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This is a new fanfic I'm working on. This is my first Housepets! fanfic, so please go easy on me in the comments. Constructive criticism is welcome, and I appreciate you stopping by to read this! :D
Also,I'm still working on the casting, so if you guys have any suggestions, I would appreciate it! All casted characters must be members of Peanut and Grape's friend group.

Here's the casting so far:
Peanut: Dr. Alan Grant
Grape: Dr. Ellie Sattler
Maxwell: Dr Ian Malcolm
Undecided: John Hammond(Seriously, I would appreciate some suggestions)
Undecided: Lex Murphy
Undecided: Tim Murphy
Fox(Maybe): Robert Muldoon
Bino: Donald Genaro
Dallas: Ray Arnold
Undecided: Dennis Nedry
Undecided: Geoffrey (That guy who dies in the opening scene)
Undecided: Henry Wu
The rest of Peanut and Grape's friend group will play the roles of generic archeologists and InGen employees.



Prologue: A Park Beyond Imagination

Peanut woke Grape abruptly, as he usually did...

Peanut: Graa-aape!

Grape: Peanut, what do you want? I was having an awesome dream about a dinner date with Max!

Peanut: I'm bored again!

Grape yawned, and sat up on the couch.

Grape: Okay, fine, what do you want to do?

Peanut: We should imaginate something!

Grape: Like what?

Peanut: How about that movie we saw with Mom and Dad last weekend?

Grape: You mean Jurassic Park?

Peanut: Yeah! Come on, it'll be fun!

Grape, now fully awake, jumped off the couch

Grape: Alright, let's call up some of the guys and see if anyone can join us!

Peanut: Yay!

It was then that Peanut gave Grape a big hug, and they went off the ask their friends to join them, saying...

Let's Imaginate Jurassic Park!
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Nice work so far. For John Hammond I’d say Miles, and for Lex and Tim I’d say Ace and Rook (King’s pups). For Dennis Nedry Lester, and Joey as Henry Wu.
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trekkie wrote:Nice work so far. For John Hammond I’d say Miles, and for Lex and Tim I’d say Ace and Rook (King’s pups). For Dennis Nedry Lester, and Joey as Henry Wu.
Alright, thanks for the advice!

Completed Casting:
Peanut: Dr. Alan Grant
Grape: Dr. Ellie Sattler
Maxwell: Dr Ian Malcolm
Miles: John Hammond
Ace: Lex Murphy
Rook: Tim Murphy
Fox: Robert Muldoon
Bino: Donald Genaro
Dallas: Ray Arnold
Lester: Dennis Nedry
Joey: Henry Wu
King, Bailey, Kevin, Fido, Mungo: Generic archeologists and InGen employees
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Neat idea, this sounds fun :D
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I can see this actually being a very great story! Can't wait to see more from it!
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Wow, thanks for the support, you guys! :D I just know it, this is gonna be a great fanfic!

Chapter 1: SHOOOOOOOOT HER!

InGen Employees stood around the new velociraptor pen as a rumbling could be heard in the distance. A crane came into view, carrying a large shipping container.

Max: Shipping as in me and Grape?

Fox: No, shipping as in Fedex!

Max: ...I knew that. It's not like I wanted to make out with Grape in a box or anything...

Max(whispering to the audience): Cat fantasies.

The contents of the container growled, and the-

Peanut: Hey Grape?

Grape: sighs What is it Peanut?

Peanut: Can velociraptors talk? I mean, dogs and cats and birds can talk so why not raptors?

Grape: Well... I guess you're right.

Tarot: Why don't you come up with some raptor dialogue?

Peanut: Yay!

Grape: You had to choose the author of the Spot comics?

Tarot: It'll be interesting.

Velociraptor: Lemme out! Lemme out! I'm gonna eat ALL of you!

Fox(holding on tight to his rifle): It's a good thing I have this. (But unfortunately, I have to die later.)

The crane set the container down a few feet from the pen's gate.

Fox: Okay, get in there, loading team! Get in there!

King, Bailey, Mungo, and Fido (all of them wearing InGen security uniforms) grabbed the sides of the container.

Fox: On 3! 1, 2, 3, PUSH!

The group pushed the container up to the gate.

Fox: Okay, loading team step away. Gatekeeper, raise the gate!

Kevin: Do I have to be the guy who dies in the opening scene?

