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Vanilla the Bully

Posted: Wed Apr 10, 2013 11:17 pm
by ChewyChewy
EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.

Re: Vanilla the Bully

Posted: Wed Apr 10, 2013 11:30 pm
by RandomGeekNamedBrent
heh, I take it this is based on your comment in the chat thread the other day. fun.

Re: Vanilla the Bully

Posted: Wed Apr 10, 2013 11:33 pm
by ChewyChewy
RandomGeekNamedBrent wrote:heh, I take it this is based on your comment in the chat thread the other day. fun.
Actually, no, it isn't, but thanks for reminding me of that.... :?

Re: Vanilla the Bully

Posted: Thu Apr 11, 2013 7:48 pm
by copper
Huh, wonder what kind of power she received unwillingly...

Re: Vanilla the Bully

Posted: Mon Apr 15, 2013 9:19 am
by ChewyChewy
EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.

Re: Vanilla the Bully

Posted: Mon Apr 15, 2013 10:53 am
by kavviyenta
The Chimera sure isn't subtle if Vanilla can openly explain about her cursed blessing.

First time for McGruff to appear. I was thinking you might have use a Captain Ersatz substitute like McGurdle from Honorable Intention's fic or when Rick use Alan and the Groundsquirrels.

Re: Vanilla the Bully

Posted: Mon Apr 15, 2013 4:17 pm
by 44R0NM10
I'm enjoying this as per usual Chewy. Vanilla getting some sort of power in interesting, a great idea obviously. I'm unsure exactly what she'll do with it, but I think that's why I like Vanilla so much. Smart, yet unpredictable, but in that way where I always understand her reasoning afterwards due to your writing!

Sorry this took me awhile to read, but thanks for telling me about, I'm looking forward for more. ^^

Re: Vanilla the Bully

Posted: Mon Apr 15, 2013 6:45 pm
by copper
Hmm, I wonder when she goes overboard and the title begins to make more sense...

As for Vanilla, seems she will need to repeat it a few more times at that! :roll:

Re: Vanilla the Bully

Posted: Mon Apr 15, 2013 9:05 pm
by RandomGeekNamedBrent
I'm pretty sure this isn't the Chimera's doing, but something else. Seeing as how she kinda blew the Chimera away and he wasn't expecting it.

also, since I just read your first story with the Cakes, was that whole longest night thing the chimera's doing? or is there some other supernatural thing that caused that and this power?

Re: Vanilla the Bully

Posted: Mon Apr 15, 2013 9:15 pm
by ChewyChewy
RandomGeekNamedBrent wrote:I'm pretty sure this isn't the Chimera's doing, but something else. Seeing as how she kinda blew the Chimera away and he wasn't expecting it.

also, since I just read your first story with the Cakes, was that whole longest night thing the chimera's doing? or is there some other supernatural thing that caused that and this power?
That longest night was a parody of A Christmas Carol, nothing more, nothing less.

Re: Vanilla the Bully

Posted: Mon Apr 15, 2013 9:22 pm
by RandomGeekNamedBrent
wrong. there weren't any ghosts (something less) and Vanilla, unlike Scrooge, woke up from her visions earlier than when she went in (something more).
though I suppose those cancel each other out, so you may be right.

but still, good to know it doesn't have much bearing on the main story.

Re: Vanilla the Bully

Posted: Tue Apr 16, 2013 10:25 am
by ChewyChewy
Oh, hush now. :P

EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.

Re: Vanilla the Bully

Posted: Wed Apr 17, 2013 10:33 pm
by copper
Well, that is a good thing! She at least managed to control the strength she has.... only question I have is if she will become corrupted by her own power or not.... even the righteous can succumb at times....

I wonder how Honey will react to the badge once she sees it, or her dad...

Nice new characters! Are they a once only appearance?

Re: Vanilla the Bully

Posted: Thu Apr 25, 2013 11:30 am
by ChewyChewy
EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.

Re: Vanilla the Bully

Posted: Thu Apr 25, 2013 1:50 pm
by copper
Ouch, looks like Vanilla is getting too strong... sucks big time....

Nice Lord Of The Ring's reference there! :lol:

I wonder what gave her that power if not the Chimera...

Re: Vanilla the Bully

Posted: Sat May 04, 2013 2:29 pm
by ChewyChewy
EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.

Re: Vanilla the Bully

Posted: Sat May 04, 2013 4:00 pm
by kavviyenta
She only has super strength, now she's treated as if she's the juggernaut. :o

Re: Vanilla the Bully

Posted: Sat May 04, 2013 8:38 pm
by RandomGeekNamedBrent
so now I'm thinking this is the chimera's doing, but he made her stronger than he intended. So now he's scared.

also, classing Twilight Zone reference in there.

Re: Vanilla the Bully

Posted: Sat May 04, 2013 9:19 pm
by ChewyChewy
RandomGeekNamedBrent wrote:so now I'm thinking this is the chimera's doing, but he made her stronger than he intended. So now he's scared.

also, classing Twilight Zone reference in there.
Which Twilight Zone reference? :? If I did make a reference it was purely an accident.

EDIT: Forget it, I did it on purpose and totally forgot. :oops: I am so embarrassed....

