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JUST AN INTRO!!!
INTRO__________

Grape yawned as she got out of bed. She could hear voices in the other room.
“But Mom!” She heard Peanut say.
“… its okay, another …wont be that ...” She heard her mom say.
She came in the room rubbing her eyes. It was the living room. Peanut was on the couch to the left of the doorway with a T.V in front of it. Mom next to the couch and behind mom there was another doorway to the kitchen.
“Whats up?” Grape asked with another yawn.
“Well, Grape. Me and your Dad have decided to get another cat.” Their Mom explained.
Grape sat for a couple of seconds.
“Your replacing us?!?!” Grape said as her eyes went HUGE.
“No!No! Just, the pound has been finding a lot of hurt sick cats around the streets and we thought we could help free up some space by adopting one.” Their Mom looked back and forth at them.
Minutes past. All they did was look at each other.
“Mo-Mom…” Peanut started.
“Yes Peanut?” His mom replied.
“Does that mean we can get a third Wii Remote?”

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Hahahaha!
Just like Peanut, to ask such a question!
Loved this intro. Give us mooooaar! :D
(Please, no aliens THIS time! Or devils! Or time warps...) :shock:

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valerio wrote:
Hahahaha!
Just like Peanut, to ask such a question!
Loved this intro. Give us mooooaar! :D
(Please, no aliens THIS time! Or devils! Or time warps...) :shock:

I hope that doesn't happen. :?

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Hopper200456 wrote:
valerio wrote:
Hahahaha!
Just like Peanut, to ask such a question!
Loved this intro. Give us mooooaar! :D
(Please, no aliens THIS time! Or devils! Or time warps...) :shock:

I hope that doesn't happen. :?


Hope? I'm sure you can write a perfectly normal, perfectly none wacky story.... With Grape strangling the new cat maybe?

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Post Re: An old Friend.
A great start to an new fic. Peanut can be so predicable sometimes.


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YEEAAH. Hoopa iz back in da game!!!

Welcome back from your 3 second break, Hippitiy-hop!

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CHAPTER 1____________

Grape and Peanut sat on the couch and waited for the new cat to arrive.
“What do you think he will look like?” Peanut asked.
“I don’t know.” Grape replied
“He will probable be dirty.” Peanut said.
”That’s what I was thinking.”
“Do you think you will like him?” Peanut asked again.
“I don’t kn-“
“Do you think he will like ME??” Peanut said looking kinda’ worried.
“Lets find out.” Grape said as she saw the car pull up in the driveway.
Mr. Sandwich opened the door and came in Ms. Sandwich following him carrying a big white box.
Peanut tried to peek in the cracks of the box as his Mom went by. He could see two little eyes.
Their Mom set the box down on the carpet.
“Grape, Peanut.” She started as she reached for latch of the pet carrier.
“Meet Streak.” Their Mom finished as a black cat came out of the box. He was male, and all black except for the red streak on his hair that was long around the forehead almost covering his eyes but it was combed out. Streak was his name at the shelter, The sandwiches hadn’t found out what they wanted to call him.
“Hi there!” He said with a smile.
He had no collar.
“Hi. Im Grape.”
“Peanut!” Peanut said wagging his tail.
“Peanut,” Their Mom started. “Want to show Streak around?”
“Sure!”

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Wut! Awesome =3

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streak eerily reminds me of Scythe.
but because
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He said with a smile.

that instantly tells them apart.

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I like this. Keep writing ^^

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Zander wrote:
streak eerily reminds me of Scythe.
but because
Hopper200456 wrote:
He said with a smile.

that instantly tells them apart.


OH MY!
I look at you avi and BOOM!
Its like Im looking at him!
...Kinda.
Streak's Streak (lol.) is wider.

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EEEEEEE!!!
CUTIE CAT!
Wanna snuggle newbie Streak!
Keep writing, Hop!

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Hmm....

Grape Jelly Sandwitch
Peanut Butter Sandwitch
.....
Streak must be named to Marsh Mallow Sandwitch!

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valerio wrote:
EEEEEEE!!!
CUTIE CAT!
Wanna snuggle newbie Streak!
Keep writing, Hop!


Streak: Ug...Please...Air....Losing....


Jirodyne wrote:
Hmm....

Grape Jelly Sandwitch
Peanut Butter Sandwitch
.....
Streak must be named to Marsh Mallow Sandwitch!


Streak: Uh, No. :S

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Hopper200456 wrote:
Streak: Ug...Please...Air....Losing....


that also proves that streak doesnt resemble scythe.

Scythe would have tore you apart and walked away if you hugged him.

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Zander wrote:
Hopper200456 wrote:
Streak: Ug...Please...Air....Losing....


that also proves that streak doesnt resemble scythe.

Scythe would have tore you apart and walked away if you hugged him.


Streak: Scythe? :?

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5 stars for streak!

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Hopper200456 wrote:
Jirodyne wrote:
Hmm....

Grape Jelly Sandwitch
Peanut Butter Sandwitch
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Streak must be named to Marsh Mallow Sandwitch!


Streak: Uh, No. :S


Then how about Marshmallow Fluff Sandwitch? or Fluff Marshmallow Sandwitch? Or Spicy Chicken Sandwitch!

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Jirodyne wrote:
Hopper200456 wrote:
Jirodyne wrote:
Hmm....