Fox: Yeah! You lost that bet, remember!

Kevin: sighs Alright...

Kevin lifted up the gate, and, as Fiddler and Keys played dramatic music, the raptor rammed the side of the container! It was pushed back several feet, and Kevin was thrown off!

Velociraptor(grabbing Kevin's legs): Hahaha, I got you now!

Fox(dropping his rifle and grabbing Kevin's hand): Oh no you don't! (To the other InGen workers) Shoot her!

Bailey(who is closest to Fox's rifle): But I don't wanna shoot anyone! That would be cruel, and besides I don't want to set a bad example in front of my kids!

Fox(now losing his grip): JUST SHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT HER!

Bailey (reluctantly) picked up Fox's rifle took aim, and fired.


...


she missed.


Fox: How could you miss?! She was literally 3 feet away from you!!!

Kevin's hand slipped out of view and he could be heard... laughing?

Grape: sighs again Peanut, why are you tickling Kevin?

Peanut: The velociraptor is tickling him!

Grape: Oh my dog, Peanut!
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Good job! I like how you integrated the personalities of the HP! characters into the characters they are playing. Judging from my own cat I can believe that making out in a box would be something cats would enjoy. I also like how you have the K-9s involved as security guards. Keep up the good work.
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trekkie wrote:Good job! I like how you integrated the personalities of the HP! characters into the characters they are playing. Judging from my own cat I can believe that making out in a box would be something cats would enjoy. I also like how you have the K-9s involved as security guards. Keep up the good work.
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I love how this first part came out! Please post the next part soon! Well when you can and you aren't busy.
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This imaginate is going as well as I expected to and I love it. Great humor and personality :D
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I really like this! Even though I havent seen or read Jurassic Park i kind get whats happening. Nice job!
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Seriously, I really appreciate all of your support! I'm actually on the verge of (happiness) tears. :D I never expected it to get this popular.
Next part will be posted hopefully tomorrow. If not, probably by Monday at noon.
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Take all the time you need! We want you to make sure that you can make the next chapter to the best of your abilities!
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I'd like to thank you again for all of your support! Sorry this one took a little longer.

Chapter 2: I Own An Island...

Peanut dusted off a newly discovered velociraptor claw. It was a pretty uneventful day so far, so naturally he was pretty excited.

Peanut: Graaa-ape!

Grape: What now Peanu- er, Alan?

Peanut: Check out this raptor claw I found!

Grape: Wow! Nice job, Alan!

Peanut: Thanks! he paused for a moment Can you imagine what it would be like to meet a real raptor?

Peanut(to the audience): That's called foreshadowing, guys!

Fido: Do you guys like my archeologist outfit, by the way?

Fido was wearing an Indiana Jones cosplay.

Peanut: You look great!

Grape: Fido, stop interrupting, or I'll be forced to get the broom.

Fido: I was just asking a question!

In case you were wondering, King and Bailey were, at the time, wearing standard desert gear.

Grape: Now if you'll excuse me, I'm going to go take a nap.

Suddenly, the roar of an engine could be heard as a helicopter (piloted by Karishad) came into view!

Grape: Seriously? Why can't I even get 1 second of sleep?

The helicopter landed, and then Miles walked over to Peanut and Grape's RV without anyone noticing.

Miles: Wait, why didn't anyone notice?

Joey: Maybe you had an invisibility cloak.

Miles: Well, why am I trying to hide? It's not like I'm evading a predator or anything. turns to Peanut and Grape Am I?

Grape: Um, no?

Peanut: I can add more raptor tickles if you wan-

Grape: NO!!!

Peanut: Awww...

Miles: Okay, so let's get to the point: I own an island, and on this island I have a dinosaur theme park.

Grape: You're kidding right?

Miles: Why would I lie to anyone?

Grape: ...go on...

Miles: So, there was an... incident... at the park, I need you two to look at it to make sure it's safe.

Grape: What do you think we know about safe-

Peanut: Yeah let's do it.

Grape: Peanut!

And the next thing Peanut and Grape knew, they were on the helicopter with Karishad at the wheel, Miles, and Maxwell.

Maxwell: Hey hon...

Grape: Maxie, our characters haven't met yet!

Maxwell blushed.

Maxwell: Oh, right. He glanced at the character description Grape had given him earlier. Hi, I'm Dr. Ian Malcolm, do you guys wanna hear about CHAOS?

