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good point, allow me to post for those who would ask the same thing, awhile after king became a dog, he went online and found that picture, to be reminded of his past and his closest friends, he printed it out and put it in his wallet, also, because its a surprise, kings little "Plan explanation" will be completely skipped over, because it would ruin the surprise

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I didn't think Fido had it in him to do something like that. Well, I guess as long as he is helping, tough love will do...

King is kind of pessimistic. I think he'd have more questions for them. And might be surprised by the mention of the Cosmic Nerds.


Well, it was a good update all in all. I liked it. The cub scene was nice!

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What a twist! :D

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i didnt know luna was M. Night Shamylan XD

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Background Story:Jax and Snow's meeting
Ties in with light's Houspets: PoP - A Lost Hope story at the end of the last arc, and also their little event in mexico.

POV:Jax Location:Russia
"CRAP!" i shouted, jumping into a vacant building as a nearby frag grenade explodes, "Sometimes i hate being the only cat in the military" i say, collecting myself as i stand up, "Helm, you read me?" i ask into the collar radio, "Jax, what happened to you, you're supposed to be at base camp. "Heh, i thought i could sneak in and turn on the bomb" i tell him, "WHAT?! Our orders are to retrieve the bomb, not set it off on russian soil!" he shouts at me through the speaker, "Anyways, im almost at its location, they're distracted by the intrusion, get the rest of the troops and make a frontal assault" i say, turning off the radio and running out of the buiding and into a nearby alleyway. Hearing something, i pull out my Socom Mk. 23 and turn around aiming it at the person behind me, who happens to be a white cat pointing a Makarov PM right at him, "Кто вы?" i asked her, and she just stood there, confused, "Who are you" i asked her again, both of us lowering our guns, "My name is Snow, my master is the one behind the bomb here, are you with the americans?" she asks me, "Yeah, wait, how do you speak english?" i ask her, confused.

"Well, my previous master, Joel, me and his dog ran away from home with him when he was young, but we went feral and he fled from us, we were captured by the dog catcher and taken to the pound. My newest master found me there on reconassance, looking for a good animal for security detail" she told me as she walked over, "Please, take me away from this place" she says, practically bursting into tears, "It's ok, but we need to detain the bombs guards and your master" I say, running out of the alley to see the american forces fighting the russians. I aim with my SOCOM and shoot several of them, not to kill but to subdue, and make a break for the main building, "Helm, i'm going for the bomb, when i give the all clear, send the squad in to get it" i say, sneaking in with snow.

"The guards were told to stay on patrol in the building once the attack started" she says as we make our way through the halls, ducking into doors to avoid guards along the way. "This is it" we say at the same time as we reach the lab's door and open it to reveal a bomb capable of destroying an entire faucility, "Ok, now where's the guard?" i ask as a man walks out from the shadows http://images3.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb2 ... Snakes.jpg "Боюсь, я не могу позволить тебе уйти с этой бомбы г-Ночь" he says to me with a grin on his face, "How do you know my name?" i ask him, "Simple, the REAL man in charge has been studying you, and your canine friend stationed in mexico" he says, pulling out his Colt SAA, "L-Light?! Ok i don't know how much you know, but this is where it ends" i say, drawing my SOCOM, "Before we begin, it's best to know my names, i am known by three, Адамска, and Шалашаска, but you can call me Revolver Ocelot" he says, firing a shot at me as we both duck into hiding.

"Snow, what do you think you're doing, get over here now!" he shouts to her, making her get up, "Snow, don't do it" i say as she walks behind him as i stand up, "Say goodbye Jax" he says, i close my eyes and hear a gunshot, but dont feel anything, i open them to find ocelot on his back and a look of horror on his face as he lays unmoving on the ground, "Snow, why did you do that?" i say as she walks over, "I fell in love" she says as she kisses me. "Jax! Jax! Are you ok?!" i hear shouted through my radio, "Yeah, send in the squad" i say as we walk out of the building to be greeted by Helm, "WHAT WERE YOU THINKING?!" he shouts at me, "Listen, i did what i had to do" i start to say before im cut of by a hug, "Im just glad your safe" he says, "Who's this?" he asks, "My name is snow" she says, shaking his hand, "Welcome to the family" he says before she joins in on the hug and several men run past us to retrieve the bomb.

