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Does it come with a god mode?

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Why need a God Mode when you got SPIKE as character?

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I would totally play that game, you have to make it.

Maybe with a sprite editor on MSX... meh, i'm too lazy to do that 8-)

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I liked Eyesight.

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Eyesight was a great character.
Actually, the only probem came from the way he died. Given the situation, he could've even avoided sacrificing himself. But since this was your first experience as writer, it can be forgiven (OK, Eyesight, you know what I mean, please, don't look at me with that eye...ohhh, pretty *asplodes*)

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I also liked Eyesight.
edit: the only downside about his death is that we diudn'1t get to see much of him. But a flashback of him raising Max would be good.

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I liked Eyesight and would love to see more of him in some way.

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angelusbr wrote:
I also liked Eyesight.
edit: the only downside about his death is that we diudn'1t get to see much of him. But a flashback of him raising Max would be good.

I approve of this suggestion 8-)

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I see... so, his death has been sudden and disappointing, and it would be interesting to see something about his past. Very well, the defects you said are pretty much the same i saw. I made a lot of mistakes with this character.

Thanks a lot :D don't worry about him... let's say that i hypothetically have something special in mind. Won't do the same mistake twice.

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But we'll talk about this later, right now time is my enemy :lol: for now 1X is more than enough.

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ARGH! THE TEASER!

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In my honest opinion, he died before he could truly serve his archetypal purpose. he was the wise mentor who must die for the protagonist to grow, no? It is an old archetype. Dumbledore, Ben Kenobi, Gandolf the Grey.... the real problem wasn't that you killed him off, but that he died before showing Spike much of anything. Eh, just an opinion. I enjoy the entire strip. :D

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well he was more of Max's mentor anyway. seems that he could have served that purpose for Max.
we may see him back in some way as a ghost, because all of your examples showed up at some point after their death.

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@Copper: Uhm, i get it. But actually he had nothing to say to Spike... because i can say no more but you'll see

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It is SO true (the last panel i meant)

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I've studied roman law a few years ago. I forgot everything!
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giurisprudenza.
Ew.
Tastes even bad when you spell it! :mrgreen:

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XD Funny. Actors as lawyers... sounds like an evil combination to me... :?

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XD Funny. Actors as lawyers... sounds like an evil combination to me... :?

how do you think lawyers got such a reputation..? :mrgreen:

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Sweet logic

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Primo looks epic for the first time!
NEVER mess up with a dog and his food 8-)

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you can't downgrade like that. They deserve death... Where'd he get the gun?

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RandomGeekNamedBrent wrote:
Where'd he get the gun?


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Honestly, it would made sense if it were the other way around...With Spike in the place of Primo. It felt a bit OOC.
I know this is just for the funnies, but still...

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Primo's an actor, he's gotta be dramatic about things. I bet that's not even a real gun. I see it as totally in character.

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Spike has been through too much to take up arms over something so petty, it would be more OOC for Spike to be doing this. And way to go Primo, with the blaster gun. I want one now!

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Monday = new chapter!

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Ok let's put this simple: i don't remember what i wrote there and i thought i could read it but i can't, my bad

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translation:
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ok this time I have a lot of things to tell and many plot twist on my way so raise your patience like a calm river on summer Evening

some words were harder than others so I had to search for earlier instances of each individual letter, but didn't take that long.

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OMG now i remember :lol: good thing you got it instantly, at first i was like "nah, i will read it normally, no prob", but then i saw only strange letters :shock:

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Ninja Primo? This ought to be...deadly.

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Looks Like a naruto fandom thing... Are they going to OtakuCon or something? :roll:

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Primo is a shiny star that makes other stars, 4ever and ever

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OMG - Spike, what have you DONE?! :lol:

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Samurai ninja Primo has your atention, Spike.

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Um, the last few English translation comics seem to have disappeared..... TO GOOGLE TRANSLATE!!!!! (Tries to make out the gibberish)

:lol: What breed is Primo suposed to be again?

Oh no.... Primo is going to go and be all anime now, isn't he?

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The background of the second panel LOOK AT THE BACKGROUND OF THE SECOND PANEL

Oh, and this gonna answer Copper's question too ;)

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awesome background in panel 2.

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So... I am supposed to look at the second panel, maybe? :P

Akita, okay. Wasn't sure. So an Italian Japanese breed dog who had no idea of the breed origin. Nice...

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