Peanut: You mean the villain from Sonic Adventure?

Maxwell: NO!

Grape: Sure, I've always been a big fan of chaos. (Especially anarchy.)

Yes, it is canon that Grape is an anarchist. http://www.housepetscomic.com/comic/200 ... o-get-off/

Maxwell: So, every time a butterfly flaps it's wings, it... snows in New York? Wait, that doesn't even make sense. Butterflies are always flapping their wings, so wouldn't it always be snowing in New York? Whatever, that's apparently how chaos works.

Grape(cuddling up to Maxwell): Oooh, this confusing chaos stuff sounds great, tell me more!

Maxwell(whispering): Grape, I don't know anything else!

Bino: MAX YOU HAVEN'T EVEN SEEN THE MOVIE HAVE YOU?

Maxwell: Shut up, Bino!

It was then that Miles took it upon himself to further the story before it went completely off the rails.

Miles: Look, there it is!

Miles pointed out the window at a pleasant looking tropical island.

Isla Nublar.
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Things are gonna begin to get very perilous soon. I can't wait!
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Nicely done! You have a good handle on both the Jurassic Park and Housepets! characters. Good to see Karishad making an appearance.
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Now this is getting fun. But Kari flying a helicopter worries me :lol: Nice job!
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Thanks again for the support guys! It really means a lot to me!
Nathan Kerbonaut wrote:Kari flying a helicopter worries me :lol:
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As long as he doesn't purposely crash it like Peter crashed air travel vehicles in Family Guy they should be fine.
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Guys, I need some pointers about Lesters' personality. I have no idea if he's gonna be in the next part, but I still need to know.
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From the few scenes we have seen on Lester, he is argumentative, hipster mentality who complains about people having different opinions about things he thinks he is the authority on which are anime and movies. He also tends to be a purist watching the original video of anything that isn't translated. Other than that, he is overbearing, obnoxious and loves to brag about all the details about stuff he knows.

Quite honestly, he would fit being Newman from Seinfeld and his personality traits would combine with the character in the movie.
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Okay, thank you!
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I'm sorry if this chapter is slightly less good than the others. I didn't exactly have a lot of ideas for this scene.

Chapter 3: Welcome... to Jurassic Park!

Despite what all of you expected, Karishad landed the chopper safely.
...
It was just upside down, that's all.


Grape: How is that even possible?

Tarot: Its Karishad, don't question it.

Peanut, Grape and Maxwell were now in brightly colored jeeps, heading to a destination that they were not sure of.

Bino: Oh boy, this is where I come in!

Fido let out a slight groan.

Bino: Hi, I'm Donald! I'm a lawyer from InGen, and I'm here to make sure the park is safe.

Peanut: So are we.

Bino: And what do you guys know about safety?

Grape: Absolutely nothing.

Bino gave Miles a look of total confusion. Mies just shrugged.

The jeeps came to a slow stop. Everyone (except Grape) stood up and looked to the left of the jeep.

Grape(sarcastically): Look at this plant I seemingly pulled out nowhere! It shouldn't even exist!

Peanut just sorta turned Grape's head to the left.

Grape: Oh my dog...

A brachiosaurus stood in front of the group, eating from a tree while Fiddler and Keys played a certain musical score by John Williams.

Peanut: Woah! A real dinosaur!

Miles: Unbelievable, isn't it?

Maxwell: ...you got that right.

Duchess: I'm gonna make a fortune with this place...

Bino: Wait, Duchie-poo? How long have you been here?

Before Duchess could answer, Grape growled.

Grape: Duchess, I'm giving you ten seconds to leave before I get the broom.

Duchess: ...fine. But you haven't seen the last of me!

Duchess left.

Miles(clearing his throat): As I was going to say, welcome to Jurassic Park!

As the Brachiosaurus walked away, the group saw a herd of Parasaurolophus in the background.

Peanut: It's so beautiful...

Grape: Yeah, as long as they didn't make carnivores, the place should be fine!

Miles: About that...
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Good job! I don’t think that this was any worse than the previous chapters, and you continue to do a good job of injecting the personalities of the HP! crew into the Jurassic Park characters. Hopefully Duchess won’t ruin things, she seems to have a healthy respect for Grape and/or the broom, so maybe that’ll keep her at bay.
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Thank you Trekkie!
Yeah, even Duchess knows not to mess with Grape. :D
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That was a very engaging chapter! I hope that there are more to come!
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Thank you! Yes, there will be more!
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FoxyBoi wrote:
trekkie wrote:Nice work so far. For John Hammond I’d say Miles, and for Lex and Tim I’d say Ace and Rook (King’s pups). For Dennis Nedry Lester, and Joey as Henry Wu.
Alright, thanks for the advice!

