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Easter Cake

Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2012 8:25 pm
by ChewyChewy
EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.

Re: Easter Cake

Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2012 11:46 pm
by valerio
Oh thank dog the cakes are back! I was getting a case of the withdrawal here!
Good start, very good! Heh, rabbit got her tongue :lol:
Moar!

Re: Easter Cake

Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2012 7:26 am
by RandomGeekNamedBrent
must be a small rabbit. or she has a big mouth, but she barely talks, so that's not it.

Re: Easter Cake

Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2012 7:48 am
by valerio
RandomGeekNamedBrent wrote:must be a small rabbit. or she has a big mouth, but she barely talks, so that's not it.
but when she speaks out, we KNOW it :lol:

Re: Easter Cake

Posted: Thu Mar 22, 2012 1:51 am
by copper
Wow... Small rabbit, big mouth. :shock:

I wonder what sort of life affirming lesson Vanilla will learn from this rabbit. Good or bad, this ought to be a great story! :D

Re: Easter Cake

Posted: Thu Mar 22, 2012 4:51 pm
by ChewyChewy
@valerio: Careful with your words, please.... :?

EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.

Re: Easter Cake

Posted: Fri Mar 23, 2012 3:38 am
by copper
Another interesting update. So the great Peter Rabbit is here and visiting. Sounds wonderful.

Honey is very accepting. Vanilla needs to take a page from her book and relax a bit. :lol:

A green egg on Easter. What a thoughtful gift.

Re: Easter Cake

Posted: Fri Mar 23, 2012 4:46 am
by valerio
Too late, CC, too late.
Addiction comes strong with the Cakes 8-)
And when the li'l one said 'Mama!', my heart melted more than with any known ship! :D :D That baby rabbit is a weapon of mass cuteness! :lol:

Re: Easter Cake

Posted: Sat Mar 24, 2012 4:44 pm
by ChewyChewy
EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.

Re: Easter Cake

Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2012 12:53 am
by copper
Nice little joke at the end. That's Vanilla for you, always a comment...

So Peter is now full grown. Hmm, wonder how he will protect her.

Mr. Cake is not the most likeable person in the world... at least he cares. :)

Re: Easter Cake

Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2012 12:03 pm
by valerio
an order of melting heart with side of butter at table 2, please!
Oh, and don't forget the cake with the egg, thank you.
Hmm, tasty more more MORE!

Re: Easter Cake

Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2012 5:10 pm
by ChewyChewy
EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.

Re: Easter Cake

Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2012 8:01 pm
by RandomGeekNamedBrent
That snake knows a little too much.
I say she's still asleep and this is a dream.

Re: Easter Cake

Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2012 10:48 pm
by copper
Um, how did a constrictor get into the wilds of an American Forest not in the South.... is this a pet? It's owner, or former owner, will get into a lot of trouble for it running loose....

So Vanilla ate Peter. That's unusual. I guess that was Vanilla's first taste of raw meat?

So the snake is like a vampire, gotcha!

Re: Easter Cake

Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2012 11:14 pm
by ChewyChewy
copper wrote:Um, how did a constrictor get into the wilds of an American Forest not in the South.... is this a pet? It's owner, or former owner, will get into a lot of trouble for it running loose....

So Vanilla ate Peter. That's unusual. I guess that was Vanilla's first taste of raw meat?

So the snake is like a vampire, gotcha!
...Frequent flier miles? :?

And...HOW is it like a vampire, exactly...? :?

Re: Easter Cake

Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2012 11:24 pm
by copper
ChewyChewy wrote:
copper wrote:Um, how did a constrictor get into the wilds of an American Forest not in the South.... is this a pet? It's owner, or former owner, will get into a lot of trouble for it running loose....

So Vanilla ate Peter. That's unusual. I guess that was Vanilla's first taste of raw meat?

So the snake is like a vampire, gotcha!
...Frequent flier miles? :?

And...HOW is it like a vampire, exactly...? :?

Part of the legend of Vampires, especially since Bram Stoker's novel, is that they can hypnotize people like the snake did. Look into their mind and control them, make them motionless for when they take the final bite. Made for an alluring scene in Dracula.

Re: Easter Cake

Posted: Wed Mar 28, 2012 12:11 am
by valerio
Given the surreality of this tableau, any comment will be suspended until next update. *cluck*

Re: Easter Cake

Posted: Fri Mar 30, 2012 9:10 pm
by ChewyChewy
EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.

Re: Easter Cake

Posted: Fri Mar 30, 2012 11:45 pm
by copper
Awww, such an emotional update. At least she managed to find the courage to fight! :)

Poor Peter. I guess he kept his promise.

So when do we see the egg?

Re: Easter Cake

Posted: Sat Mar 31, 2012 12:15 am
by ChewyChewy
EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.

Re: Easter Cake

Posted: Sat Mar 31, 2012 12:30 am
by RandomGeekNamedBrent
a bit weird, but just as good as always. I had fun reading.

Re: Easter Cake

Posted: Sat Mar 31, 2012 12:33 am
by ChewyChewy
RandomGeekNamedBrent wrote:a bit weird, but just as good as always. I had fun reading.
Thanks! :D Yeah, it was weird--I told you this was a long time in coming, because I wasn't sure how to make it work. But I hope I succeeded.

Re: Easter Cake

Posted: Sat Mar 31, 2012 12:36 am
by copper
Ooookay... Peter is a nice bunny and all, but I am sure he could have done that SOME other way....


Really good writing as always, Chewy! Always like a good Cake Sisters story! :D

Re: Easter Cake

Posted: Sat Mar 31, 2012 1:11 am
by valerio
once again a great story.
You spoil us, CC :D

Re: Easter Cake

Posted: Sat Mar 31, 2012 12:52 pm
by ChewyChewy
copper wrote:Ooookay... Peter is a nice bunny and all, but I am sure he could have done that SOME other way....


Really good writing as always, Chewy! Always like a good Cake Sisters story! :D
How do you mean? :?

But thank you both for the compliments! :D

Re: Easter Cake

Posted: Sat Mar 31, 2012 1:03 pm
by McFly
Just started reading this, and I'm loving it so far. :)
Keep up the good work.

Re: Easter Cake

Posted: Sat Mar 31, 2012 1:12 pm
by ChewyChewy
McFly wrote:Just started reading this, and I'm loving it so far. :)
Keep up the good work.
Thanks! Hope you like the rest!

Re: Easter Cake

Posted: Sat Mar 31, 2012 2:24 pm
by 44R0NM10
hmm...Peter Rabbit...

I couldn't help but think about it a little bit, heh. Either way, an awesome read as per usual. Definitly an imaginative way to teach a lessons about trust. :D

Re: Easter Cake

Posted: Sat Mar 31, 2012 2:26 pm
by ChewyChewy
44R0NM10 wrote:hmm...Peter Rabbit...

I couldn't help but think about it a little bit, heh. Either way, an awesome read as per usual. Definitly an imaginative way to teach a lessons about trust. :D
Ha ha. :P :lol:

Well, thanks! :D