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So here's how this is going to play out. This is mainly different stories about the residents of Babylon Gardens, but the two things they all have in common is that they take place on the same night during as the title suggested a thunder storm and some even have a similar pattern. With that, let's begin.
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The Hartford Residence

*BOOM*

Mark awoke from the loud thunder. He looked around for awhile and notice he was still in his bedroom.

"Whew! It's just some stupid thunder" He said to himself in relief.

But before Mark could go back to sleep, he heard a screeching sound his door was making. He looked at the door as it started to open reveling his dog Sasha.

"Daddy?" Said Sasha.

"What is it Sasha" Said Mark

"C-can I sleep with you until the storm passes" said Sasha as she started to shake.

Mark groaned "Sasha it's two in the morning and you know you're not allowed to sleep in my bed."

*BOOM*

Another thunder hit, startling the two. Mark started to hear a whimper from Sasha, making him feel a little guilty.

Mark Sighed "But I guess just for tonight, you can..."

Before Mark could finish, Sasha was already in his bed.

"Thank you daddy." Said Sasha as she snuggled up to him. "Good night."

Mark couldn't help but chuckle. It still amazes him that even though he treats Sasha badly sometimes, she still loves him. And even though he doesn't say it, she knew he felt the same as well.

"Good night, Sasha." Said Mark as he wrapped an arm around her and drifted off to sleep.

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Oooh... a point of view kind of story? I love these stuff. :D

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Seems good though the title makes me think of the power rangers ninja storm/Dino thunder team up.

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Adorable scene! : P

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Seems good though the title makes me think of the power rangers ninja storm/Dino thunder team up.

Back in elementary school, I made a joke about calling a spoof series as "Power Ranger Dino Ninja of the Wild Time."

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A nice little scene indeed! A very sweet take on the relationship between Sasha and her owner.

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It's kinda funny how it's only been a month and there's only one of this... but it was certainly a well-done scene and idea. I can really feel the sentimental appeals driven between Sasha and her owner; it actually felt like I was right there when it happened despite it being such a short scene. You've done a great job with this, Saturn. =3

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The Sandwich Residence

*BOOM*

Grape tossed back and forth in annoyance. Every attempt of going back to sleep would fail because of the thunder and lighting.

“Come on, why can’t it stop?!” shouted Grape.

*BOOM*

Grape sighed as she got up and left her room. She thought a drink would make things better. As she headed towards the kitchen, she noticed the TV in the living room was on. Curious, she entered the living room and saw her friend Peanut on the couch.

“Peanut?” said Grape.

Peanut turned his head around and saw Grape.

“Oh hey Grape.” said Peanut.

“Why are you watching TV at one A.M?” said Grape.

“I couldn’t sleep.” said Peanut.

“How come?” said Grape.

“I…had a bad day today.” said Peanut.

“Well I’m going to the kitchen to get a drink. You wanna talk about it there?” said Grape.

“Sure.” said Peanut as he got up, turned off the TV, and followed Grape.

Peanut got out two cups while Grape got out a carton of milk.

“So what happen” said Grape as she poured milk into the two cups.

“Bino said something that got me upset.” said Peanut.

“What did he say?” said Grape as she took a sip of her milk.

“That you and Tarot don’t care about me.” said Peanut as he lowered his head.

They sat there in silence for a full minute until Grape started to talk.

“Don’t listen what Bino said Peanut. What makes you think that stuff is even true?” said Grape.

"Well, Tarot and I haven't been hanging out for a few weeks." said Peanut.

"So what? That doesn't mean anything." said Grape

“But…” said Peanut before he got interrupted by Grape.

“Tell me this Peanut. How long have you been dating Tarot?” said Grape.

“Five years.” said Peanut.

“And has she forgiven you every time you mess up?” said Grape.

“Yes.” said Peanut.

“So with all those factors in, I don’t think Tarot will ever stop caring.” said Grape

“But what about you?” said Peanut.

“Peanut, you’re my best friend. You'd think I will ever stop caring about you? Heck no. Not even words can describe how much you mean to me.” said Grape.

“Really?” said Peanut.

“Of course.” said Grape.

Peanut smiled as his tail began to wag.

“Well it’s getting pretty late. I think we should go back to bed” said Grape as she drank up the rest of her milk.

Peanut nodded as he did the same. The two putted their cups in the sink as they headed back to their rooms.

“Hey Grape?” said Peanut.

“Yes Peanut?” said Grape.

As she turned around, Peanut wrapped his arms around the cat’s neck, hugging her tight.

“Thank you.” said Peanut.

“Hehe, you’re welcome” said Grape as she gratefully returned the hug.
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Man, six months without an update. Sorry it took so long guys. :oops:

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Not bad. Looking forward to some more.

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Ooh! This is back! :D
I like little scenes like this. They give me the warm fuzzies :D
Hope to see more!

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This is bad...






APRIL FOOLS! :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

I LOVE EM! VERY nice job Saturn! I can see very well in my mind's eye what is happening, which means you've written them well!

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These are really good. I wish I could write well.

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hypernovatic wrote:
These are really good. I wish I could write well.

Same here, everytinm I try and write, i get different points of view, unfinished parts, bad message delivery, etc. ugggh

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Ah, so now we see The sandwich household! Cute scene there. Glad Peanut has someone who can help alleviate him of his doubts.

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The D'Angelo Residence

*BOOM*

“Great night huh Tarot? said Sabrina as she looked through her window?

“Sure.” said Tarot from behind.

Sabrina turned around and saw a sad Tarot sitting on the floor looking at some cards.

“What’s wrong Tarot?” said Sabrina.

“Nothing.” said Tarot.

“Don’t lie to me Tarot. Rarely do I see you like this.” said Sabrina.

