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Through the Lapses of Time. 
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...and that's why he's called Cliff Hanger!!!!....
CAN'T...HOLD....ON....MUCH....LONGER....!

kudos if you know where that's from

LOL It's been a long time since I've seen that!

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Grape's eyes widened in fear of what was just spoken.

They turned away from her, facing toward two fancy double doors at the front of the church, two of the three got on both sides and opened both doors simultaneously in front of the third.

The third started speaking by himself.

“This machine was made for the purpose of keeping the time stream intact. If you put a living being inside this capsule, the machine will break down every atom of the body and split each individual atom. The energy released from the atom will be harnessed inside the chamber, travel along the wire, and into the watch when it is plugged in, essentially recharging it. Why don't we have a demonstration? Mm?”

“Release him!” The third yelled to the other two who were standing beside the doors.

When the third moved out of the way Grape got a better view of the machine. It was large, with what looks like a glass cylinder which must be the “Chamber”

The two pulled out Bud from the chamber, dragging him toward the machine. He must have been knocked out because he wasn't moving.

“Hey! Let go of my friend!” Grape yelled to the two as they opened the chamber.

She started running toward the front of the church, knowing that if they killed Bud Peanut would never return to normal.

The two were distracted for a second, turning to look at the feline who was running toward them.
Grape ran up the front stairs, dodging a blow thrown by the first, and ran straight toward the other two, she jumped as hard as she could toward one of them, causing them to go off balance and stammer backwards.

He fell straight into the chamber, and the second he did, the doors closed.

He got up inside the chamber and started banging on the Glass, yelling something to the others.

The other two dropped Bud and ran toward the back of the church, covering there eyes.

Grape stayed up on the front stage and watched as the Chamber lit up really bright, then turned red.

She was in trance by the light, until a bright flare of white light burst out like turning a strong flashlight on in your face.

She stammered back shielding her eyes, but it was too late, everything was red, all she could see was red.

She fell down the stairs as she was walking backwards, landing on her back.

She closed her eyes one more time, and opened them up again to try to regain vision.

When she opened them she saw Charlotte standing over her, worried.

Grape got up and looked around, she was back in the Hotel lobby.

“What happened” Charlotte asked.




Sorry, but i have a life other then the computer you know. :P

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Tue Jun 15, 2010 9:51 am
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Sorry, but i have a life other then the computer you know. :P

I don't lol. Nice update ^^

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Zander wrote:
Sorry, but i have a life other then the computer you know. :P


That's ok real life should always come first.

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it shows
I don't know what's happening.
RL is futile.

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Hey Zander sorry to bug you like this but its been awhile and I just wanted to know if your going to continue this or is it dead? (I hope not I really liked this fic.)

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Hey Zander sorry to bug you like this but its been awhile and I just wanted to know if your going to continue this or is it dead? (I hope not I really liked this fic.)


Im trying to work on a long update. :P

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heres a small part to hold you over until thats finished.



Grapes Headache didn't get any better with Charlotte's Piercing voice in her ear.

“I don't know... was it a dream?” Grape got up, sore for some reason.

“You were out for like, I don't know, 10 minutes? Me and Peanut were worried sick about you...”

Grapes eyes widened as she turned around to be met with the friendly face of her best friend.

Grape wrapped her arms around him in sweet reunion.

“I thought I had lost you forever.” She was almost in tears.

Charlotte interrupted there reunion with a question.

“What are you talking about?” She pulled the two apart

“Hes been with us ever since you brought me into this mess.” Charlotte tried to explain.

Grape, confused, turned back toward Peanut. “Wh- what happened? What are you talk-” She stopped when she looked at peanut further.

He had different color eyes, brown to be exact, and his fur was a slightly brighter shade of brown.

“wait a minute- w- what happened?!” She looked at Peanut.

Charlotte answered instead. “Well we were walking out of the lobby to go find Peanuts dad or something, and you fell on the ground and passed out.

“no- no I mean what happened to peanut?” Grape held her arms out to peanut as to gesture to him.

“Grape- what are you talking about?” peanut said, looking down at his body to see if anything was on him or something else.

“Just forget it.” Grape turned around “So where were we going?”

“I don't know... how would you find someone that's in a different time?” Charlotte chimed in.

Grape looked down at the watch, which was glowing brighter, which probably meant it was recharged.

“Just set it to go back about 5 years and we could probably protect Bud before they take him...” Charlotte suggested.

“I don't know how to read this thing, let alone how to use it... But I think I know someone that does” Grape snapped her fingers together.

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Oooooh, I wonder who's she gonna go to. *has an idea**

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Nice update there, Zander.


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short update, but intense.
Wanna see where--I mean, WHEN it leads :mrgreen:

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Awesome! Off through time to save Peanut's bud!

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Really nice! Sometimes it's a little hard for me to know what just happened but I eventually get it so It's all good :D
Can't wait for the next update!

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Love it!
Do more!Do more!

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