Another Lonely Face

[yoyodude]

In hindsight, the last chapter probably had too much "hinting" and not enough "straight up telling".

[Private Elliot]

Ehh....
I guess.

[valerio]

In hindsight, the last chapter probably had too much "hinting" and not enough "straight up telling".

Yesss, I fear as much.
Now that you have set things clear, it makes a lot more sense and it is a very good ending
Had you planned a follow-up?

[yoyodude]

I do want to write up an epilogue to clean up my messy-as-all-heck ending

[Teh Brawler]

I do want to write up an epilogue to clean up my messy-as-all-heck ending

BUT I LIKE THE ENDING

[Barkeron]

In hindsight, the last chapter probably had too much "hinting" and not enough "straight up telling".

Well it wasn't too much hinting. Stop beating yourself up. The story wasn't bad. Even though, there is some unanswered questions, but whatever.

[Medli]

But you said it would end on a happy note, while this is for me rather semi-happy :/

[yoyodude]

But you said it would end on a happy note, while this is for me rather semi-happy :/

Happy enough compared to where it was going, how bout that? Jeremy had to "leave". Sasha "lost" a friend but gained something far more important.

*continues to beat himself up*

[valerio]

*ties dude's hands* NOW will you stop this beating, ah?

[yoyodude]

*break*




*punch*

[Barkeron]

*break*




*punch*

*Handcuffs you* Sorry, it had to be done..

[Private Elliot]

Quick! I'll hold him down!
Give him the sedative! Or how ever its spelled!1

[valerio]

*injects sedative*
Now, everyone "For he's a jolly god writer, for he's a jolly good writeeeerrr..."

[Private Elliot]

For he's a jolly god writer, for he's a jolly good writeeeerrr..
AND NOBODY CAN DENNNNYYYY

[valerio]

Hmm, I don't think he's listening anymore.
Heck, should've sung BEFORE sedating him!

[Private Elliot]

Hm.. I HAVE IDEA
*takes out baseball bat*
Now that i think about it... i should have just done this

[yoyodude]

X.x

Tender Loving Violence? Compliments through frying pans and conker-drugs?

Love you too guys

[yoyodude]

Just gonna bump this up one last time...

Something I feel needs to be mentioned: Some ends were left loose and questions remained unanswered because the story focuses on Jeremy. What Jeremy doesn't know, WE don't know. I find how Sasha's dad dissapeared to be irrelevant, simply becasue Jeremy wasn't informed. If you MUST know (and I may use this later...): Prehaps human Pete reported Sasha's dad for animal cruelty in order to get rid of him. With him out of the way he could provide Sasha with a nice owner so she could be happy, so King could be happy, so he'd want to be a dog! HMNMMMMMMM

[Private Elliot]

Just gonna bump this up one last time...

Something I feel needs to be mentioned: Some ends were left loose and questions remained unanswered because the story focuses on Jeremy. What Jeremy doesn't know, WE don't know. I find how Sasha's dad dissapeared to be irrelevant, simply becasue Jeremy wasn't informed. If you MUST know (and I may use this later...): Prehaps human Pete reported Sasha's dad for animal cruelty in order to get rid of him. With him out of the way he could provide Sasha with a nice owner so she could be happy, so King could be happy, so he'd want to be a dog! HMNMMMMMMM

I KNEW IT...
okay so i didnt...

[Teh Brawler]

Just gonna bump this up one last time...

Something I feel needs to be mentioned: Some ends were left loose and questions remained unanswered because the story focuses on Jeremy. What Jeremy doesn't know, WE don't know. I find how Sasha's dad dissapeared to be irrelevant, simply becasue Jeremy wasn't informed. If you MUST know (and I may use this later...): Prehaps human Pete reported Sasha's dad for animal cruelty in order to get rid of him. With him out of the way he could provide Sasha with a nice owner so she could be happy, so King could be happy, so he'd want to be a dog! HMNMMMMMMM

I KNEW IT...
okay so i didnt...

Psh, that's not a fun way to do it. Pete obviously just snapped and sent him to comic character lingo, where all the unreferenced comic characters go.

He's probably having tea with Pap right now.