“Just thinking.” said Tarot.

“About what?” said Sabrina.

“Peanut.” said Tarot.

Sabrina rolled her eyes.

“You’re thinking about it again Tarot? What makes you believe Peanut will ever dump you?” said Sabrina.

“We haven’t been dating for a while.” said Tarot.

“How does that prove anything? I mean he chose you over Dragon for crying out loud!” said Sabrina.

“Just like the others…” said Tarot as she started to tear up.

Sabrina was caught off guard from what Tarot said. She was told before that Peanut wasn’t the first boyfriend Tarot had. Sabrina realized that Tarot’s doubts and worries were still there.

Sabrina walked towards Tarot as she put her hands on Tarot’s shoulders.

“Tarot, there’s nothing to worry about. Maybe if you talk to Peanut about it, things will be alright.” said Sabrina.

“How do you know it’ll be alright?” said Tarot.

“I don’t. But knowing Peanut, I’m sure you two can work it out.” said Sabrina.

“I guess you’re right. I’ll talk to Peanut about it tomorrow. Thanks Sabrina.” said Tarot.

“Don’t mention it.” said Sabrina.

Tarot wiped her tears away as she got up.

“Tell you what, how about we go make some cookies.” said Sabrina.

“Okay.” said Tarot as she followed Sabrina to the kitchen.

“By the way, how’s Fido and Marie doing?” said Tarot.

“Doing good actually. Today we…” said Sabrina.

She stopped talking when she saw a fox picking at some flowers that where on a table.

“Karishad, what are you doing?” said Sabrina.

Karishad look up and saw the two. His frustrated expression turned into a happy one.

“Finding some two lips my ladies.” said Karishad as he continued his picking.

Sabrina and Tarot looked at each other as they started to giggle.
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Hmm, I wonder who Marie could be? ;)

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'Nother good read, but... Marie? My gawsh, when did Fido and Sabrina break up!? I Must KNOWW!!!

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The Byron Residence

*BOOM*

Fido woke up in shock. He just realized he was in his room. He sighed in relief.

“You okay?” said Spo who was at the foot of Fido’s bed.

“Yeah, just a nightmare.” said Fido. He could feel his throat all dried up.

“I think I’m going to get drink of water. You need anything?” said Fido.

“Nah, I’m fine.” said Spo.

“Alright, good night Spo.” said Fido.

“Good night.” said Spo as he went back to sleep.

Fido quietly stepped out of his room. As he headed to the kitchen, he saw his dad Ryan sitting at the table having a drink.

“Hey dad.” said Fido.

“Oh hey Fido. Couldn’t sleep? ” Said Ryan.

“Nah, I had a nightmare. What about you?” said Fido.

“Nope.” said Ryan.

Fido got a cup and filled it with water.

“Fido, there’s something I wanted to talk to you about.” said Ryan.

“What is it?” said Fido.

“Have you ever thought about quitting the K9U?” said Ryan.

“No, why would I do that?” said Fido.

“I’m just worried about you. Weird things have been going on recently and who knows what will happen now that everyone now knows about you and Sabrina.” said Ryan.

“Dad, I’ll be okay. I’ve dealt with some weird things in the past, and Sabrina has taken me to places that are hard to describe. If I can handle all of those things, I can handle what will happen in the future.” said Fido.

“Alright, I’ll trust you.” said Ryan.

“Papa…” said a small voice.

Fido and Ryan turned around and saw a Chartreux kitten on the verge of tears. Fido walk towards the kitten and gave her a hug.

“Did you had a bad dream too sweetheart?” said Fido.

“Mmhm.” said the kitten.

“There there, it’s okay.” said Fido.

Fido let go of the kitten and saw her calming down.

“Why don’t you sleep with me tonight. Would that be okay?” said Fido.

The kitten nodded as Fido picked her up.

“Say good night to grandpa Marie.” said Fido.

"Bon nuit grand-père." said Marie.

“Good night Marie.” said Ryan.
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Who... Is Marie'? The world may never know! Actually we will find out some point in the future won't we.
Have Fido and Sabrina adopted a French immigrant? Don't ask me, of course wouldn't know. :P

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The Costner Residence

*BOOM*

Maxwell sighed as he looked at the ceiling in his room.

“Could you stop sighing? I’m trying to sleep.” said Bino who was lying in a different bed in the other side of the room.

“Sorry, I was just thinking.” said Max.

“About what?” said Bino.

“Grape…” said Max.

“Oh will you shut up about her? Every time you talk about her, you whine about how you’re not good enough. Even when she told you it doesn't matter what you do, you still whine.” said Bino.

“I’m sorry it’s just I’m scared. Grape is awesome and every girlfriend I had would leave me because I always screw up. Sometimes fear she would leave like the rest did.” said Max.

“Look why don’t you just talk to her about this. Tell her how you feel. I’m sure you two can find a way to work it out.” said Bino.

“Alright, I’ll talk to her tomorrow. Thanks Bino.” said Max.

“Don’t mention it.” said Bino.

“Oh hey I almost forgot, how come you’ve decided to bring Fido back to the Good Ol’ Dogs Club?” said Max.

“I don’t want to talk about it.” said Bino.

“Come on.” said Max as he gave his usual cheshire like grin.

“No.” said Bino.

“I won’t tell anyone.” said Max.

“Goodnight Max.” said Bino.

“Was it because of Marie?” said Max.

“GOODNIGHT MAX!” said Bino.

Maxwell rolled his eyes, knowing he wasn’t going to get an answer.

“Goodnight Bino.” said Max as laid down on his bed and drifted off to sleep.
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Credit goes to Valerio for the last name Costner.

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They're all weaving together
This is a fun and daw-able series here. And now I gotta know what Marie's part in all this is :D

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