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A Date with Fate
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Author:  ChewyChewy [ Thu Dec 22, 2011 8:42 pm ]
Post subject:  A Date with Fate

EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.

Author:  valerio [ Thu Dec 22, 2011 11:57 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: A Date with Fate

Ultra-awesome! 8-)
This episode's gonna ROCK

Author:  ChewyChewy [ Fri Dec 23, 2011 1:37 am ]
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EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.

Author:  valerio [ Fri Dec 23, 2011 1:54 am ]
Post subject:  Re: A Date with Fate

I love the fact that Honey gets to be all excited even if she wasn't picked up! :lol:
And now I can't help imagining Spencer's name pronounced a-la-francais: Gee-rĂ²! 8-)
LOL, Vanilla would need Peanut's help to get all prepped up for DA DATE!

Author:  RandomGeekNamedBrent [ Fri Dec 23, 2011 4:58 am ]
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gotta say, it was obvious who'd get the date. I look forward to the rest of this.

Author:  ChewyChewy [ Mon Dec 26, 2011 9:07 pm ]
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EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.

Author:  valerio [ Tue Dec 27, 2011 4:11 am ]
Post subject:  Re: A Date with Fate

D'aww! This was so sweet! it was time those two sorted things out.
Can't wait to see how Vanilla will outsmart Spencers!

Author:  ChewyChewy [ Tue Dec 27, 2011 4:30 pm ]
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EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.

Author:  valerio [ Tue Dec 27, 2011 5:00 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: A Date with Fate

the preparation was a riot!
the date's off for a great start! Can't wait to see Vanilla's reaction to typical Greek cuisine...

Author:  kavviyenta [ Tue Dec 27, 2011 5:58 pm ]
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Forgot Vanilla didn't sport the usual long eyelashes. Her attempt with Yogurt didn't go well so I wish for her well-being unless there's more to this Spencer pers-er dog. :)

Author:  RandomGeekNamedBrent [ Wed Dec 28, 2011 10:35 pm ]
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My prediction: they end up getting away from the cameras and it turns out that Spencer is putting on an act as much as Vanilla is. they end up actually talking and Vanilla grows to like the real him. But they can't be together, because he has to maintain his usual facade at all times.

Author:  ChewyChewy [ Sun Jan 01, 2012 9:39 pm ]
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EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.

Author:  valerio [ Mon Jan 02, 2012 2:40 am ]
Post subject:  Re: A Date with Fate

Daww, poor Vanilla!
But of course this date is going awesome despite the clumsy moments. OK, I still have this lingering fear that Vanilla will end up cursing like an old sailor in front of the cameras, but mostly I just hope it will go all right.

Spaghetti reference, eh... :lol:

Author:  ChewyChewy [ Wed Jan 04, 2012 8:03 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: A Date with Fate

EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.

Author:  kavviyenta [ Wed Jan 04, 2012 9:43 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: A Date with Fate

Didn't expect what Honey did to Spencer but that was a nice save I say. So Spencer seems to be like Vanilla except with a realistic viewpoint opposed to her cynicism.

Author:  valerio [ Wed Jan 04, 2012 11:55 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: A Date with Fate

Meh.
Cute was cute, but... Dunno, left an aftertaste of unfinished. As if you wanted to rush the finale, this time.

Author:  copper [ Wed Jan 04, 2012 11:57 pm ]
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A nice story as always. Very cute and I loved the dinner conversation! :lol:

Can't wait for your next Cake story.

Author:  ChewyChewy [ Thu Jan 05, 2012 4:26 pm ]
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valerio Wrote:
Meh.
Cute was cute, but... Dunno, left an aftertaste of unfinished. As if you wanted to rush the finale, this time.


What exactly were you hoping for?

Also, kavviyenta, how do you figure that Spencer is realistic as opposed to Vanilla's cynicism?

But thanks for the compliments! :D

Author:  valerio [ Thu Jan 05, 2012 4:45 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: A Date with Fate

Where are the diabolical-obsessive fangirls ready to burn the competitor to Gyro's heart?
Was all of this part of a diabolical plan of Honey to humiliate Vanilla into hiding in a corner forever?
Wil Spencer fall on his knees and declare his true love for Vanilla?
Or will Spencer's first mate show up with the newborn pup, ready to exact vengeance on Vanilla for taking away her husband?!
The share will be enough to justify a second date?
Stay tuned!

'Mr. Valerio'
'Yes?'
*tapping foot* 'You forgot to take your prozac. Again?'
*tapping fingers* '..Yes?'
'Back in your room and stop pestering the authors. Marsch!'
'Aw'

Author:  ChewyChewy [ Thu Jan 05, 2012 4:47 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: A Date with Fate

valerio Wrote:
Where are the diabolical-obsessive fangirls ready to burn the competitor to Gyro's heart?
Was all of this part of a diabolical plan of Honey to humiliate Vanilla into hiding in a corner forever?
Wil Spencer fall on his knees and declare his true love for Vanilla?
Or will Spencer's first mate show up with the newborn pup, ready to exact vengeance on Vanilla for taking away her husband?!
The share will be enough to justify a second date?
Stay tuned!

'Mr. Valerio'
'Yes?'
*tapping foot* 'You forgot to take your prozac. Again?'
*tapping fingers* '..Yes?'
'Back in your room and stop pestering the authors. Marsch!'
'Aw'


I've already shown them and it would ruin the mood to do so again, besides which I don't like to write for obsessive fangirls and don't know much about it anyway.
No.
No.
No.
No.

I'm not as satisfied with it as I might be either, but those are not ways to improve it. The first is probably the closest to a good suggestion, but I don't really want to.

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