Housepets!

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I feel sorry for Joey, he doesn't have many friends and the ones he does have are not alright in the head sometimes. It seems to run in the family for some reason.

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Sorry that it has been a while but this next chapter is double in length and I've added some breadcrumbs to thicken the plot 8-) Things are happening and Avalon Hills will soon have some interesting times... Now I present to you the next chapter also to review Peanut, Grape, Pete, Fox, King, Dragon,...

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It was so important that Mr. Milton didn't trust the work to humans... What so was he a half animal hybrid then?

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Is "backyard" in a figurative sense meaning the woods that they presumably may own? or did they move it to their actual back yard after Pete escaped? I'm thinking they own the woods as well. Edit: The more important thing is why did Mr. Milton move it and where did he Move it from? I'm gu...

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shiny smiling ferrets all around
shiny smiling ferrets all around...
Keene looks rather cute like that

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*sudden realization* could it really be that simple? Could Karishad be related to a certain Great trickster? If so I don't know what to think

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oh dear now's the time to say it.
This is blasphemy, this is madness.

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Did you rush through this update? Seems like there are more spelling and grammar issues than normal. Fox and King show up now, eh? Lime and King will make good friends, I am sure. Fox just can't tell smaller breeds apart. Poor Lime. Then would you kindly point out the issues? I can't edit the story...

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All Hicks and No Corners makes Keene a Dull Boy.

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I have just one question, how did Fox and King get to the park in Avalon Hills? Also Great job so far i like your story a lot. I can't remember if the dog park was exclusive to Babylon Garden Pets, if so my explanation is that it was a facility sharing agreement between the two neighborhoods. Does ...

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The Pete to the left is more menacing because he doesn't look menacing. Sometimes the most dangerous things are those that give you no reason to suspect anything.

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Lime must looks so cute! We need a drawing of that.... :D Great story! Can't wait for the next part! I take very long when I try to draw something so don't hold your breath but I'll try. And here's what you want the Summer's begun and some pets have some fun. This is the first time that I'm actuall...

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KJOokami wrote:That would explain the hand-made dreidel that's been spinning non-stop on the nightstand by my bed for the last 50 weeks or so.

Hmm...

*knocks over dreidel* no violating the laws of physics for you good sir

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Pete you so greedy not only bad enough that you have Fox's watch but now you want King's?
Are you trying to munchkin or something?

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The more I see of Tiger the more I feel bad for him. Actually he's more relatable than a particular franchised orange cat with a geeky owner in my opinion.

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Nice update. A wonderful little side adventure while you introduce the menacing Ramun. Wouldn't like to meet him in an alley. :lol: Biscuit makes a good villain because he is evil, I just know it! :twisted: Oh Ramun is scary in a different way as everybody will probably see later. As for Biscuit, y...

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These are the times you wish for multi-player so that the other guy would just hush.

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Why is every pet so talented!? Makes me feel inadequate next to them! :roll: Everybody has their strengths and weaknesses Cookie may have skill in architectural and structural art but more on that later in a hopefully humorous way. oooh I wonder who this mr trustee is also I love cookie's ability o...

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Bino getting with Duchess, I honestly don't know what to think, except that's it's utterly hilarious

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Real life is very very painful, I'll take the chance!

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I think it's the panicked way King says that he can't let go of the shovel that really brings forth how cute that panel is.

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It's amazing what eyes can do, now it looks like Res and Peanut are some senior citizens looking through photo albums of their younger days.

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Maybe that's the reason why Boris is so worried, he knows every time Duchess attempts to use the Love Whip, she gets whacked on the head thus causing her to lose her memory of using the Love Whip and thus the cycle continues.

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Next strip, Duchess wakes up in the ward that was named after Bino. She gets the idea that he's rich or famous and then goes after him.

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Wanderer wrote:
RootsofOrigin wrote:They give Peanut this suave look. Is it wrong that I'm lost in those eyes.
Quite so

How so?

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oh hey i just now realized something, i thought justacritic was talking about the north south east and west on a map star, but he meant just the star that points you to north so i'm going to go with the map one. You're talking about the compass rose right? Well I'm going with the symbol of the sun ...

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I think it might be an Inuit symbol for the northern pole star.

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Aww, that is sweet! Some nice stories there. Monty is the comic relief, right? He has to be. Hmmm, the Game, huh? Did you just make us all lose? :roll: It depends if you're playing, and kids don't turn out the torches and pitchforks. And now the next chapter. It was bright, sunny and an unseasonabl...

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its a great story, keep up the good work. I'll try my best but I have to get past the Christmas/Holiday chapter first and so here it is and things are coming to a head for some people. Anyway you'll get a view on how some pets spend their holidays. Snow fell upon the roads of Avalon Hills and light...

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When do you guys expect to have one of those Downfall scene rants applied to this particular strip. I mean they did it for when people thought Rick was turning Housepets into a full blown fantasy comic.

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Hmm... seems Avalon Hills is nothing but a deck of cards. Monty must have looked like a cheeto! :lol: And as for double posting, if it is an announcement, or a story update, it doesn't count as a violation of the double posting rule. You're going to explain that metaphor, there are a certain number...

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I take heart for you are the bulwark against any other person trying to lay claim to the title of GREATEST Housepets Fanfiction Evar. Then we little people who go around trying to tell our little stories are protected from wood trolls and witches' spells, ...wait wait I got you mixed up with garden ...

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sean21 wrote:
RockstarRaccoon wrote:Why doesn't she just date Boris?
i think its because he's not a pure breed.

Hah and pure breeds are at risk for a lot more health problems than a mutt. Take That Eugenics and useless show breeding

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The willies I have them because of Duchess. The fact of her national affiliation, appearance, name ,combined with the ominous "love whip" gives me a rather disturbing fear for King.

That said, she's completely missing the point of why she lost in the first place

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Well, okay, I might have overreacted a little. But it does happen over and over again. So far, we've seen or heard about King/Joel making choices that have resulted in him landing in jail, locked in a pet carrier, pinned to floor by dogs while almost having part of his soul destroyed, and now incur...

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Nice little scene there. I guess that movie would be a lot sadder in Live action, which is what I assume it would be in a world of talking animals... Movie Nights are always fun. Can't wait for the next update! Ask and you shall receive, but I would like to receive comments please, not only to let ...

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Guys, I don't even see anything wrong with it. x3 *hugs Rick* wierdo :P You guys are jerks well don't draw dogs that look like serial killers then! I think its because that Rick drew King way too cute and the resulting Out of Character Moment from him unsettled some people (including me when I thin...

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rickgriffin wrote:You guys are jerks

Yes but we're your jerks and hopefully we have hearts of gold... or maybe not because gold is heavy and we'll have to deal with thieves in this economy.

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Unless there's a distant finale or what if crystal ball thing going on. But anyway, I thought it looked cute until I noticed the face. It seems like it would look better on a normal husky dog's head

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Duchess is proving what they say about beauty. King, do you have any integrity or honor, really? :( You're going along with all of this and it's probably not worth it! This may be why you've always been a loser: you don't know how to make GOOD choices. :( Then by that logic when it comes time for h...

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