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Title Text: dream powers, activate! form of, someone who is very sorry

At least play along with the emotional rescue attempt, Breel.

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I still side with Keene over Tarot because while he's a jerk and he did do a lot of things wrong, he's been doing this for the right reasons even if it was the wrong way.


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At least Keene is sorry about everything.

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Aaawwww GO KEENE! Maybe the chains can... melt *wink*



I meant with the saliva of lil’ demon

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Title Text: dream powers, activate! form of, someone who is very sorry

shape of, a forgiving angel

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RandomGeekNamedBrent Wrote:
D-Rock Wrote:
Title Text: dream powers, activate! form of, someone who is very sorry

shape of, a forgiving angel

This reminds me, never did watch Wonder Twins shows. My dad remembers them, though.

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Poor Kneene :(


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Leave it to Keene to make this all about himself. :roll:

I just had an interesting thought.

When Keene met his mother in Heaven, it was noted that her stay there had mellowed her out and improved her as a ferret. I imagine this is the same case with Breel, which leads to the question, what flaws of character did Breel have while he was still alive, that he has since managed to smooth out in his time in Heaven? What sorts of mistakes did he make back then?

I guess the fact that he died from being hit by a train is a hint. He had to have been doing something reckless and very stupid. In the HP universe, even wild animals are smart enough to know about the dangers of vehicles, so Breel should have known better.


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Looks like Keene learned a lesson, now let's hope he will rescue Breel :mrgreen:

Aside from that, I must say I like the way the first panel was drawn, the angle is well done :D


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Post Re: 2018/03/02 - Teeth And Ambition
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Aaawwww GO KEENE! Maybe the chains can... melt *wink*



I meant with the saliva of lil’ demon


Demon Ex Machina?

Love and sorry are really related;
both things that, in life, he slated.
He never gave into them in life;
all they were good for was strife.
It lends no strength to the arm
even when close to Breels’ charm;
He just can’t break the links -
or is that just what he thinks?
The hell is of his own making;
designed on rules he’s now breaking.
Perhaps he can win if he’ll find
a way to think and change his mind...

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Post Re: 2018/03/02 - Teeth And Ambition
Now that I think about it, the fact that Breel seems to be just...resigned to his fate is almost worse than the more blatantly horrifying scenarios I was initially expecting. Just how long has he been here?


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Post Re: 2018/03/02 - Teeth And Ambition
Awwww Keene :)
That is the point. You're not willing to sacrifice Breel for your dream!
Wait... Is he crying because of him not wanting to sacrifice anyone or anything, or because he can't reach his dream? Or because this chain is so dang hard to break?


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Post Re: 2018/03/02 - Teeth And Ambition
And then Keene remembers everything he learned about Hell-chains from his time in the forge and knows how to open a link.


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No hug ..... ?


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Post Re: 2018/03/02 - Teeth And Ambition
And then it turns out that you can just unscrew the bracket holding it to the ground.

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And then it turns out that you can just unscrew the bracket holding it to the ground.
Or better yet, we do a Roger Rabbit-esque
"...you could've taken your hand out at any time?"
"Not at any time, only when it was funny!"

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Post Re: 2018/03/02 - Teeth And Ambition
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Wait... Is he crying because of him not wanting to sacrifice anyone or anything, or because he can't reach his dream? Or because this chain is so dang hard to break?


I think he's crying because saying it out loud really hit home for him that his desire for an easy way to accomplish his dream almost lost Breel forever.


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I guess when one realizes he deserves to do penance, it's easier to accept.

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Post Re: 2018/03/02 - Teeth And Ambition
There is nobility to this, though I do wonder if Keene would be as contrite were it that somebody with whom he didn't share such an emotional connection had been the one to suffer for this gambit of his. I hope so!

But after seeing that line, 'any sacrifice,' it did make me ponder just where the cut-off lingers. It rings a little ruthless, which I hope is just big talk that stems from a simple ignorance of the fact.

The road to hell Pandemonium has quite literally been paved by good intentions. :P


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Post Re: 2018/03/02 - Teeth And Ambition
It was already too late to attempt to repair your big mistake, Keene, but at least, now you realize that you have to pay for it... Break a chain isn't so easy. ;) Indeed, Keene, finally you got it. When did you make a sacrifice before? :P Uhm, what about use that grindstone to break the chain rings? :)

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the solution is right in front of them though...
metals break down from solvents that cant even etch glass let alone melt it, to say nothing of the ones that can...

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Keene: "Can you melt these chains?"

Demon: "Need a new contract!"

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Post Re: 2018/03/02 - Teeth And Ambition
Argent Wrote:
Keene: "Can you melt these chains?"

Demon: "Need a new contract!"


lol I can imagine that happening :lol:


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On reflection:

Keene: "I'm not leaving without Breel and you don't get to leave until I do..."

Demon: *Munch munch* "Tasty!"

Breel: "Contract? What do you mean it's leaving with us?"

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Would be funny if Keene suddenly started signing all of hell's demon's contracts in order to get Breel out of that chain... and then the Milton's mansion was literally run by the forces of hell itself.

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Would be funny if Keene suddenly started signing all of hell's demon's contracts in order to get Breel out of that chain... and then the Milton's mansion was literally run by the forces of hell itself.

"Jeeves, I need to de-stress. Tell anyone looking for me I'll be in the pool"
"But suh, it's on fire"
"The... pool is on fire?"
"yes, suh, you told your demons they could, uh... 'use' it"

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Post Re: 2018/03/02 - Teeth And Ambition
....think you'll get a demon past Pandemonium Custom's Authority? Wonder who Eudoant's gonna be more angry with...Keene or the little dino-demon?


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Frank Wrote:
GameCobra Wrote:
Would be funny if Keene suddenly started signing all of hell's demon's contracts in order to get Breel out of that chain... and then the Milton's mansion was literally run by the forces of hell itself.

"Jeeves, I need to de-stress. Tell anyone looking for me I'll be in the pool"
"But suh, it's on fire"
"The... pool is on fire?"
"yes, suh, you told your demons they could, uh... 'use' it"
"How did they set fire to a pool full of marbles?"
"Pit had it filled with marshmallows and chocolate sauce again."
"What, no graham crackers?"

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Still no hug ..... ?


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