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A Date with Fate

Posted: Thu Dec 22, 2011 8:42 pm
by ChewyChewy
EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.

Re: A Date with Fate

Posted: Thu Dec 22, 2011 11:57 pm
by valerio
Ultra-awesome! 8-)
This episode's gonna ROCK

Re: A Date with Fate

Posted: Fri Dec 23, 2011 1:37 am
by ChewyChewy
EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.

Re: A Date with Fate

Posted: Fri Dec 23, 2011 1:54 am
by valerio
I love the fact that Honey gets to be all excited even if she wasn't picked up! :lol:
And now I can't help imagining Spencer's name pronounced a-la-francais: Gee-rĂ²! 8-)
LOL, Vanilla would need Peanut's help to get all prepped up for DA DATE!

Re: A Date with Fate

Posted: Fri Dec 23, 2011 4:58 am
by RandomGeekNamedBrent
gotta say, it was obvious who'd get the date. I look forward to the rest of this.

Re: A Date with Fate

Posted: Mon Dec 26, 2011 9:07 pm
by ChewyChewy
EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.

Re: A Date with Fate

Posted: Tue Dec 27, 2011 4:11 am
by valerio
D'aww! This was so sweet! it was time those two sorted things out.
Can't wait to see how Vanilla will outsmart Spencers!

Re: A Date with Fate

Posted: Tue Dec 27, 2011 4:30 pm
by ChewyChewy
EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.

Re: A Date with Fate

Posted: Tue Dec 27, 2011 5:00 pm
by valerio
the preparation was a riot!
the date's off for a great start! Can't wait to see Vanilla's reaction to typical Greek cuisine...

Re: A Date with Fate

Posted: Tue Dec 27, 2011 5:58 pm
by kavviyenta
Forgot Vanilla didn't sport the usual long eyelashes. Her attempt with Yogurt didn't go well so I wish for her well-being unless there's more to this Spencer pers-er dog. :)

Re: A Date with Fate

Posted: Wed Dec 28, 2011 10:35 pm
by RandomGeekNamedBrent
My prediction: they end up getting away from the cameras and it turns out that Spencer is putting on an act as much as Vanilla is. they end up actually talking and Vanilla grows to like the real him. But they can't be together, because he has to maintain his usual facade at all times.

Re: A Date with Fate

Posted: Sun Jan 01, 2012 9:39 pm
by ChewyChewy
EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.

Re: A Date with Fate

Posted: Mon Jan 02, 2012 2:40 am
by valerio
Daww, poor Vanilla!
But of course this date is going awesome despite the clumsy moments. OK, I still have this lingering fear that Vanilla will end up cursing like an old sailor in front of the cameras, but mostly I just hope it will go all right.

Spaghetti reference, eh... :lol:

Re: A Date with Fate

Posted: Wed Jan 04, 2012 8:03 pm
by ChewyChewy
EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.

Re: A Date with Fate

Posted: Wed Jan 04, 2012 9:43 pm
by kavviyenta
Didn't expect what Honey did to Spencer but that was a nice save I say. So Spencer seems to be like Vanilla except with a realistic viewpoint opposed to her cynicism.

Re: A Date with Fate

Posted: Wed Jan 04, 2012 11:55 pm
by valerio
Meh.
Cute was cute, but... Dunno, left an aftertaste of unfinished. As if you wanted to rush the finale, this time.

Re: A Date with Fate

Posted: Wed Jan 04, 2012 11:57 pm
by copper
A nice story as always. Very cute and I loved the dinner conversation! :lol:

Can't wait for your next Cake story.

Re: A Date with Fate

Posted: Thu Jan 05, 2012 4:26 pm
by ChewyChewy
valerio wrote:Meh.
Cute was cute, but... Dunno, left an aftertaste of unfinished. As if you wanted to rush the finale, this time.
What exactly were you hoping for?

Also, kavviyenta, how do you figure that Spencer is realistic as opposed to Vanilla's cynicism?

But thanks for the compliments! :D

Re: A Date with Fate

Posted: Thu Jan 05, 2012 4:45 pm
by valerio
Where are the diabolical-obsessive fangirls ready to burn the competitor to Gyro's heart?
Was all of this part of a diabolical plan of Honey to humiliate Vanilla into hiding in a corner forever?
Wil Spencer fall on his knees and declare his true love for Vanilla?
Or will Spencer's first mate show up with the newborn pup, ready to exact vengeance on Vanilla for taking away her husband?!
The share will be enough to justify a second date?
Stay tuned!

'Mr. Valerio'
'Yes?'
*tapping foot* 'You forgot to take your prozac. Again?'
*tapping fingers* '..Yes?'
'Back in your room and stop pestering the authors. Marsch!'
'Aw'

Re: A Date with Fate

Posted: Thu Jan 05, 2012 4:47 pm
by ChewyChewy
valerio wrote:Where are the diabolical-obsessive fangirls ready to burn the competitor to Gyro's heart?
Was all of this part of a diabolical plan of Honey to humiliate Vanilla into hiding in a corner forever?
Wil Spencer fall on his knees and declare his true love for Vanilla?
Or will Spencer's first mate show up with the newborn pup, ready to exact vengeance on Vanilla for taking away her husband?!
The share will be enough to justify a second date?
Stay tuned!

'Mr. Valerio'
'Yes?'
*tapping foot* 'You forgot to take your prozac. Again?'
*tapping fingers* '..Yes?'
'Back in your room and stop pestering the authors. Marsch!'
'Aw'
I've already shown them and it would ruin the mood to do so again, besides which I don't like to write for obsessive fangirls and don't know much about it anyway.
No.
No.
No.
No.

I'm not as satisfied with it as I might be either, but those are not ways to improve it. The first is probably the closest to a good suggestion, but I don't really want to.