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Sorry for the double post, but I edited my last post again. I got a little carried away with the imagery when describing what conditions Phoebe had to endure, and what her parents had done. I kind of forgot about the forum rating. :|

Anyway, I've edited it so that it still gives a good idea of the conditions, but doesn't get too graphic with the description.

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GASP!

Did someone fib about ghost cookies???

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@Gameb18oy
I'm having trouble replying to post. I have nothing to respond on. Do you mean for me to act an NPC?

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I'm having trouble replying to post. I have nothing to respond on. Do you mean for me to act an NPC?

Sorry about that... um, I think I wanted you to just order some food or something along those lines, I don’t remember where I was going with my response

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Neon and Welshie, must be your turns, I think. ^^

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so, midnight hasn't been online in a month based on user profiles... what do i do with eclipse?

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Can't quite say. Think it'd be rude to grant control to someone for any permanent capacity, so really I think it best to handwave him one way or another. The best thing I can think of is just assume the character continues training in the backyard offscreen, if midnight comes back great! If they don't, well we have a husky join a kitsune in the woods I guess. A growing menagerie of misfits in the woods. I'll move him to inactive for now though.

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I'm kind of wondering how shopping with Phoebe will go considering she doesn't know how to fully keep the Nightmare hidden. I imagine them shopping for beds and the Nightmare comes out to inspect the bed or something and the guy selling the beds suddenly has a very interesting work day. :P

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Hope you guys don't mind, but I wouldn't mind joining in. Hopefully the character fits in as I' tried to make sure he follows the guidelines set (i.e no Godmodding) but I'm willing to make adjustments if need be.

-Name-
Leon

-Gender-
Male

-Species-
Wolf

-Speech Color-
Red

-Home-
Medium Sized Neighborhood House

-Age-
4 Pet Years/36 Human Years
*Think my math is right*

-Appearance-
Typical Wolf

-Personality-
While he loves to keep to himself, Leon is never really afraid to strike up conversations with anyone and quickly comes off as a friendly person with a soft smile...though he has been known to lose his temper depending on the circumstances.

-Powers (If the armor is a bit too much, I can cut that and keep the temperature and senses)
Able to form a symbiotic armor around him, which can also split off from him and become a being known as Dracorlok. His main powers, though, is that he's able to withstand and survive in any temperatures (be it cold or heat) and heightened senses (i.e better sense of smell/sight/and hearing).

-History?-
Mysteriously, not much is known about Leon's past (including if Leon is even his name) with some claiming is he is the son of a famed scientist who developed the armor that he's bonded with, others claiming he is an escaped test subject from a secret government lab, while conspiracy theorists "claim" that he is the son of Anubis himself (the later has been widely proven false, though many still hold this as the truth for whatever reason). The only things that many know about Leon is that he was kicked out of a school when he was young for sending a couple students to the hospital (they were apparently the school resident bullies and, one day, something basically snapped in him which activated his armor/Dracorlok) and the fact he was caught swimming in lava at one point and wasn't being affected. As for his symbiotic armor, no one really knows its origins, other then the typical "it's not of Earth" and has been seen split off from him at points and serving as his protector.

-S.P.E.C.I.A.L Stats-
S- 7 or 8 (NOTE: The Symbiotic Armor does enhance his strength, but only by one point, thus the 8)
P- 5
E- 5
C- 6
I- 7
A- 5
L- 6

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Post Re: OOC: Radients Vineyard.
Hmm, I don't see anything too bad on the surface except that this character feels more like a super hero than others in the RP currently, especially with all the rumors of him not being normal which feels liked it would clash with the masquerade atmosphere that's been established where most non magic NPCs tend to shrug off even the most blatant examples of magic. I mainly fear that with how you've built your character that that the RP may not be to your expectations.

But, should you want to keep Leon as he is there are still a few points I'd like to bring up. Like I feel his survive in any temperature ability is a bit overpowered, mainly from the 'swimming in lava' bit, though the more I think on it he does have quite a bit going for him, alien symbiot and enhanced senses and temperature resistance and by association certain elemental resistances is a bit overpowered. Plus his history appears to be off to me. Potential son to a famed scientist, or escaped secret experiment seems contradictory, and Radiant Vineyard is still at least partially HPU, so unless it was a special type of school a wolf wouldn't be allowed in under normal circumstances.

