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valerio
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 Re: Hey, all of you This! It's just like another author was added to this story...and with far less interesting results. Sorry, but this is a completely different ficcie, and the Res scene doesn't make sense in this context, too. The characters...well, they are not them. I still have this nagging feeling that Grape or Peanut will wake up to discover this was all a dream... 
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Karlos
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Re: Hey, all of you
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copper
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Re: Hey, all of you It was pretty good. I didn't know that King had moved into the Sandwich household. Things ought to get interesting if King makes it back.
Dogs don't sweat though.
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The Broken Fox
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Re: Hey, all of you I'm trying so hard to recapture what I liked about this story in the beginning, but somehow I just don't feel it anymore...  Not even the copious amounts of Grapenut helps. On the contrary, it feels a little bit forced to me. *sigh*I think that at this point, it's safe to say that the events after the timeskip have sealed the fate of the story in my eyes. I'll always treasure chapters 1-9, but I think I'll pretend the series ended there. I'm officially giving up on this story.
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copper
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Re: Hey, all of you Don't give up BrokenFox! The skips Grape is experiencing make this all seem like a dream sequence to me. It is a giant cop out, but perhaps it was all a dream. That would be an OH COME ON!!!! moment, but it is possible, given how quickly this story has changed.
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valerio
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Re: Hey, all of you  | | | | The Broken Fox wrote: I'm trying so hard to recapture what I liked about this story in the beginning, but somehow I just don't feel it anymore... Not even the copious amounts of Grapenut helps. On the contrary, it feels a little bit forced to me. *sigh*I think that at this point, it's safe to say that the events after the timeskip have sealed the fate of the story in my eyes. I'll always treasure chapters 1-9, but I think I'll pretend the series ended there. I'm officially giving up on this story. | | | | |
This. Just read it. Couldn't put it better than Broken Fox did. Also, dogs pant, don't sweat. EW! 
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Sinder
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copper
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Re: Hey, all of you This fic is on shaky ground. Looks like it might fall by the wayside. It is interesting, though.
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Revius
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Re: Hey, all of you
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