HPU?: Apollo City OOC

MrNeonShot · Post by **MrNeonShot** » Thu Sep 19, 2013 4:32 pm

Cool!

MrNeonShot · Post by **MrNeonShot** » Thu Sep 19, 2013 10:23 pm

Soo many jokes that aren't allowed to be told.
I do think the plug in her rear is a bit much, and standard ani-droids have plus and ports in their heads (as used by Rosie).

I do seriously think the plug is a bit risque, but thats because I'm dirty minded (public school).
Sorry.

Esper · Post by **Esper** » Thu Sep 19, 2013 10:26 pm

MrNeonShot wrote:Soo many jokes that aren't allowed to be told.
I do think the plug in her rear is a bit much, and standard ani-droids have plus and ports in their heads (as used by Rosie).

I do seriously think the plug is a bit risque, but thats because I'm dirty minded (public school).
Sorry.

I do believe the port is in the tip of the tail, if that makes it less dirty

Also: I bet a port would take up most of a rat's head, like he'd have to plug a USB into his entire forehead, which would look silly (?)

MrNeonShot · Post by **MrNeonShot** » Thu Sep 19, 2013 10:30 pm

Meh... I think it should be changed.
Sorry, but I'm pretty sure the head plugs are standard, and in fact, the old version.
e.g in ARGO, Lilly has a wifi chip, Eo has a cord.

Half of the book is on Deviant Art. I highly suggest reading it.

Esper · Post by **Esper** » Thu Sep 19, 2013 10:31 pm

MrNeonShot wrote:Meh... I think it should be changed.
Sorry, but I'm pretty sure the head plugs are standard, and in fact, the old version.
e.g in ARGO, Lilly has a wifi chip, Eo has a cord.

Didn't read ARGO. Still seems like it would take up an inordinate amount of space on such a small body. Like, most standard sized ports would kinda just be a gaping hole in the back of Cauruleus' skull module, unless it had some sort of cover

Also: It's up to Hlaoroo to edit it

Also also: Sorry for being difficult, I'm just having a hard time fitting that into a character model... So so so sorry

Post by **Hlaoroo** » Thu Sep 19, 2013 10:41 pm

0.o Sorry, that was not my intention! I meant the tip of the tail. She unscrewed the tip of the tail. Get your minds out of the gutter, guys!

I didn't know about the head though. I just thought it would be more natural to just plug your tail into something than your head.

Did you want it changed, Neon?

Where would the port in the head be, exactly?

MrNeonShot · Post by **MrNeonShot** » Fri Sep 20, 2013 11:12 am

I'm pretty sure the back of the head.
But, I'm also thinking between the shoulder blades, because Eo had to open Lilly's head to fix her. either of those.

Esper- I hadn't thought about the size difference on blue.
Anyways, He would probably have a mini usb port, or an adapter.

I do highly recommend reading ARGO, even if it's just the half on deviantArt.

Dang virus going around came to me. Stuck at home.

Post by **Hlaoroo** » Fri Sep 20, 2013 12:01 pm

Alright, I'll change it then.

Would they still use USB ports that far in the future though? Or would they have something better?

Esper · Post by **Esper** » Fri Sep 20, 2013 2:00 pm

On the shoulder blades? Think that would take up much less space, may I go with that one?

Get well soon!

I'll try to get around to reading it if I can find my time!

MrNeonShot · Post by **MrNeonShot** » Fri Sep 20, 2013 3:35 pm

Maybe. Since they have wifi, I just decided we could stick with USB.
Oh, Vsauce did this video about who owns the moon.
I suggest watching that as well.

I want to add a storyline about it in Apollo City soon.
Robin talking about the moon process and stuff, I'll figure it out.
p.s. the only reason I didn't add a link is because I'm on my xbox.

MrNeonShot · Post by **MrNeonShot** » Sat Sep 21, 2013 5:51 pm

ARGO Part One on deviantART
ARGO Part Two on deviantART
ARGO Part Three on deviantART
ARGO Part Four on deviantART
You can read and buy the full version on kindle fire, or maybe even just the regular kindle. (if you have one).

A Sequel should be coming soon! I'm so excited!

kurowolfe · Post by **kurowolfe** » Sun Sep 22, 2013 10:14 am

I've already posted in the Main OOC thread, but I want to say that I will not be able to post for a while. To Neon, if need be, you can take control of both Ashe and John for me, to get the Moon Base arc going.

The Other Dog · Post by **The Other Dog** » Sun Sep 22, 2013 10:16 am

I'm just going to ask again so I don't do anything wrong,
how soon would Polubius go to his home? And how would he get there?

