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Thu Jul 14, 2011 11:07 am
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Post Re: Vanilla in Wonderland
Ah, FINALLY more writing from you! :D I missed this! Interesting so far..... I'd just go along with it. :roll:


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Post Re: Vanilla in Wonderland
EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.

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Thu Jul 14, 2011 2:56 pm
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Post Re: Vanilla in Wonderland
You're welcome! :D I mean, if I had a dream like this (about, say, Star Trek), I'd just go along with what was in front of me, rather than trying to make it go the way it's supposed to. Of course, when I dream, I can RARELY control what happens, so I have to go along anyway. :roll:

I suspect something UNEXPECTED will happen soon.


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Post Re: Vanilla in Wonderland
EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.

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Thu Jul 14, 2011 3:26 pm
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Post Re: Vanilla in Wonderland
Let me guess: The qu........... <hand claps over mouth, cane dragged off stage> MMMMFFF!!! :shock:

You know, looks like there IS a message in here after all! :)


Thu Jul 14, 2011 3:34 pm
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Post Re: Vanilla in Wonderland
<Looks around for psychic Pomeranian> This is getting INteresting! :? :)


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EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.

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Thu Jul 14, 2011 4:25 pm
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Post Re: Vanilla in Wonderland
:( :) You really have a talent for this sort of thing! :D Loved it, GREAT lesson! :D


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Post Re: Vanilla in Wonderland
an awesome story, I really enjoyed it.

...although, I must be honest, I've never seen any version of Alice in Wonderland, nor have I read it. Still, parts still shocked me...although, I have no idea if there's some sort of hidden meaning here, hehe...

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Post Re: Vanilla in Wonderland
@Phoenix: Thanks! :D I didn't really have an idea of where I wanted it to go at first, it kind of wrote itself.

@44R0NM10: Thanks to you too, glad you liked it! :D

Well, I would recommend reading the book before you watch ANY version, ESPECIALLY more recent versions. And don't bother with the Tim Burton movie at all.

Oh? Which parts shocked you? :? And what do you mean by hidden meaning?

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UN-believeable! :shock:
CC, you just managed to make an INTERESTING version of AIW! I always hated both the tale and the adaptations. Yours is a truckload of fun and insight on this awesome canine. *claps loudly*

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valerio wrote:
UN-believeable! :shock:
CC, you just managed to make an INTERESTING version of AIW! I always hated both the tale and the adaptations. Yours is a truckload of fun and insight on this awesome canine. *claps loudly*


:lol: I wondered if that "UN" was a reference to "un-birthdays".... :roll:

:lol: I'm glad to hear that! Although I don't hate the original tale--I am bothered by the adaptations, though. (How come you hate it?) :lol: Thank you for saying so! :D

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Post Re: Vanilla in Wonderland
you got the reference, You win a vanilla ice cream :mrgreen:
Also, perhaps 'hate' is a strong word, but just like Wizard of Oz, I never liked that kind of stories. I prefer...smoother plots, not something out of a drunkard's drugged fantasy. meh, de gustibus etc etc...

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valerio wrote:
you got the reference, You win a vanilla ice cream :mrgreen:
Also, perhaps 'hate' is a strong word, but just like Wizard of Oz, I never liked that kind of stories. I prefer...smoother plots, not something out of a drunkard's drugged fantasy. meh, de gustibus etc etc...


Thanks! :D

Well, The Wizard of Oz DOES have a "smoother" plot than Alice in Wonderland.... :? Besides, there was a METHOD to the Wonderland madness--it was actually a satire of Victorian English society as Lewis Carroll saw it. He portrayed it through the eyes of a child, who doesn't understand it but adults can't always help because they take it for granted. ("De gustibus"? :? )

Anyway, glad you liked this version! :D I didn't even do Through the Looking-Glass, which has much of what most people remember....

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It also is awesome.

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It also is awesome.


Thanks! Did you read the whole thing?

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ChewyChewy wrote:
Luna werewolf wrote:
It also is awesome.


Thanks! Did you read the whole thing?


It did take me ages, but yes. my fav bit was the start!

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