POV:Temno
I couldn't help but smirk as i drove away in the truck with the bomb toward the airport, "Ocelot, you did exactly as i planned, now that you can't use the bomb, i can use it to get revenge on the only person who's abandoned me" i say, looking at the picture of me and Light on the dashboard, speeding up as i hit the remote button to activate the remote turrets in the faucility, "Покойся с миром, Jax" i say, letting out a chuckle.

POV:Jax
For some reason, Helm's hearing was always better than mine, "GET OUT OF HERE NOW" he shouted to everyone as he shoved the two of us out the front gate as the defence turrets unloaded into everyone inside the base perimeter, "HELM!" i shout as i try to run to him, but snow holds me back, "No, you'll get shot too" she says, "Jax to base, send paramedics and engineers to treat those alive and deactivate the turrets on the strong hold, from my location, there are no survivors" i say into the radio before breaking down into tears, the one who had saved my life, the person i considered my brother, had been gunned down by turrets, i vowed to myself that i would find the man who set them up and kill him as the requested troops arrived, "Come on jax, let's go" Sarah, jax's commanding officer said as she lead us into the jeep and back to base.
*Time skip, Two Weeks*
It was difficult to be there infront of all those people, most of whom i never met or cared about, without breaking into tears, "Helm was a great solider, and an even better friend, he gave for those who needed it, and did anything to protect those he cared about, he was the one who saved my life, any many of yours time and time again, i was and always will be, proud to call him my comrade, and my brother." i said before i walked away from the podeum and said my final words to jax, "I'm proud you died doing what you wanted to, and saving the ones you cared about" i said before walking off and out the exit, needing fresh air. "Jax" snow said to me as she walked after me, "It's alright, you still have me you know" she says, trying to get me to smile, "I know" i say hugging her, "It's just that he's always been a father to me, and now he's gone" i say as she hugs back and kisses me. "Then live, for both of you, and for your future child" she says, the last sentence making me snap to reality, "Y-You mean?" i ask her, causing her to smile and nod, "YES!" i shout and kiss her again, her happily returning it, "This is the start of the rest of our lives together snow" i say, smiling down at her, "May the spirits bless it" she says, looking up at me, smiling as well as we press our foreheads together.
(Yes jax is solid snake in this scenario, and i guess you could call snow meryl and temno liquid also, light and temno are owned by lightwolf21 as is the bomb that he steals, liquid is owned by kojima, and housepets is owned by rick griffin, helm and jax are owned by me)

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Really good update, Can't wait to see what happens next. On a diffrent note seemed a little rushed but nothing too major, but as said really good all-in-all :) (Not ment to offend you or anything)

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I like it! A nice little back story for your character. The love story was a bit rushed, but since it wasn't a huge part of the update, I can see how you would leave it a bit terse.

So Jax was the only cat in the military... wonder how that came about.

Can't wait for your next update!

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Chapter 6: Setup to the Night

“Ok guys, I’ll go talk to the ferrets, then fiddler and keys, see ya” I say, walking off as they wave goodbye from their front door, “Ok, first, the ferrets” I say, walking down the street to the mansion’s front gates, hitting the intercom, “Hey Jeeves it’s king, can you let me in?” I ask before the front gate opens and I being my ten minute trek up the driveway. Seeing the ferrets in the side yard lounging by their giant pool, “Hey guys” I say, as I walk over, before tripping on a gold brick and falling into the pool, which for some reason was filled with orange soda. I gasp for breath as I come up, “You ok king?” lana asks me as I get out and she tosses me a towel, “Why is there orange soda in the pool?” I ask as Keene walks over, “Cause its for the party Saturday” he says, as I finish drying off, “Ok two things, One: A pool full of orange soda will get the entire party drunk and create social anarchy, Two: I have a request about the party” I say as me and keen go over and sit on some lounge chairs, “What do you need?” he asks, reclining back and opening an orange soda can, downing it like he was dying of thirst.
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“Later” keene says as I walk away, “Don’t worry about Saturday, I’ll inform the band about the changes, just let Fiddler and Keys know first so things go over smoothly” he says, as I turn left after leaving the gate and walking down the street again, “Man I haven’t walked around this much since I was in the ASPCA” I say as I turn into the alley to see Fiddler and Keys, “What do you want dog?” keys asks me as I stop infront of them and she and fiddler stop tuning his violin, “I need a favor for the party, I already cleared it with keene” I say, making them scowl, “Figures, knows the cats will say no, so he goes straight to the Head Honcho instead” fiddler says, sounding mad. “No it’s not that, it’s just REALLY important” I say as keys walks over and looks into my eyes, “Who’s the girl?” she asks, knowing that snow was on my mind, “A real close friend of mine who died a time ago, and me and some friends need this favor to help us move on” I say, sounding sad. “Ok, we’ll do it” keys says as I walk over to him and whisper what I need.
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On the walk home I run into Jax who was running toward me, “King, I need your help!” he shouts at me, “Whoa Jax, calm down, what’s wrong” I ask him, “Markas was kidnapped by Pete, I need to talk to tarot” he says, sounding shaken as we run to tarot’s. “What can I do for you two” she asks us as we walk in, “Pete took markas, I need you to send us into his domain” jax says, taking the bag off his back and pulling out several weapons.