Honestly, I personally would recommend saving this character, and once you've stuck around awhile see if you could get this character into the Beacon RP, since Cyber only takes people who have shown to be able to stick to an RP for a good length of time. I say that due to how super hero-y Leon seems in powers and history he might fit there better with minimal overhauling needed, compared to here, at least potentially.

Apologies if I seem to be nit picky, I just want everyone to be on the same page and ensure fair and fun for all. Just in the case you want to stick with Leon being in Radiant I'd suggest a history overhaul to better fit the world easier, and his powers would need to be tweaked, as I feel the symbiot is a pretty big power by itself with the added possibility that it could clash with the setting a tad, though unless others have grievances I guess I'd be fine with it. While the temperature and elemental resistance plus enhanced senses could work, so long as the temp/elements part is tweaked slightly and you could get good mileage out of the senses there may be limited opportunities to utilize or reference the temperature ability.

Hopefully I wasn't too harsh or discouraging, but feel free to tweak, change or clarify at your leisure and I'll do my best to help you along the way!

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Hmm, I don't see anything too bad on the surface except that this character feels more like a super hero than others in the RP currently, especially with all the rumors of him not being normal which feels liked it would clash with the masquerade atmosphere that's been established where most non magic NPCs tend to shrug off even the most blatant examples of magic. I mainly fear that with how you've built your character that that the RP may not be to your expectations.

But, should you want to keep Leon as he is there are still a few points I'd like to bring up. Like I feel his survive in any temperature ability is a bit overpowered, mainly from the 'swimming in lava' bit, though the more I think on it he does have quite a bit going for him, alien symbiot and enhanced senses and temperature resistance and by association certain elemental resistances is a bit overpowered. Plus his history appears to be off to me. Potential son to a famed scientist, or escaped secret experiment seems contradictory, and Radiant Vineyard is still at least partially HPU, so unless it was a special type of school a wolf wouldn't be allowed in under normal circumstances.

Honestly, I personally would recommend saving this character, and once you've stuck around awhile see if you could get this character into the Beacon RP, since Cyber only takes people who have shown to be able to stick to an RP for a good length of time. I say that due to how super hero-y Leon seems in powers and history he might fit there better with minimal overhauling needed, compared to here, at least potentially.

Apologies if I seem to be nit picky, I just want everyone to be on the same page and ensure fair and fun for all. Just in the case you want to stick with Leon being in Radiant I'd suggest a history overhaul to better fit the world easier, and his powers would need to be tweaked, as I feel the symbiot is a pretty big power by itself with the added possibility that it could clash with the setting a tad, though unless others have grievances I guess I'd be fine with it. While the temperature and elemental resistance plus enhanced senses could work, so long as the temp/elements part is tweaked slightly and you could get good mileage out of the senses there may be limited opportunities to utilize or reference the temperature ability.

Hopefully I wasn't too harsh or discouraging, but feel free to tweak, change or clarify at your leisure and I'll do my best to help you along the way!


Nah you weren't harsh or anything! Looking at him, yeah I'll admit myself that he is a bit OP, which was something I was trying to heavily avoid but my creativity still leaked into it. With the alien symbiote, honestly it was going to be a Cybernetic armor that behaved like a symbiote but I wasn't sure if that seemed...fitting for this RP so I went the alien route. With the temperature thing, that's a easy fix as I can have that he can survive temperatures like lava but not as hot as the Sun itself (which was my goal at first) but the cold still affects him like everyone else, just not as bad. As for the backstory....OK confession: It's like that as I couldn't think of one for him so, throughout the RP, I was going to have it be fleshed out that the truth is slowly revealed to him about who and what he truly is, hence why I did those multiple theories. If you want to help come up with a history for him, be my guest! I'm all open to ideas (Though I will say that I agree about the Scientist and escape subject one...that could've been worded better on my part).

EDIT: The school thing? It was supposed to be Obedience School, but I was editing it so much that I forgot to put that back in. Whoops.

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Post Re: OOC: Radients Vineyard.
Re-worked my sheet (Had help this time!) to be a bit less crazy and a not OP as the last one:
EDIT: Updated it

-Name-
Leon

-Gender-
Male

-Species-
Wolf

-Speech Color-
Red

-Home-
Medium Sized Neighborhood House

-Age-
4 Pet Years/36 Human Years
*Think my math is right*

-Appearance-
Typical Wolf (though with multiple scars from a facility)

-Personality-
When he was young, Leon was never really afraid to strike up conversations with anyone and quickly came off as a friendly person with a soft smile. But, after his incident and escape from a facility, he quickly became more quiet and less talkative but more easy to irritate, though he's been trying to bring back his past friendly persona.

