wow. I think Honey was right. Vanilla just doesn't know it yet.
Checkmate!

valerio · Post by **valerio** » Fri Oct 01, 2010 10:59 pm

Awww, the poor dear!
C'mon, Vani! You can't miss this handsome fella!

(side note, because I'm an overanalyzer: dogs do not sweat)

44R0NM10 · Post by **44R0NM10** » Sat Oct 02, 2010 8:13 am

I really like this so far! I'm looking forward to the next update!

Also, Vanilla losing a game of chess? Wow, her mind was really far away from that game.

ChewyChewy · Post by **ChewyChewy** » Sat Oct 02, 2010 12:18 pm

EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.

Blue Braixen · Post by **Blue Braixen** » Sat Oct 02, 2010 12:48 pm

Looks like a friendly reception between Vanilla and Strawberry.

Things could be looking up!

The Game · Post by **The Game** » Sat Oct 02, 2010 1:47 pm

This is really good!
Keep up the good work!

valerio · Post by **valerio** » Sat Oct 02, 2010 5:40 pm

Squeee! Vanilla is making a friend, Vanilla is making a friend!
I'm really loving this ficcie, and the Cake and Yoghurt families seems really promising!

ChewyChewy · Post by **ChewyChewy** » Sat Oct 02, 2010 6:50 pm

EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.

44R0NM10 · Post by **44R0NM10** » Sat Oct 02, 2010 7:01 pm

My words at the end of this were: "Augh, you..."

Yeah, I've never gotten so interested in any piece of writing. I was literally only reading the words towards the end. I was on the edge of my seat!

This cliffhanger is too much!

lightwolf21 · Post by **lightwolf21** » Sat Oct 02, 2010 7:04 pm

*Hrrghk!* x_x
The cliffhanger, aaahhh, I'm slipping! Haaaalllp!
That said, I like this story. Keep up the good work! XD

Blue Braixen · Post by **Blue Braixen** » Sat Oct 02, 2010 7:09 pm

lightwolf21 wrote:*Hrrghk!* x_x
The cliffhanger, aaahhh, I'm slipping! Haaaalllp!
That said, I like this story. Keep up the good work! XD

Lightwolf always knows what I'm thinking...

Rendak · Post by **Rendak** » Sat Oct 02, 2010 7:14 pm

This is the first time I've seen a cliffhnager that is an unfinished Sentence

lightwolf21 · Post by **lightwolf21** » Sat Oct 02, 2010 7:17 pm

Tha Housedog wrote:
lightwolf21 wrote:*Hrrghk!* x_x
The cliffhanger, aaahhh, I'm slipping! Haaaalllp!
That said, I like this story. Keep up the good work! XD
Lightwolf always knows what I'm thinking...

I am teh mind taker!

Blue Braixen · Post by **Blue Braixen** » Sat Oct 02, 2010 7:24 pm

Rendak wrote:This is the first time I've seen a cliffhnager that is an unfinished Sentence

Either way, it's still a cliffhanger and I still can't wait for the next.

Rendak · Post by **Rendak** » Sat Oct 02, 2010 7:29 pm

Tha Housedog wrote:
Rendak wrote:This is the first time I've seen a cliffhnager that is an unfinished Sentence
Either way, it's still a cliffhanger and I still can't wait for the next.

Same here

ChewyChewy · Post by **ChewyChewy** » Sat Oct 02, 2010 7:59 pm

EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.

Blue Braixen · Post by **Blue Braixen** » Sat Oct 02, 2010 8:25 pm

OH MY GAWD.
The images in my head passed "PG-13" and went strainght to "R". They did not pass go or collect two hundred dollars.

44R0NM10 · Post by **44R0NM10** » Sat Oct 02, 2010 8:33 pm

Tha Housedog wrote:OH MY GAWD.
The images in my head passed "PG-13" and went strainght to "R". They did not pass go or collect two hundred dollars.

...what?

This has just made me more curious though. I can assume the answer...but I'm scared. I mean, right now, I'm hoping for what I kinda assumed during the last update.

ChewyChewy · Post by **ChewyChewy** » Sat Oct 02, 2010 8:38 pm

Tha Housedog wrote:OH MY GAWD.
The images in my head passed "PG-13" and went strainght to "R". They did not pass go or collect two hundred dollars.

Okay, I wasn't going to respond before I did the next part of the story, but GET THAT OUT OF YOUR HEAD!

I thought it would be obvious what happened, and that it would be more potent this way, but apparently I erred in judgment....

Rendak · Post by **Rendak** » Sat Oct 02, 2010 8:38 pm

44R0NM10 wrote:
Tha Housedog wrote:OH MY GAWD.
The images in my head passed "PG-13" and went strainght to "R". They did not pass go or collect two hundred dollars.
...what?

This has just made me more curious though. I can assume the answer...but I'm scared. I mean, right now, I'm hoping for what I kinda assumed during the last update.

I am curious as well.

