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Halloween Cakes
Posted: Mon Oct 24, 2011 8:47 pm
by ChewyChewy
EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.
Re: Halloween Cakes
Posted: Mon Oct 24, 2011 9:13 pm
by copper
SQUEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! The mythological and folklore references! I love it!
Re: Halloween Cakes
Posted: Tue Oct 25, 2011 12:18 am
by ChewyChewy
EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.
Re: Halloween Cakes
Posted: Tue Oct 25, 2011 8:12 am
by copper
Another wonderful and light update. As always, your story proves fun but emotional.
Re: Halloween Cakes
Posted: Tue Oct 25, 2011 8:21 pm
by 44R0NM10
Love your writing style, and I'm loving this story! I can't wait to hear more!
Re: Halloween Cakes
Posted: Tue Oct 25, 2011 8:35 pm
by ChewyChewy
EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.
Re: Halloween Cakes
Posted: Tue Oct 25, 2011 9:45 pm
by PhoenixAsper
Okay, this is getting more and more interesting! I wonder if they ALL will disappear?!
Re: Halloween Cakes
Posted: Wed Oct 26, 2011 12:01 am
by ChewyChewy
EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.
Re: Halloween Cakes
Posted: Wed Oct 26, 2011 12:11 am
by copper
So the mystery continues, with a Holmesian flair at that! I like it.
Re: Halloween Cakes
Posted: Wed Oct 26, 2011 12:08 pm
by 44R0NM10
the plot thickens once more, it feels like Scooby Doo but better.
Re: Halloween Cakes
Posted: Wed Oct 26, 2011 6:29 pm
by ChewyChewy
EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.
Re: Halloween Cakes
Posted: Wed Oct 26, 2011 6:34 pm
by PhoenixAsper
Oh for...
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Awaiting the last chapter!
Re: Halloween Cakes
Posted: Wed Oct 26, 2011 8:11 pm
by ChewyChewy
EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.
Re: Halloween Cakes
Posted: Thu Oct 27, 2011 12:36 am
by copper
And so it ends. Quite the story. I hope this is not the last.
Vanilla had fun, she knows it. I just wonder who the cat was...
Re: Halloween Cakes
Posted: Thu Oct 27, 2011 12:38 am
by ChewyChewy
copper wrote:And so it ends. Quite the story. I hope this is not the last.
Vanilla had fun, she knows it. I just wonder who the cat was...
Thanks, I hope that's a good thing.
And I hope it isn't the last as well.
*nods* Well, we'll never know who the cat was....
Re: Halloween Cakes
Posted: Thu Oct 27, 2011 6:36 am
by valerio
Re: Halloween Cakes
Posted: Thu Oct 27, 2011 1:48 pm
by RandomGeekNamedBrent
I enjoyed it. (also, am I the only one who reads Honey and vanilla with Starfire and Raven's voices from Teen Titans?)
Re: Halloween Cakes
Posted: Thu Oct 27, 2011 3:18 pm
by ChewyChewy
@valerio: Thanks for the compliment!
Brent:
I can maybe see Vanilla having Raven's voice, or a similar voice, but Honey doesn't talk like Starfire.
Re: Halloween Cakes
Posted: Thu Oct 27, 2011 3:28 pm
by RandomGeekNamedBrent
ChewyChewy wrote:@valerio: Thanks for the compliment!
Brent:
I can maybe see Vanilla having Raven's voice, or a similar voice, but Honey doesn't talk like Starfire.
I didn't say she talked in the same mannerisms, just with the same voice.
Re: Halloween Cakes
Posted: Thu Oct 27, 2011 3:32 pm
by ChewyChewy
RandomGeekNamedBrent wrote:I didn't say she talked in the same mannerisms, just with the same voice.
I figured, but it's kind of hard for me to imagine Starfire talking normally....
Re: Halloween Cakes
Posted: Thu Oct 27, 2011 3:35 pm
by 44R0NM10
...Wow, I'm gonna be picturing Honey and Vanilla to talk like that from now on. Awesome.
Re: Halloween Cakes
Posted: Thu Oct 27, 2011 3:37 pm
by ChewyChewy
44R0NM10 wrote:...Wow, I'm gonna be picturing Honey and Vanilla to talk like that from now on. Awesome.
What did you think of the story overall?
Re: Halloween Cakes
Posted: Thu Oct 27, 2011 3:38 pm
by RandomGeekNamedBrent
ever heard Princess Bubblegum on Adventure time? that's her.
Re: Halloween Cakes
Posted: Thu Oct 27, 2011 3:41 pm
by ChewyChewy
RandomGeekNamedBrent wrote:ever heard Princess Bubblegum on Adventure time? that's her.
I hadn't, so I looked it up.
Mmmmmmmmm.... Still not entirely sure, but maybe.
Re: Halloween Cakes
Posted: Thu Oct 27, 2011 3:48 pm
by 44R0NM10
I loved the story as per usual, hehe. I've gotta admit, I forgot about Silver at first. Still, I really enjoyed it. A mystery in a mystery in a mystery
Something that I think i have to mention though, it felt like we were following Vanilla as she solved the case. At least that's how I followed it. When Vanilla was hiding soemthing, that came as even more of a shock to me. I'm not sure if I liked that or not, but it was a good technique to making something even more surprising.
Re: Halloween Cakes
Posted: Thu Oct 27, 2011 3:51 pm
by ChewyChewy
44R0NM10 wrote:I loved the story as per usual, hehe. I've gotta admit, I forgot about Silver at first. Still, I really enjoyed it. A mystery in a mystery in a mystery
Something that I think i have to mention though, it felt like we were following Vanilla as she solved the case. At least that's how I followed it. When Vanilla was hiding soemthing, that came as even more of a shock to me. I'm not sure if I liked that or not, but it was a good technique to making something even more surprising.
Glad you did.
I'm not that great at writing mysteries, and was honestly solving this one myself.
Well, I'm glad you at least thought that was a good technique. I probably should have done it from multiple points of view. As I said, not great at writing mysteries.