Completed Casting:
Peanut: Dr. Alan Grant
Grape: Dr. Ellie Sattler
Maxwell: Dr Ian Malcolm
Miles: John Hammond
Ace: Lex Murphy
Rook: Tim Murphy
Fox: Robert Muldoon
Bino: Donald Genaro
Dallas: Ray Arnold
Lester: Dennis Nedry
Joey: Henry Wu
King, Bailey, Kevin, Fido, Mungo: Generic archeologists and InGen employees
Aw, you just want Bino to be Genaro so he gets chomped up. Oh, wait, so do I! Never mind
Wonder if The Forgotten would be willing to do the T-Rex part? Probably not. Who wants a mouthful of Bino?
(Really, really clever, by the way, Foxi!) :D :D
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NHWestoN wrote:Aw, you just want Bino to be Genaro so he gets chomped up. Oh, wait, so do I! Never mind
Wonder if The Forgotten would be willing to do the T-Rex part? Probably not. Who wants a mouthful of Bino?
Well, Bino does have it coming to him.(Though, if anyone deserves to get eaten alive by a T-Rex, it's Duchess) However, I chose him for that role because I felt like he was the most fitting character to fill the role of the "bloodsucking lawyer".
I'm not sure who would play the role of the T-Rex. Peanut plays the velociraptors, so they are now the least deadly dinos on the island. :lol:
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The next chapter should hopefully be done by Friday. If it's not done by Friday evening Eastern U.S. time, don't expect it to be posted until Sunday evening because I'm going on a short trip over the weekend.
Anyways, are there any artists out there who might be able to help me turn this into a comic?
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Thanks again for all the support!

Chapter 4: The Visitor Centre

Their next destination was a large, circular building that definitely gave off a very tropical vibe.

Grape: So... is this your place?

Miles: Actually, this is the Visitor Centre. It's essentially the island's tourism hub.

Peanut literally jumped out of the jeep.

Maxwell(whispering to Grape): Who does Peanut thing he is, an action hero?

Grape snickered.

Peanut: Come on guys, let's check it out!

Miles: Well, what are we waiting for? Let's go!

They disembarked from the jeeps and went inside the Visitor Centre. The interior was not yet finished, so there were construction equipment scattered here and there. There were two Brachiosaurus skeletons in the middle of the room.

Ace: Dad, why do we need to pretend Mr. The Wolf is our grandpa?

King: It's part of the game! And games are fun!

Rook: When will we meet our real grandpa?

There was an awkward silence.

King: ...never. Now go say hi to grandpa Miles!

Ace and Rook ran up to Miles from out of nowhere.

Ace and Rook: Grandpa!

Miles: Kids! Its so good to see you!

Grape: Hold up, you don't know if this park is safe, and you brought your kids here?

There was a VERY LONG awkward silence.

Miles: Anyways, its time to start the tour. This way!

Rook(to Peanut): I read your comics, by the way.

Peanut: Did you like them?

Rook: Um... sure.

The group entered a small theater room. The screen flickered to life, and on the screen Miles could be seen. The real Miles got up and stood next to him.

on-screen Miles: Hello, Miles!

real Miles: Hello, Miles.

on-screen Miles: Why are there two of us?

real Miles: It's all thanks to the miracle of cloning. I'm going to let a good friend of mine explain.

A cartoon character made of colorful bubbles appeared on screen.

cartoon character(in a Texan accent): Hey everybody! I'm Mr. DNA!

Bino: That looks nothing like a DNA strand.

Miles: I don't think we'll get sued because of that.

Bino: I know, but still!

Mr. DNA went on an unnecessarily long monologue about how the park's engineers do their work.

Grape(whispering to Maxwell): Do you suppose Mr. Hammond's gonna stand there for every tour group?

Maxwell(whispering to Grape): If he is, he's got some serious dedication.

As Mr. DNA finished his speech, the room started to move, revealing a window into a room full of scientists.

Miles: Ah, yes, these fellows are the brains behind the operation.