Grape Jelly Sandwitch
Peanut Butter Sandwitch
.....
Streak must be named to Marsh Mallow Sandwitch!


Streak: Uh, No. :S


Then how about Marshmallow Fluff Sandwitch? or Fluff Marshmallow Sandwitch? Or Spicy Chicken Sandwitch!


Streak: Uh, Thank you but Ill pass.


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5 stars for streak!


Streak:Thanks! I am going to have to get dad-Uh,Hopper to finish chapter 2.

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Jirodyne wrote:
Hopper200456 wrote:
Jirodyne wrote:
Hmm....

Grape Jelly Sandwitch
Peanut Butter Sandwitch
.....
Streak must be named to Marsh Mallow Sandwitch!


Streak: Uh, No. :S


Then how about Marshmallow Fluff Sandwitch? or Fluff Marshmallow Sandwitch? Or Spicy Chicken Sandwitch!

Not to bring back an old-ish topic (hehe), but I'm all for Marshy! It would be perfect, other than the fact that that's not a sandwich name, and I HIGHLY doubt streak is a pedogogue :P .
(Here's a link or two if you don't get the joke:
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I get the joke.Homestar runner!

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Streak: Scythe? :?


Scythe emerges from the shadows, seemingly out of nowhere.
"Heh, i see you copying my style a bit eh?" Scythe puts his arm around Streak. "Why dont we walk over here and... talk.. about it. sound good?"

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Zander wrote:
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Streak: Scythe? :?


Scythe emerges from the shadows, seemingly out of nowhere.
"Heh, i see you copying my style a bit eh?" Scythe puts his arm around Streak. "Why dont we walk over here and... talk.. about it. sound good?"


Don't do it! It's a trap! :o

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Zander wrote:
Hopper200456 wrote:
Streak: Scythe? :?


Scythe emerges from the shadows, seemingly out of nowhere.
"Heh, i see you copying my style a bit eh?" Scythe puts his arm around Streak. "Why dont we walk over here and... talk.. about it. sound good?"


Streak: What about? Depends. And no, You can't own my soul.

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I'm interested in finding out the relevancy of the story's title. Who in the story will have "An Old Friend" they know? :o I guess we'll just have to wait and see. :D

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this is nice!
when i saw Streaks name I thought it said 'Steak'
it took me a while to see the 'r' :lol:

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^same as The Game. Hehe ;p

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^same as The Game. Hehe ;p

TOBEE! You made me LOSE THE GAME!!! UNNECESSARY ALL CAPS REMARK, GO!!!

Oh yeah, and I still think you're doing a good job, hoppity.

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Guys, didn't he already say before that it would be Grape who has the old friend?

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Guys, didn't he already say before that it would be Grape who has the old friend?

He did. Why do you ask?

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I think hes remarking Lightwolfs reply?

I think I failed somewhere at wording, I think, somewhere, in the sentence above, maybe.

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I think hes remarking Lightwolfs reply?

Yeah, I am.

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"Hopper, What are you doing?"
"THIS I SPARTA!!!! CHAAAAAAARRRRGGG!!!"
"WHat the?" *BOOOM* *CRASH* *BANG!*
Ah! Its okay, This story isn't dead...
Two siblings and a friend took my laptop for awhile and haven't had time to write.
Its okay, I fought through them.
Im working on it right now!
Good news: It came. :D

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Chapter 2_________

After Streak goti used to everyone/places, he came to Grape.
“You know?” Streak came in the room saying with almost a smile almost as big as Max’s (Almost.)
“What?” Grape said as she sat on the couch.
“You remind me of someone I know.”
“Really?” Grape said yawning.
“Yup. She the most funny name.”
“Really.” Grape said curling up as if she wasn’t listening.
“Yeah, She was my best friend back then. Well… My only Friend.”
“Back when?…” Grape said closing her eyes
“When I was at the shelter.” Streak said frowning.
“Hmm……” Grape said…Kind of.
“Yeah, She looked a lot like you.”
“really…” Grape said barely moving her mouth.
“Her name was: Princess Periwinkle.”
Grape Opened her eyes as they widened.

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Dr. Prower wrote:
Tobee wrote:
I think hes remarking Lightwolfs reply?

Yeah, I am.


I didn't get that memo :(

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I'm interested in finding out the relevancy of the story's title. Who in the story will have "An Old Friend" they know? :o I guess we'll just have to wait and see. :D


lightwolf21 wrote:
I didn't get that memo :(


There :p

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“You know?” Streak came in the room saying with almost a smile almost as big as Max’s (Almost.)
Grape Opened her eyes as they widened.

Someone needs to Draw these! xD

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DUH. DUH. DAH-DAH-DUUUUUUHHHH!!!

Good intro of plot twist, dude!

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hmm, so Grape is the forgetful one..?
I see Peanut's jealousymeter skyrocketing... :?

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Chapter 3___________
"Your..." Grape said as her eyes widened.
"Yes, I'm him..." Streak said with a sparkle in his eye.
After many long hours explaining why Grape fainted
Every one finally belived him.
"That's kinda wierd..." Peanut told Streak.
"You guys have known each other for years and I didn't
even know who you are..."
Streak noded as Peanut talked.
"I need to tell you my bigest secret." Streak started.
"I'm a time traveler."
Ed's note:see doctor who theme on youtube...

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