-Powers-
He is able to form a special, Guyver-like suit (That he doesn't know where it comes from) around him that enhances his abilities.

-History-
Leon never really knew who his real parents were or if he even had any as, growing up, he lived in a foster home for most of his life. But after a incident that sent five people to a hospital, he was sent away to what was thought to be a correctional facility and ended up was experimented on for two years. But one night, he managed to escape from both them and the facility and return to his home. Though after reuniting with his foster family and staying with them for a couple of days, he decided he needed to go somewhere that he felt they wouldn't look for him so, with help from his foster parents, he moved to Radients Vineyard to not only start a new life and escape his past, but to hopefully hide from those who hunt him, whom to this day are still hunting him due to not only his escape from them, but the fact that he unwittingly killed a few employees during his escape, thanks to the powers that awoke in him.

-S.P.E.C.I.A.L Stats-
S- 7 or 8 (NOTE: The Armor does enhance his strength, but only by one point, thus the 8)
P- 5
E- 5
C- 6
I- 7
A- 5
L- 6

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Post Re: OOC: Radients Vineyard.
That looks good! Don't see anything out of place. Not too sure where you might be able to jump in, but I recommend reading the past few pages of the RP to see who is where and where a good jumping on point may be.

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That looks good! Don't see anything out of place. Not too sure where you might be able to jump in, but I recommend reading the past few pages of the RP to see who is where and where a good jumping on point may be.

(Ignore my PM) OK! Right now, just from reading...I honestly have no clue where anyone is atm *laughs*

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wait. this place has a mall?
i didn't think the town was big enough to support one, that's the whole reason i have soqhu driving out of town to get to a decent sized furniture & mattress store...

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wait. this place has a mall?
i didn't think the town was big enough to support one, that's the whole reason i have soqhu driving out of town to get to a decent sized furniture & mattress store...

Well I was told there was a mall, hence my post. If there isn't then I can alter it.

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Reread the main ooc post recently and it says they recently added a new mall and even a small airport. ... Man I really need to dedicate important Radiant buildings to memory or something.

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O.o
an AIRPORT? to be able to support one of those we'd need to be a CITY. my mental image of the scale of this place was WAYYYYYYYYY off.

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Nah. Could be a small municipal airport with 1 runway and some hangars for single or dual prop planes. Small towns can have small strip malls as well with local businesses instead of a larger mall with chains. Doesn't rule out needing to go out of town to find a bigger store with better selections and also doesn't rule out being able to go to "the mall".

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Also, a little thing I noticed, SeanWolf. The conversion of pet years to human years is 1:3.5, so if he's the equivalent of 36 years old, he'd be a bit over 10 years old.

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Also, a little thing I noticed, SeanWolf. The conversion of pet years to human years is 1:3.5, so if he's the equivalent of 36 years old, he'd be a bit over 10 years old.

OK, so the site I used to get what I got lied. Thanks for the heads up!

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Animals age a bit differently in the Housepets! universe than they do in real life. Most animals live considerably longer.

Mice and other small mammals age twice as fast as the larger animals though.

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not so much lied as the HPU just has longer lifespans than IRL

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not so much lied as the HPU just has longer lifespans than IRL

Ok. Still, my math was off (Math was never my strongest suit in school hehe).

EDIT: Just did a minor tweak to my last post as I felt that the original one gave a bit too much away.

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So I read through the past pages and I'm wondering: What's the current story line at the moment?

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Story? the old GM was never around, so we just kinda always improvised. even after it switched to Neon, i don't think we ever really stopped.

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What Buster said. It's always been going with the flow, while I do have an idea or two they wouldn't be put into effect for quite some time and need to be ironed out more. The story and stories so far are just the characters and where their interactions take them.

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What Buster said. It's always been going with the flow, while I do have an idea or two they wouldn't be put into effect for quite some time and need to be ironed out more. The story and stories so far are just the characters and where their interactions take them.

Ah OK. Just wanted to be sure (I have an idea for one myself, but I rather wait to do that once my guy is fleshed out a bit more...and once I get my RPing grove back hehe).

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