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I'm sorry guys

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:shock: The Black Dog? I am so sorry she had to die so young.....


You even got the origin right in the name! Bravo!


This is interesting. You mostly just messed up your conjugations, but it is more than readable. :D

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Well for me there's one word to describe this situation: OH ****! *throws Gibby at poor people*

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copper wrote:
This is interesting. You mostly just messed up your conjugations, but it is more than readable. :D


I guess that I should do a better when reviewing it. :oops:

Oh well, it's still a good start. I can't wait until the next part.

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i like it, lots of grammer errors but i seem to have the same problem so who am i to judge ^_^

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