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Halloween Cakes

Posted: Mon Oct 24, 2011 8:47 pm
by ChewyChewy
EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.

Re: Halloween Cakes

Posted: Mon Oct 24, 2011 9:13 pm
by copper
SQUEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! The mythological and folklore references! I love it!

Re: Halloween Cakes

Posted: Tue Oct 25, 2011 12:18 am
by ChewyChewy
EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.

Re: Halloween Cakes

Posted: Tue Oct 25, 2011 8:12 am
by copper
Another wonderful and light update. As always, your story proves fun but emotional.

Re: Halloween Cakes

Posted: Tue Oct 25, 2011 8:21 pm
by 44R0NM10
Love your writing style, and I'm loving this story! I can't wait to hear more!

Re: Halloween Cakes

Posted: Tue Oct 25, 2011 8:35 pm
by ChewyChewy
EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.

Re: Halloween Cakes

Posted: Tue Oct 25, 2011 9:45 pm
by PhoenixAsper
Okay, this is getting more and more interesting! I wonder if they ALL will disappear?!

Re: Halloween Cakes

Posted: Wed Oct 26, 2011 12:01 am
by ChewyChewy
EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.

Re: Halloween Cakes

Posted: Wed Oct 26, 2011 12:11 am
by copper
So the mystery continues, with a Holmesian flair at that! I like it.

Re: Halloween Cakes

Posted: Wed Oct 26, 2011 12:08 pm
by 44R0NM10
the plot thickens once more, it feels like Scooby Doo but better. :mrgreen:

Re: Halloween Cakes

Posted: Wed Oct 26, 2011 6:29 pm
by ChewyChewy
EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.

Re: Halloween Cakes

Posted: Wed Oct 26, 2011 6:34 pm
by PhoenixAsper
Oh for... :roll:.

Awaiting the last chapter!

Re: Halloween Cakes

Posted: Wed Oct 26, 2011 8:11 pm
by ChewyChewy
EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.

Re: Halloween Cakes

Posted: Thu Oct 27, 2011 12:36 am
by copper
And so it ends. Quite the story. I hope this is not the last.

Vanilla had fun, she knows it. I just wonder who the cat was...

Re: Halloween Cakes

Posted: Thu Oct 27, 2011 12:38 am
by ChewyChewy
copper wrote:And so it ends. Quite the story. I hope this is not the last.

Vanilla had fun, she knows it. I just wonder who the cat was...
Thanks, I hope that's a good thing. :) And I hope it isn't the last as well.

*nods* Well, we'll never know who the cat was....

Re: Halloween Cakes

Posted: Thu Oct 27, 2011 6:36 am
by valerio
Wow, a true halloweenian adventure for the intrepid detectives, yay! :D :D :D :D
*Salutes* Congrats, CC, once again you didn't fail your faithful fandom! 8-)

Re: Halloween Cakes

Posted: Thu Oct 27, 2011 1:48 pm
by RandomGeekNamedBrent
I enjoyed it. (also, am I the only one who reads Honey and vanilla with Starfire and Raven's voices from Teen Titans?)

Re: Halloween Cakes

Posted: Thu Oct 27, 2011 3:18 pm
by ChewyChewy
@valerio: Thanks for the compliment! :D

Brent: :lol: I can maybe see Vanilla having Raven's voice, or a similar voice, but Honey doesn't talk like Starfire.

Re: Halloween Cakes

Posted: Thu Oct 27, 2011 3:28 pm
by RandomGeekNamedBrent
ChewyChewy wrote:@valerio: Thanks for the compliment! :D

Brent: :lol: I can maybe see Vanilla having Raven's voice, or a similar voice, but Honey doesn't talk like Starfire.
I didn't say she talked in the same mannerisms, just with the same voice.

Re: Halloween Cakes

Posted: Thu Oct 27, 2011 3:32 pm
by ChewyChewy
RandomGeekNamedBrent wrote:I didn't say she talked in the same mannerisms, just with the same voice.
I figured, but it's kind of hard for me to imagine Starfire talking normally.... :roll:

Re: Halloween Cakes

Posted: Thu Oct 27, 2011 3:35 pm
by 44R0NM10
...Wow, I'm gonna be picturing Honey and Vanilla to talk like that from now on. Awesome.

Re: Halloween Cakes

Posted: Thu Oct 27, 2011 3:37 pm
by ChewyChewy
44R0NM10 wrote:...Wow, I'm gonna be picturing Honey and Vanilla to talk like that from now on. Awesome.
:lol: What did you think of the story overall?

Re: Halloween Cakes

Posted: Thu Oct 27, 2011 3:38 pm
by RandomGeekNamedBrent
ever heard Princess Bubblegum on Adventure time? that's her.

Re: Halloween Cakes

Posted: Thu Oct 27, 2011 3:41 pm
by ChewyChewy
RandomGeekNamedBrent wrote:ever heard Princess Bubblegum on Adventure time? that's her.
I hadn't, so I looked it up.

Mmmmmmmmm.... Still not entirely sure, but maybe.

Re: Halloween Cakes

Posted: Thu Oct 27, 2011 3:48 pm
by 44R0NM10
I loved the story as per usual, hehe. I've gotta admit, I forgot about Silver at first. Still, I really enjoyed it. A mystery in a mystery in a mystery :P

Something that I think i have to mention though, it felt like we were following Vanilla as she solved the case. At least that's how I followed it. When Vanilla was hiding soemthing, that came as even more of a shock to me. I'm not sure if I liked that or not, but it was a good technique to making something even more surprising. :D

Re: Halloween Cakes

Posted: Thu Oct 27, 2011 3:51 pm
by ChewyChewy
44R0NM10 wrote:I loved the story as per usual, hehe. I've gotta admit, I forgot about Silver at first. Still, I really enjoyed it. A mystery in a mystery in a mystery :P

Something that I think i have to mention though, it felt like we were following Vanilla as she solved the case. At least that's how I followed it. When Vanilla was hiding soemthing, that came as even more of a shock to me. I'm not sure if I liked that or not, but it was a good technique to making something even more surprising. :D
Glad you did. :) I'm not that great at writing mysteries, and was honestly solving this one myself.

Well, I'm glad you at least thought that was a good technique. I probably should have done it from multiple points of view. As I said, not great at writing mysteries.