Re: Vanilla the Bully

Posted: Sat May 04, 2013 9:32 pm
by RandomGeekNamedBrent
ChewyChewy wrote:It's GOOD that you took care of that troublemaker, Miss Cake.
that's what everyone said in the episode with Anthony sending everyone to the cornfield in this episode

Re: Vanilla the Bully

Posted: Sat May 04, 2013 11:08 pm
by ChewyChewy
RandomGeekNamedBrent wrote:
ChewyChewy wrote:It's GOOD that you took care of that troublemaker, Miss Cake.
that's what everyone said in the episode with Anthony sending everyone to the cornfield in this episode
*facepalm*

Okay...would you believe I totally forgot I put that in there? :oops: Please ignore what I said above....

Re: Vanilla the Bully

Posted: Sat May 04, 2013 11:27 pm
by RandomGeekNamedBrent
I would believe that.

Re: Vanilla the Bully

Posted: Sun May 05, 2013 3:12 am
by copper
Well, she overreacted...

That chimera sure is a troublemaker. I hope she gives him a good punch in the face before he takes the power back.

Re: Vanilla the Bully

Posted: Sun May 05, 2013 10:32 am
by ChewyChewy
copper wrote:Well, she overreacted...

That chimera sure is a troublemaker. I hope she gives him a good punch in the face before he takes the power back.
Actually, that's probably exactly what the chimera WANTS her to do....

Re: Vanilla the Bully

Posted: Sun May 05, 2013 3:25 pm
by copper
Oh please, the chimera screwed up more than likely and meant to give her emotional strength, but instead gave her physical strength. Now he is just covering. :roll:

Re: Vanilla the Bully

Posted: Sun May 05, 2013 4:12 pm
by RandomGeekNamedBrent
as I said, something went wrong. The chimera is obviously scared of her. and let's not forget
ChewyChewy wrote:Vanilla couldn't be sure, but she thought it had an expression on its faces that indicated that it had not planned that.
the only question is, did he make her stronger than he planned? did he give her the wrong kind of strength? did he do exactly as he planned, but didn't expect her to not be in control of it?

Re: Vanilla the Bully

Posted: Sun May 05, 2013 6:27 pm
by ChewyChewy
@copper: Are you writing this story or am I? :P

@Brent: Just going to have to wait and see.... ;)

Re: Vanilla the Bully

Posted: Sun May 05, 2013 9:35 pm
by kavviyenta
I imagine this version of the Chimera to look like this link only cuter?

The thought of him/her/them cowering make this even funnier.

Re: Vanilla the Bully

Posted: Sun May 05, 2013 9:46 pm
by ChewyChewy
kavviyenta wrote:I imagine this version of the Chimera to look like this link only cuter?

The thought of him/her/them cowering make this even funnier.
Not "cuter", but more cartoony--like Discord in My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic.

Re: Vanilla the Bully

Posted: Tue May 07, 2013 1:16 pm
by ChewyChewy
EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.

Re: Vanilla the Bully

Posted: Wed May 08, 2013 2:11 pm
by kavviyenta
And that led to Honey having a layered dream experience.

Is the white rabbit Chimera's avatar? (Since they're not part of U&U, I assumed that can be allowed)

Re: Vanilla the Bully

Posted: Wed May 08, 2013 2:30 pm
by ChewyChewy
kavviyenta wrote:And that led to Honey having a layered dream experience.

Is the white rabbit Chimera's avatar? (Since they're not part of U&U, I assumed that can be allowed)
:lol: No. :P

Not at all--Peter is more powerful than the chimera is. I tried to make that obvious--Peter wouldn't let the chimera do something. The chimera has no control over Peter.

Re: Vanilla the Bully

Posted: Wed May 08, 2013 5:40 pm
by RandomGeekNamedBrent
ChewyChewy wrote:
kavviyenta wrote:And that led to Honey having a layered dream experience.

Is the white rabbit Chimera's avatar? (Since they're not part of U&U, I assumed that can be allowed)
:lol: No. :P

Not at all--Peter is more powerful than the chimera is. I tried to make that obvious--Peter wouldn't let the chimera do something. The chimera has no control over Peter.
I actually forgot about Peter. I guess that's what he wanted, though. :lol:

Re: Vanilla the Bully

Posted: Thu May 09, 2013 9:22 pm
by copper
And so it ends... I wondered about Peter! So they are playing their own little game, eh? How fun!

I hope that Brutus learned a thing or two as well...

Honey and Vanilla hugging it out. Is there anything more precious than that? :D

Re: Vanilla the Bully

Posted: Thu May 09, 2013 9:29 pm
by ChewyChewy
copper wrote:And so it ends... I wondered about Peter! So they are playing their own little game, eh? How fun!

I hope that Brutus learned a thing or two as well...

Honey and Vanilla hugging it out. Is there anything more precious than that? :D
What makes you think it's a game?

Who's "Brutus"? :? Do you mean Bruno?

:D

Glad you liked it!

Re: Vanilla the Bully

Posted: Thu May 09, 2013 9:41 pm
by copper
Yep, Bruno.... I keep wanting to call him Brutus! :lol:

Re: Vanilla the Bully

Posted: Thu May 09, 2013 9:44 pm
by ChewyChewy
copper wrote:Yep, Bruno.... I keep wanting to call him Brutus! :lol:
:lol: If this were a comic I might have Honey and Vanilla imaginate Julius Caesar.... :roll:

Re: Vanilla the Bully

Posted: Thu May 09, 2013 10:12 pm
by copper
Only if there is a Cassius too!