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Epic fighting will soon rock the other plane of existence. Awesome!

Nice update. Short and sweet. I like it.

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I expect a new chapter to be posted sometime in the next 3 days

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it's a good story... so far~

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About the GIANT hiatus, i got grounded and have also had no in school time to write, but i assure you now that it will continue again, expect the newest chapter by saturday

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Awesome! It's back on!!!

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(indeed it is copper, indeed it is)

Chapter 7:Infiltration and Retrieval

“So that’s all your plan is? Teleport in and go Rambo style?” I ask him as we head back to his house with tarot and sit in the living room, “To be more accurate, we’re heading in Metal Gear style” he says as he walks over to the mantle. “I’ll go too, Pete has interfered in earth’s matters when he had no authority for FAR too long, it’s time that we put an end to his evil” she says as mark takes his Socom MK 23 and Snow’s Makarov PM off the wall and walks over. “Here, you’ll need a handgun” he says, handing me the PM, “Ok then, so I’m also gonna take this” I say as I reach into his bag and pull out a SPAS-12 shotgun. “I’ll stick to these” she says, pulling out an array of throwing knives from the bag and putting them on her person as Jax puts on his sneaking jacket and straps an AK-74u to his back, “Everyone ready?” he asks as I crack my fingers and put a silencer on the Makarov, “Yeah” me and tarot both say as the three of us disappear from the dimension with a flash of light.

I heard Jax groan a little as we landed at our point of entry, “Don’t worry, you’ll get used to it” I say as we make our way inside. “What’s with the lack of guards?” Tarot asks as we stop in the center of the courtyard, “I relieved them of duty, just as I will relieve you of life!" we hear through an intercom as thirty of http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3456/327 ... 519c27.jpg walk out carrying desert eagles, “Crap, dwarf gecko!” he shouts, grabbing his AK and unloading on them, killing 17 with one clip.

Congratulations! You all made it to the part where I kill you”, we hear as we take out the rest and petes yellow eyes look at us from the shadows above, “Alright Pete, you got us here, now what do you want from us” I say, aiming my shotgun at him. “I have what I want, you three in my trap, and a new pet to be my avatar”, he says, walking out of the shadows, chuckling to himself, “Give me back my son!” jax shouts, aiming his SOCOM at him, "Markas is mine now Jax, give up" he says as markas walks out next to him

"Releasing suicide dwarf gekko" he says in a toneless voice as more walk out flashing red, "Good bye father" markas says, "Send snow my regards" he says with a smirk before they both disappear and we become surrounded by dwarf gekko. "Any ideas?!" i shout as we unload on the gekkos with everything we have, "Just one, but it's risky" jax says dodging a bullet from a surviving normal gekko. "We'll take it!" me and tarot shout before we all disappear in a flash of red aura as the gekko explode.

(appologies for terriblness of the chapter, i have never actually writen anything actiony before, so this is a brand new area, and if i can, i might get a second update out tonight.
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Interesting chapter. Too bad Jax and Markas are separated! Let's hope they get him back soon.

I never knew Tarot was a close combat sort...

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new posts will now be faster due to the recieving of a kindle for christmas, but this change will not start til about a week or so from now

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forget what i said...just broke my arm XD talk about timing, both the radius and ulna, clean fracture so i should be normal in a month or two...ill try to post a chapter or two in that time

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Yeesh,sorry to hear that. I hope you get better soon!

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