MrNeonShot · Post by **MrNeonShot** » Sun Sep 22, 2013 2:16 pm

Is he on the moon base?
You can show his process of registering, and waiting...
I would suggest joining me and kuro in our attempts to rescue Rosie, but your posting speed might not work out.
If he is already on Apollo, you can have him go to crystaline's shop to have repairs done,
Meet up with Kelly and C.
Or just chill in the park until someone finds you.

Kurowolfe- if you want me to, I will, then if your not back in time, I'll send you the rest of the story.
Or you could just review it when you get back.
But, I won't control if you don't want me to.

The Moon Howler · Post by **The Moon Howler** » Mon Sep 23, 2013 11:58 am

MrNeonShot wrote: Or just chill in the park until someone finds you.

Bad Idea. Polaris is waiting to be found for half a page and more

MrNeonShot · Post by **MrNeonShot** » Mon Sep 23, 2013 4:57 pm

He is hiding.
Polaris can probably find Kelly and C.

The Moon Howler · Post by **The Moon Howler** » Tue Sep 24, 2013 1:47 am

Polaris is currently exercising in the park

kurowolfe · Post by **kurowolfe** » Tue Sep 24, 2013 5:14 am

Ok, everything's sorted, at least for now. So I think I can post again.

MrNeonShot · Post by **MrNeonShot** » Tue Sep 24, 2013 3:16 pm

kuro- glad to see you back!
TMH- in a quiet corner, but I guess your right.
But I wouldn't interupt someone while they are training.
I think Polaris should find Kelly and C. But that is your call.

Esper · Post by **Esper** » Wed Sep 25, 2013 7:41 pm

Hate to say it guys, but my internet is being taken down for a while... So I'll be gone for who know how long, but within a month I hope

Post by **Hlaoroo** » Wed Sep 25, 2013 8:15 pm

Uh oh. Best of luck while you're away! Hope you're back soon!

MrNeonShot · Post by **MrNeonShot** » Wed Sep 25, 2013 9:45 pm

Ok, see you later, Esper.
Good luck with your internet.

Post by **Hlaoroo** » Fri Sep 27, 2013 11:51 am

Do I need to make a sheet for Kelly's owner at all?

I'll have Kelly stumble upon Polaris now. Esper gave me permission to send Caeruleus home before he left, by the way.

MrNeonShot · Post by **MrNeonShot** » Fri Sep 27, 2013 3:18 pm

It doesn't have to be much of a sheet, but yeah. Owners don't have stats, though.

The Moon Howler · Post by **The Moon Howler** » Fri Sep 27, 2013 6:34 pm

Oh my god! Polaris was noticed!

MrNeonShot wrote:It doesn't have to be much of a sheet, but yeah. Owners don't have stats, though.

Listen to MrNeonShot and don't do my mistake, Hlaoroo

Legotron123 · Post by **Legotron123** » Fri Sep 27, 2013 6:53 pm

Right now I'm just waiting for a couple more of the people at the "Noah fainting" scene to post before I post.

The Other Dog · Post by **The Other Dog** » Fri Sep 27, 2013 9:35 pm

MrNeonShot wrote:Is he on the moon base?
You can show his process of registering, and waiting...
I would suggest joining me and kuro in our attempts to rescue Rosie, but your posting speed might not work out.
If he is already on Apollo, you can have him go to crystaline's shop to have repairs done,
Meet up with Kelly and C.
Or just chill in the park until someone finds you.

Kurowolfe- if you want me to, I will, then if your not back in time, I'll send you the rest of the story.
Or you could just review it when you get back.
But, I won't control if you don't want me to.

He is on the Moon Base, and I'll do just that.
I'l try to post at least once a day, if I'm not able to I'll just say he dropped out and decided to so something else.

Post by **Hlaoroo** » Sat Sep 28, 2013 4:14 am

The Moon Howler wrote:Oh my god! Polaris was noticed!

Well... He wasn't, actually. Not until it was too late.

The Moon Howler wrote:
MrNeonShot wrote:It doesn't have to be much of a sheet, but yeah. Owners don't have stats, though.
Listen to MrNeonShot and don't do my mistake, Hlaoroo

So you did give your owners stats? Or is there another mistake I should be aware of?

