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Re: Alas, Babylon Gardens (PG-13)
Wolfy: Martin will have his chance, don't you worry. For Alex, having a gun to his head isn't that horrible, psychologically speaking... he's done a lot of airsoft, so he's been sort of "desensitized" to the idea of a firearm pointed at him. Shooting the guard, and then watching Mike swiss-cheese the Russian, though? There might be some issues there.
But it all remains to be seen. Enjoy spring break, everyone! ...well, everyone who'll be on spring break, anyways.
I liked it! The fight scene was very well done, though just a bit too much. maybe scale down one tiny smidge? Not much, mind you, just the tiniest bit...
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