Housepets!

Hello guys and gals! Welcome to the third installment of the Sparks' Beginning ! I just want to say thanks for taking the time and reading my little fanfic that I conjured up. I really appreciate it! :D Now, the fic. Enjoy! ************************************************************************ - H...

Wow, Great job. I was wondering, for the Halloween party, if I could make a suggestion. Ok, so during the Halloween party, Bino becomes jealous of Sparky's talent and decides to sabotage the DJ booth. Then Fox finds out what happened and beats the living crap out of Bino. You can handle all of the ...

Working on some art for the new girl. I'm still having trouble drawing cats! >:I

Dat short joke doh.

Glad that guy got punched. Go Team King!

This is about to get interesting! SO MUCH AWESOME.

Wow. That was a LOOONNNGGG read. I can't believe that I read everything in about 3 days. Love Lucky and Felix, Peanut and Grape (Kittens too), and King and Bailey btw. Also, Val, you are such a great writer. You have effectively made me cry during the WHOLE fan fic 5 times. I hate you, but love you...

Wow. That was a LOOONNNGGG read. I can't believe that I read everything in about 3 days. Love Lucky and Felix, Peanut and Grape (Kittens too), and King and Bailey btw. Also, Val, you are such a great writer. You have effectively made me cry during the WHOLE fan fic 5 times. I hate you, but love you...

Wow. That was a LOOONNNGGG read. I can't believe that I read everything in about 3 days. Love Lucky and Felix, Peanut and Grape (Kittens too), and King and Bailey btw. Also, Val, you are such a great writer. You have effectively made me cry during the WHOLE fan fic 5 times. I hate you, but love you ...

EDIT : PART THREE COMPLETE!

Could someone delete this post? There's no option for me... XP

Great to hear Saturn! I'm happy to hear that you're enjoying the story so far. Yeah, Fox is great friend.

Updates! Woo! Things Completed: - Part 2 Things To Do: - Reconstruct the Story for Part One - Restart Part One - Edit, Revise, and Reread Part One - Repost Part One (Just Replace it or Create a New Post. Prob just Replace.) - Start and Complete the Story Notes for Part 3 - Start Part 3 - Edit, Revis...

- Housepets! Home Stories - Sparks’ Beginning- = Chapter 2 - The Move= The eyes of the Shepsky open as he lays down in his bed. His toes wiggle about as his legs stretch from inside the safety of the bed sheets, as a deep inhale and exhale escapes his muzzle. Ugh... I don’t wanna get up. So… lazy… T...

Maybe a little bit of critique as well. :P Muahahaha!!! You're doom is at hand! :twisted: *Ahem* I just wanted to note that it can really throw a reader around when you keep switching tenses. Try to narrate the story either in the past tense or present tense, else it gets a little whiplashy. ;) I s...

A little update to my progress of the story: - Part 2 Story Notes COMPLETE! FINALLY. - Title Made for Pt. 2 - Part 2's Story is complete! (3:08 AM, 7/24/14) To-do: - Rewrite Part One. I know it could be a lot better. - Finalize what characters fit where, when will they be introduced, and small/impro...

A good thing to note is that I changed the age of Sparks by one year. I just found out about the amount of years compared to humans and dogs is about 3.5 years on average (In the Housepets! universe) so Sparks is now about 10 years old in dog years!

I wanted to post what I had so far so I could get the first part, or the origin of Sparks, finished so I could come up with ideas for the next story. Maybe a little bit of critique as well.

Thanks Saturn!

*(Updated Just about Monthly! Last update: A Pedal For Your Thoughts - Chapter 2; August 13th* --------------------- Welcome to Housepets! Home Stories [/i]! This fan fiction follows a new original character, Sparks Carlson, and his experiences as he and his family move to Babylon Gardens. Over firs...