44R0NM10 · Post by **44R0NM10** » Sat Oct 02, 2010 9:04 pm

sorry. I can't get this out of my head.

I didn't remember at first, but looking again, I know 'Tell-Tail heart'. I read it again...sadly the meaning eluded me again. Although, I always understand the tense ending where he ends up telling the authorities that he killed that man with the vulture eye. I've read your tale 3 times, just to understand exactly what's been going on (don't worry, you explained it well. I just got the feeling there was more detailed if I looked through it closer.)...sadly, it's made me just as paranoid as the narrator from that poem, hehe.

and, I'm really impressed. There are questions throughout that have arisen and I can't wait for the next update.

Blue Braixen · Post by **Blue Braixen** » Sat Oct 02, 2010 9:13 pm

ChewyChewy wrote:
Tha Housedog wrote:OH MY GAWD.
The images in my head passed "PG-13" and went strainght to "R". They did not pass go or collect two hundred dollars.
Okay, I wasn't going to respond before I did the next part of the story, but GET THAT OUT OF YOUR HEAD!

I thought it would be obvious what happened, and that it would be more potent this way, but apparently I erred in judgment....

No, it's obvious, I'm just sick.
It's still an awesome story, I just muddle things up in my head. I blame this on puberty, but...

ChewyChewy · Post by **ChewyChewy** » Sat Oct 02, 2010 9:37 pm

EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.

Rendak · Post by **Rendak** » Sat Oct 02, 2010 9:42 pm

LOVE IT!!! Im not just saying that either, I really just love it

Good job

44R0NM10 · Post by **44R0NM10** » Sat Oct 02, 2010 9:56 pm

I find it sad, how Vanilla foreshadows like that. Although, it makes do for a wonderful ending.

Anyway, I loved this. It had me thirsting for every update. You've shown a lot of emotions throughout nicely, and put a lot of suspicion into some parts as well. I'm greatly impressed by your use of this. Also, you've given me the most epic cliffhanger I've ever seen. I really enjoyed this, and I look forward to your next epic tale.

Blue Braixen · Post by **Blue Braixen** » Sat Oct 02, 2010 10:42 pm

Awwwww, that's a wonderful ending!
It all works out in the end.
Great job!

ChewyChewy · Post by **ChewyChewy** » Sat Oct 02, 2010 10:49 pm

Thank you all very much!

I only wish I could do these at the drop of a hat, but I can't. Then again, if I could do them at the drop of a hat they might be less special, mightn't they?

Thank you for reading, and for your comments!

valerio · Post by **valerio** » Sun Oct 03, 2010 12:07 am

Wonderful story! It was our honor and pleasure to read it, and I really hope we'll have more of Honey and Vanilla! (Awww, wanna romance with Wort!!)

Now you only have to come up with a yappy happy character who calls our favorite gal 'Vani'!

lightwolf21 · Post by **lightwolf21** » Sun Oct 03, 2010 12:14 am

D'awwwwwww.

I liked the story. It had some pretty good character development and a heartwarming ending. Thank you for writing it.

ChewyChewy · Post by **ChewyChewy** » Sun Oct 03, 2010 2:13 am

Thank you all!

And you're welcome, lightwolf!

Sorry, valerio, but that's just how the story goes. Wort's since gotten involved with someone else in the RPG.

And if you want a "yappy happy character" who calls her that, you can make that character up yourself.

valerio · Post by **valerio** » Sun Oct 03, 2010 9:16 am

Forgot to tell.
Since I have still not the time to browse throughout the whole of the RPGs threads (I AN UNWORTHY, O GODS FORGIVE ME!!), including the one in which your characters are living, it's quite possible that some of my comments might sound 'out of place' to you. Please bear patience and remember that I can't give for granted situations I don't know of. *bows*
And your ficcies are still awesome BTW

furryovrlord · Post by **furryovrlord** » Sun Oct 03, 2010 9:45 pm

HEEEEY ^^ i like this Chewy :3 makes me want to write something now, hehe

ChewyChewy · Post by **ChewyChewy** » Sun Oct 03, 2010 9:52 pm

Thanks!

And best of luck with that!

furryovrlord · Post by **furryovrlord** » Sun Oct 03, 2010 9:55 pm

ChewyChewy wrote:Thanks! And best of luck with that!

hehe, well, i've written a few stories before, it earnt me a few fans X3
hmm, what to write about this time though.. hehe

Blue Braixen · Post by **Blue Braixen** » Sun Oct 03, 2010 10:30 pm

I've been thinking of writing one, too, but I can't figure out what/who it'll be about yet.

Private Elliot · Post by **Private Elliot** » Sun Oct 03, 2010 10:38 pm

@the whole story
/slow raising clap that turns into a uproarious collection of clapping.

ChewyChewy · Post by **ChewyChewy** » Sun Oct 03, 2010 10:50 pm

Private Elliot wrote:@the whole story
/slow raising clap that turns into a uproarious collection of clapping.

You do believe in fairies!

Thank you very much for that! *bows*