Name: Johannes Doyle.
Species: Human
Info: JD, as his friends call him, is a wealthy entrepreneur with an eye for the dramatic arts and an ear for quality music. Having played in an incredibly popular boy band called "The Bugs" he had formed an acting and music school used the proceeds to gradually by a chain of theatres and several acting/music troupes which he rotates through them in a variety of shows. Having heard about the new city on the moon, he'd decided that it was an excellent opportunity to branch out and so had bought a theatre in Apollo City and had modified it to have a barracks for the droids and a comfortable residential area for students of the school and for the troupes which would now be permanently based at his theatre (since space-travel was a bit cost-prohibitive). He has also travelled up to the moon as he had grown tired of life on Earth and had decided that he wanted a change of pace. He has a team of 8 droids at the moon-based theatre who are ushers, concession stand workers, janitors and ticket salesdroids according to their modifications. The troupe is formed of a combination of humans, pets, cypets and droids. There are currently no serpientes (did I spell that right) on staff, not because JD is biased in any way but because he simply hadn't had any of them apply for the job. He also rents the theatre out for community members to use for their own productions or events. There are two main auditoriums in the theatre, each with their own stage and balcony. One of them is a typical theatre with an angled, stepped floor leading down to the stage for maximum visibility and the other has a flat, wooden floor in front of the raised stage which can be covered with tables and/or chairs for functions or which can be used as a dancefloor. Both auditoriums can be accessed through one centrally placed foyer. The wing containing the barracks and residential areas is also accessible from this foyer, resulting in the building having a large T shape.
JD himself is an average looking human, slightly tall and lanky, with jet black hair biginning to be flecked with bits of grey (which he still wears in a mullet) and ice-blue eyes. He's in his late 40's, fit as a fiddle, and can often be seen on stage alongside his troupe, showing and helping them with the choreography, stage directions and cues. He's quite friendly and charismatic and he excels as a director and business manager, having been both the front man and the manager for "The Bugs". Although the band is fairly old and has disbanded many years ago, he still finds people often recognise him and want his autograph and a photo and he's happy to oblige. He is, however, very firm-willed and although this can be useful in his business transactions and as a director, it can make him appear slightly egotistic in conversation. Despite this, however, his troupe and his droids love and respect him, and his natural optimism which inspired many of his songs ("Hey Joy", "Live and Let's Dance", and "Health") means that he's confident that his new theatre and school will be a success.

OK, so that turned into a lot more about the theatre itself than about JD

, but anyway, what do you think?

MrNeonShot · Post by **MrNeonShot** » Sat Sep 28, 2013 4:55 pm

Well, the band name sounds like something from the 70's (wink wink),
Which is a long way from the time they are now.
Although it is your choice to stick with the name, I recommend something closer to a 2010 theme, such as one direction, third emblem, Three doors down, ect.
Something with a long name, but can be abbreviated, but that is your choice.
Other than that, it looks great!

Post by **Hlaoroo** » Sun Sep 29, 2013 1:39 am

What year are we set in?

MrNeonShot · Post by **MrNeonShot** » Sun Sep 29, 2013 2:22 pm

considering long term space survival is just new here, and the fact that America and "Russia" have just finished fighting.
Russia used chemical warfare, which is illegal.
A.I programming is actually pretty far, and robotics are pretty far to.
I guess we could say... 2085?

Post by **Hlaoroo** » Mon Sep 30, 2013 1:19 am

Shall we say the band is from the 2070s then?

MrNeonShot · Post by **MrNeonShot** » Mon Sep 30, 2013 8:13 pm

... That totally works...

Esper · Post by **Esper** » Wed Oct 02, 2013 2:42 pm

I'm back guys! What'd I miss?

MrNeonShot · Post by **MrNeonShot** » Wed Oct 02, 2013 9:17 pm

Kelly met up with Polaris.
Noah's owner has just arrived.
Wealthy and Ashe think they set off the alarms in the Moon Base,
But in reality, the terrorists are working on arming bombs.
That's about it, until I read some more.

Post by **Hlaoroo** » Thu Oct 03, 2013 1:41 am

I sent Caeruleus back home so you can bring him out again whenever you're ready.

Legotron123 · Post by **Legotron123** » Thu Oct 03, 2013 7:01 am

So i was wondering, is twitter still around in this future? Or is there some equivalent social media site?

MrNeonShot · Post by **MrNeonShot** » Thu Oct 03, 2013 6:00 pm

I think there would be an equivalent.
I'm thinking, since simple titles are the thing here, it should be called
"Friendzone". It has everything from vine videos, to youtube videos, to updating statuses.
It's all the social networking combined.

Post by **Hlaoroo** » Fri Oct 04, 2013 12:51 am

... So basically an iPad with a couple of apps.

MrNeonShot · Post by **MrNeonShot** » Fri Oct 04, 2013 10:06 am

Except its all the apps rolled into one.
And it's on a website.
Apple is focusing on appliances now as well as its tablets.
It could be a refrigerator.