Peanut: I wanna see!

Peanut then ran through an all-too-convinient door.

Miles: Well... I guess we're following him.

In the lab, Peanut walked up to a familiar scientist holding an egg.

Peanut: Hey Joey, what are you doing?

Joey: Oh, hi Peanut. You're just in time to see this new dinosaur hatch.

Peanut: Oh boy, I love dinos!

A baby raptor clawed it's way out of the egg Joey was holding.

Raptor(seeing Miles): Papa!

Everyone: Awwwww!

The raptor immediately started tickling Joey.

Joey: Ahahahaha! Stop!

Grape(sarcastically): I know I'm supposed to be a dinosaur expert, but I don't know what is. So... what is it?

Joey: It's- hahaha! Its a velociraptor! Ahahahahaha!

Grape: Oh my dog, you bred RAPTORS?!

Maxwell: We're doomed.

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This story is a lot of fun! Almost makes you forget that disaster is about to strike :lol:
FoxyBoi wrote:By the way, I'm working on another fanfic that involves the nerd squad playing a Marvel-themed DnD campaign, and I need a little help. What would be a good name for a combination of Lester and Thor?
Maybe Lhor, Lor, or Thester? (ok maybe that last one isn't so great)
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Honestly that last name isn't really that bad. Its sort of like when you make up a couple name for two characters by combining their names. (ie: Grapenut, Parot, Sevin, Fibrina and Buchess).
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Thank you for the positive feedback Nathan Kerbonaut and Amazee Dayzee
Nathan Kerbonaut wrote:This story is a lot of fun! Almost makes you forget that disaster is about to strike :lol:
With Peanut as the raptors, its gonna be a lot less brutal.
Nathan Kerbonaut wrote:Maybe Lhor, Lor, or Thester? (ok maybe that last one isn't so great)
Thanks for the ideas!
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Another good chapter ! I loved King’s “never” response because that is just so King. Keep up the good work!
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Thanks Trekkie! I will keep up the good work!
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Really am enjoying what you are putting together so far! I do hope that this story continues being wonderful!
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Thank you!
I'm not sure when the next chapter will be up. Probably sometime next week.
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There are many other things we can do to help make the time go buy so don't think that you have to rush it just to get it put up. All of us can wait until you are ready to show us your creative genius!
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I may or may not have thrown in a slightly outdated meme. I'm sorry.
Anyways, here's Chapter 5! Enjoy!
Also, thanks again for the nice comments! I appreciate it!

Chapter 5: The Tour of Death Begins

The group decided to take a break to have lunch before continuing the tour.

Bino: You know, John, we could probably charge whatever we want for tickets, and people will still come.

Miles: Yes, but I want Jurassic Park to be my gift to the world.

He had a smile on his face.

Bino(mumbling): Ok, boomer.

Of course, Miles overheard this, because wolves have excellent hearing.

Miles: I'm a what?

Peanut(Snapping out of a daydream about a hot date with Tarot): Wait, was that a Harry Potter reference?

Miles: I don't know what a "hairy potter" is, but I'm not one. I may be hairy(though I prefer the term "furry"), but I have no sculpting experience whatsoever. Therefore, I am not a "hairy potter".

Grape face planted on the table. She knew this would be a looooong day.

FIFTEEN MINUTES LATER

The group approached some cars that had pulled up outside.

Peanut: Wait, these cars don't have drivers! Are they haunted?!

Miles: No, they don't need a driver to operate. Our engineers cooked them up.

Grape: But they're geneticists!

Once again, there was an awkward silence.

Rook: Umm, can I sit next to you, mister Peanut?

Peanut: Why don't you sit with Grape instead?

Peanut was trying not to have flashbacks of the time when he babysat for King and Bailey's cubs.

Rook: Please?

Grape: Peanut, are you alright.

Peanut was now having babysitting flashbacks. After the flashbacks stopped, the group finally embarked on their ill-fated adventure. The seating arrangement was as follows:

First Car:
Peanut
Ace
Rook

Second Car:
Maxwell
Grape
Bino

As the tour group left Miles' field of view, Dallas walked up.


Dallas: Mr. The Wolf?

Miles: Yes?

Dallas: There's a storm forming in the Atlantic. I think it may hit us. I recommend evacuating all nonessential personnel.

Miles: What about our guests?

Dallas: Regretfully, they need to be here for the sake of the plot.
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